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Edward sat outside on a bench waiting for Bella, when a man suddenly walked up to him. The man looked dazed, and from his thought's Edward could tell he was looking for some drugs.
The man walked strait up to Edward. "Hey man," he said. "I wanna buy some drugs."
"I don't sell drugs," Edward replied.
"Sure you do man. I've seen the twilight movie man. You look just like a drug dealer."
Edward saw Robert Paterson in Edward's character flash through the druggy's mind. He was right; he did look like a drug dealer. "That's wasn't me." Edward insisted. "It was an actor pretending to be me. I don't sell drugs."
"Fine man," Said the druggy. "You're not the only dealer on the block." With that he sauntered off.
Edward sighed, and resumed waiting for Bella. Thinking to himself what a terrible movie twilight was. He was also wondering how much a drug dealer got paid.
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Since I only had one chapter up I guess in doesn't matter that I restarted. So I'm reworking the whole thing. Review please, and tell me what you think is wrong with the movie. Or something they did right. Flames are completely welcome.