This first chapter is Kenshins thoughts, and the parenthisis is whats
going on around him. This is only the first chapter and the actual plot
will begin next chapter so if you want to know what happens I have to get
at least four reviews. K? Thanks.
It's amazing how short a split second can be. Yet it can be so long. So many things can occur in such a short amount of time. You could win a race, have an accadent, or accadently kill someone. Yes, it is truely amazing how it takes only a split second to know someones life has ended. So it is with me. Strange to think that me, Battousai, would have cared for the life of a single woman when I had killed so many people. But I did care, deeply. Wouldn't you care if you got all you needed to be happy, to have someone to care for and truely love, then have them taken away by your own hand? It would devistate anyone.
I remember thinking that when it happened. It wasn't too long ago. Not for me anyway. People have forgotten, but I know I never will. Often I have thought of joining her, but I decide otherwise thinking that something better would come into my life. It did. Kaoru is very dear to me and thats why past thoughts have come back to haunt me. First Tomoe, then Kaoru gets kidnapped and the past almost repeats itself. So many things have happened to her. So many times have I come close to loosing her. I am the reason as to why her life is at risk all the time. People haven't forgotten about my past, and I don't blame them with all the things I've done. It does seem hard to forget.
If I left this world would I be loosing her anyway? I would still be watching her right? She would be so sad though. I dont want her to cry. I don't want her to miss me. I know Yahiko would cry with Kaoru. He'll get over it quickly though. Sanousuke would panic at first but he wouldn't cry. They would certianly miss me. I dont want anyone to miss me in fact. I don't deserve to be cared for. After all I've done, I don't deserve to live. I suppose that in the long run it would be best if I died. Yes, my decition has been made. (Kenshin unsheathes his sword) I have to go before anyone else gets hurt.
It's funney, when I think back to all the people I've killed I had always wondered what it felt like. Now I will know what Tomoe and every other person before and after her felt. This sword will do no good though. The tip is blunt. I'd rather not cut my wrists. No, I want to feel what they felt. What she felt. (Searches dojo untill he finds a good sword and returns to his room.)
Funney, I didn't run into anyone. Not Kaoru or, anyone. It's best that way. This sword looks rather familiar.... no, hm.....yes, it is. Strange, I thought it had been gotten rid of. Well, I suppose not. (Hears someone enter the Dojo.) I'd better do it now. (Kenshin runs the sword through him and pulls it back out. White hot pain courses through him as blood seeps out through the wound. His vision starts to go blurry. he hears faint voices calling to him)
Kao....ru? No...i'm sorry Kaoru...i'm sorry. (All goes black)
The fact that the dojo was empty is importiant so if you want to know why...review. I dont mind flames as long as its constructive and not against the plot unless you have a better way for me to set it up. Otherwise I don't want to hear it. IT MUST BE CONSTRUCTIVE! Lots of things are coming up so.....REVIEW OR YOULL MISS OUT!!!!!!!!!!!
It's amazing how short a split second can be. Yet it can be so long. So many things can occur in such a short amount of time. You could win a race, have an accadent, or accadently kill someone. Yes, it is truely amazing how it takes only a split second to know someones life has ended. So it is with me. Strange to think that me, Battousai, would have cared for the life of a single woman when I had killed so many people. But I did care, deeply. Wouldn't you care if you got all you needed to be happy, to have someone to care for and truely love, then have them taken away by your own hand? It would devistate anyone.
I remember thinking that when it happened. It wasn't too long ago. Not for me anyway. People have forgotten, but I know I never will. Often I have thought of joining her, but I decide otherwise thinking that something better would come into my life. It did. Kaoru is very dear to me and thats why past thoughts have come back to haunt me. First Tomoe, then Kaoru gets kidnapped and the past almost repeats itself. So many things have happened to her. So many times have I come close to loosing her. I am the reason as to why her life is at risk all the time. People haven't forgotten about my past, and I don't blame them with all the things I've done. It does seem hard to forget.
If I left this world would I be loosing her anyway? I would still be watching her right? She would be so sad though. I dont want her to cry. I don't want her to miss me. I know Yahiko would cry with Kaoru. He'll get over it quickly though. Sanousuke would panic at first but he wouldn't cry. They would certianly miss me. I dont want anyone to miss me in fact. I don't deserve to be cared for. After all I've done, I don't deserve to live. I suppose that in the long run it would be best if I died. Yes, my decition has been made. (Kenshin unsheathes his sword) I have to go before anyone else gets hurt.
It's funney, when I think back to all the people I've killed I had always wondered what it felt like. Now I will know what Tomoe and every other person before and after her felt. This sword will do no good though. The tip is blunt. I'd rather not cut my wrists. No, I want to feel what they felt. What she felt. (Searches dojo untill he finds a good sword and returns to his room.)
Funney, I didn't run into anyone. Not Kaoru or, anyone. It's best that way. This sword looks rather familiar.... no, hm.....yes, it is. Strange, I thought it had been gotten rid of. Well, I suppose not. (Hears someone enter the Dojo.) I'd better do it now. (Kenshin runs the sword through him and pulls it back out. White hot pain courses through him as blood seeps out through the wound. His vision starts to go blurry. he hears faint voices calling to him)
Kao....ru? No...i'm sorry Kaoru...i'm sorry. (All goes black)
The fact that the dojo was empty is importiant so if you want to know why...review. I dont mind flames as long as its constructive and not against the plot unless you have a better way for me to set it up. Otherwise I don't want to hear it. IT MUST BE CONSTRUCTIVE! Lots of things are coming up so.....REVIEW OR YOULL MISS OUT!!!!!!!!!!!