Please note that this is my first story and later on it will change …
Please review my writing and tell me what you think!!!!! =)
I own all my influencing to Stephenie Meyer
Chapter 1
There was nothing but forest around me. I was alone in the woods, until suddenly there was something. A smell.... It was a strange, bittersweet smell.... Then suddenly it was right in front of me as plain as the blue sky. The smell came from the most handsome young man I had never seen in my life. He was looking at me like he'd known me sense I was born, although he looked as if he were a few years younger than me- and I'm nineteen.
The young man spoke, his voice smooth and appealing
"Hello Jasmine Solis," he said, and introduced himself as Victor Lynly.
He told me he wasn't from around here, and that he was just passing through. All I could think about was how he knew my name, and wonder why he was telling me this. It's not like I was going to be seeing him again.... right?
Then it happened without warning. All I felt was something like a knife cutting my neck, and then there was a burning sensation swallowing me up. All I could register was the heat.... The pain that it caused me to breathe.... To move at all. It was if I was being burned alive. No, I would take being burned alive over this any day. This excruciating pain I felt now consumed me. It swallowed me up in it's desire to destroy every functioning thing in my body. The only thing I could somewhat register was a horrible shrieking noise. I realized it was me belatedly, but through the pain I couldn't find it in me to care.
The flames were swarming my mouth, my throat, my arms.... And then finally my heart. The man knelt down and looked at me with a fierce grimace on his face.
"Shut up or I will kill you." I wanted to tell him to do it. To just kill me already. Surely it would be much better than this. But it hurt so badly I couldn't manage to make the words leave my mouth. All my brain could process was to scream- and scream like hell. All I thought for what felt like a lifetime was 'My God when will this end?!'
Then it finally did. It faded, but the fire in my heart became so intense I blacked out. The only thing I remembered was the last pathetic beats of my human heart as I became something more. Something else.
When it stopped I got up from the now soggy forest floor. My guess is that it had rained but I hadn't noticed because I was in so much pain. Everything about me felt so different. As soon as I opened my eyes its like I had better than 20/20 vision it was like I had super vision but better. I could smell what to me smelled like burgers and fries at some burger joint, but I knew there wasn't one for at least 10 miles from were I was. The smell was shockingly unappealing, and made me want to gag at the smell.
Then I felt the sudden urge to run out of the woods. So I did. It felt like I was 300 times faster then usual. I felt good. Energized. I stopped when I realized that I wasn't breathing but I didn't feel like I was holding my breath. Then I suddenly thought about the mysterious man Victor. I wondered where he was, and what he had done to me, so I started to look around. Then suddenly I turned once more and he was there right in front of my face, just like the first time.
"Hello Jasmine," he said to me "How do you feel?"
I simply replied "Fine" but then my curiosity go the best of me, and I blurted out the first question that came to mind. "Why can I run so fast and smell things so far away from me?"
"Trust me, you'll find you can do more than simply that." He replied calmly. Slowly, even. As if we had all the time in the world.
"What you mean by that?" I said.
"All in good time, Jasmine. Come with me." And with that we were flying back through the forest.