2/15/2014: Hey! I just found out this story of mine got put in a community called "Reportable Lemons". I'm not complaining, because it's a compliment that someone considered this story 'dirty' enough to need reviewing. Though actually, a thought occurs: If you're looking for dirty stories, could you not use this community to find them? Either way, a little self 'pat on the back' to me and thanks to the person who runs the community for giving me such an honor.
12/28/2014: Went back through and edited a few things. Mistakes, certain lines of dialogue. Et cetera. Will probably have to go through again just in case.