Eliora: Ok so you want to know when I started writing well I'll tell you it was in 3rd grade and the original title was "Flying" and it was a DBZ story about Bra and wanting to fly.
Kurama: Please cut her some slack she was only 9 and she had never written one before so her you go! Disclaimer: she dose not own the characters but she dose own the idea.
"Flying"
One day a girl named Bra was playing in the ocean at Ocean City. While she was playing she thought about flying so she went to her older brother Trunks and her older sister Videl and said "No!" So she went to her dad. He said "No!" So she went to her friend Goten he said "No!" So she went to Goten's brother Gohan. He said "No!" So she went to one more place if she did not learn how to fly she would train and train until she could fly. She went to Number 18, and asked if Miss. 18 would teach her how to fly and Miss.18 said "Fine." They went to a field and they began to teach Bra how to fly. In 10 days she knew how to fly!
Kurama: OoO that was ummm well we all have to start somewhere right?
Eliroa: I know it sucks but hey you can't get more predictable then that. And I just typed what I had written down on the rough draft I didn't get my finale back. Excuse me…
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