This is the first time I am posting a story so I would like you to be honest with your reviews and tell me what I need to improve on.
I own nothing of Skyrim, but I do own any shouts that look like they are not from the game; any of the characters that are mentioned are of collaboration between me and the true author who asked me to post this for him.
The Elder Scrolls V – Skyrim
The luck of the Imperial
Chapter 1
Joe looked around nervously, looking at the trees and the scenery flashing before his eyes. He tried to escape, but couldn't, as his hands and feet where tied up. He was in a carriage, being taken to an executioner square, in Falkenreath. He was for the chop.
He was not alone. there where three other men in the carriage with him.