hi everybody! this is my new poem for all you peeps who read my stuff. this Kai angst cos ithink it fits him

tell me what you think..? *looks hopfully...but on with the poem!!

broken wings from fallen angels

slightly,silently
he glides from the relms of fantasy
gasping,grasping
at the threads of world in his mind

breathing, breaking
the feathers of a fallen angel
falling, flying
unsuceedinly away from the pain

swiftly,sliding
away from the minds santuary
crying, craving
to banish the little sanity creepping into his mind

hating, hated
and banished from heavens above
condemed, confused
he wisehes to leave

admist this lies the feathers
of broken wings from fallen angels.