A.N.- I just thought this up after watching Supernatural season 1 and if you guys don't like it, then I could just take it down. I hope I don't have too. I love Supernatural and I would like to continue this because I have never written a story about this. See you at the bottom.

A.N.R.(Revised)- This has now been revised. This chapter had been bugging me for a while so I sat down and fixed it. I hope you all will like this revised version better than what I had before. Also I'm fixing all of my earlier chapters not just this one.


In two small but relatively nice homes, lived two families of four. Both houses, housed, two young families just starting to grow. The two families had known each other for years long before they were married. The names are Winchester and Irving.

John Winchester had lived in Lawrence, Kansas all his life. He met his wife, Mary, at the age of 18 or 19 but neither of them liked one another because both thought they were too good for each other. That is until about a year or two later, when they suddenly fell in love and wanted to get a house.

Lloyd Ivring hadn't lived in Lawrence for very long. He had moved there after his parents died a few years prior. When he first met his wife, Lillian, she was an angry, grief ridden girl, who had lost everything in a single night. But against all odds, they had fallen in love right away and they too wanted a house.

Now the Winchester family wanted to get a car. Mary wanted to get a van, to keep the family they wanted someday safe, however, due to a very persuasive friend, he pick a 1967 Chevy Impala in black.

However, Lillian wanted a truck but due to this same friend, Lloyd bought the same 1967 Chevy Impala in black as well. There happened to be two Impalas.

As for the house, John bought a nice little house oddly enough next to Lloyd's house. The house was a second story home with two three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a den, and a big kitchen.

Now Lloyds was a little different. His house had four bedroom, three bathroom, a den, a kitchen, a dining room, and a basement.


John, a marine, had just returned home after a hard day at work. It was 1983, six months after Sam was born, Dean was four years old. Mary wanted to get ready for bed, so she went back into Sam's nursery, grabbed Sam from the crib and sat down beginning to feed him. A short time later, Mary went and grabbed Dean, so he could say goodnight to his little brother. She walked in and placed Dean on the ground as she told him,

"Come on, let's say goodnight to your brother." then Dean ran up to the crib and said,

"Night Sam." while kissing his forehead.


John walked inside, placed his keys, and jacket on the floor because he was too tired to place them where they were supposed to go. He then began to climb the stairs when he heard Mary's voice up stairs. John happened to appear in the doorway just as Dean was saying goodnight to his youngest son, Sam. John watched his wife place a kiss on Sam's forehead and heard her say,

"Good night, love." That's when John spoke up,

"Hey Dean." Dean turned around, saw his father and ran straight up to him yelling,

"Daddy!" and John bent to pick him up while saying,

"Hey, buddy. Aw. So what do you think? You think Sammy's ready to toss around a football?" Dean shook his head then told his father,

"No, Daddy." John agreed but in a sarcastic voice. Mary turned and walked towards John and Dean asking,

"You got him?" John nodded before answering her,

"I got him." Before he placed Dean to bed, John looked at Sam babbling in his crib while Mary left the room. He smiled while whispering,

"Sweet dreams, Sam." Sam still babbling, looked over just as John took Dean out of the room and shutting off the light.


Meanwhile in the house next door, Lloyd too was just getting home from a very hard day of work. He walked into his home dropped off his keys in the holder and hug his coat on the hook. He heard his wife upstairs and went to join her.

Lillian was holding her oldest daughter in her arms as they made their way to the baby's room. Lillian earlier had placed her youngest to bed. She walked in and told her oldest,

"Here Lydia, go say goodnight to your sister." Then set her down. Lydia walked over to the crib and leaned over to kiss her little sister while saying,

"Night, Haywey." then their mother, Lillian leaned down and whispered,

"Good night, sweetheart. My dear, Hayley." then kissed her as well. Lloyd appeared in the doorway and snuck up behind his daughter, and grabbed her.

"Gottcha." He growled and Lydia screamed in delight before grabbing her father by the neck in a type of hug.

"Daddy!" he hugged her back and picked her up as he made his way over to Lillian. Lillian turned and kissed Lloyd as they held their oldest daughter. She told her husband,

"We are doing ok." then looked at the man she loved. Lloyd answered,

"Yes. Yes we are." then kissed her again before taking Lydia back to her room. Once in her room, Lloyd saw Lillian shut off Hayley's light and shut her door before she too walked into the room.

"Daddy can you read me a bedtime story?" Lloyd stared lovingly into his daughter's pleading eyes and gave in,

"Yes I will. What one do you want?" Lydia got off her bed and ran to her little book shelf and pulled one book off it. She brought it back to her father and he took it from her hands before watching her struggle getting back on the bed. Luckily, Lillian was sitting near and she helped her up onto the bed and got her nice and comfy. Lloyd finally took a look at the cover and it read, 'The Monster Hunter' and he began to read it until Lydia fell asleep.

After a while had gone by, Lillian woke up to the sound of Hayley crying on the monitor, so she turned on the light and asked,

"Lloyd." while sitting up and getting out of bed.


Meanwhile, around the same time, Mary heard Sam crying on the baby monitor so she woke up asking,

"John." She looked about the room and noticed John wasn't in their room. She then got out of bed and made her way to Sam's nursery. Once she arrived, she thought the figure standing over her baby was John because she was still half asleep. So she asked,

"John? Is he hungry?" the figure never turned to look at her and continued to do what he wanted to do. The figure only told her,

"Shh." And Mary shrugged before she left saying,

"Okay." then sighed before going back to the bedroom. Once in hall, Mary happened to look down it and saw a light near the stairs, at the end of the hall flickering. Deciding that it was a little weird, she went to fix it. She tapped it a few times until it stopped. She looked at light puzzled.

After Mary had fixed the light, she was about to go back to bed when she heard something going on downstairs so she went to investigate. When she got to the end of the steps, she saw John in his chair asleep and her eyes went wide as she realized that figure in her son's room wasn't John. Mary turned and ran back up the stairs screaming,

"Sammy, Sammy!" then ran into the room and saw who was there. Mary froze in her tracks before she gasped then screamed,

"No!" John woke up with a start from in his chair. He half yelled, half spoke,

"Mary?" before he took off running and screaming up the stairs,

"Mary!" Then calmer,

"Mary." when he got to Sam's room. He spoke again,

"Mary." But seeing as he looked around and didn't see Mary, only Sam, who was gurgling in his crib. John went to him saying,

"Hey, Sammy. You okay?" then saw something drip onto the crib. John touched it and it was wet and a little sticky. Just then, a second one dripped on his hand causing him to look up and see Mary on the ceiling. Her stomach was cut, John screamed as he fell to the ground,

"No! Mary!" she suddenly burst into flames and John knew he had to get out of there when Sam had started screaming and crying. So he grabbed Sam and took him out of the room. Once out of there, John heard Dean yell,

"Daddy!" so he handed him Sam then ordered him,

"Take your brother outside as fast as you can. Don't look back. Now, Dean. Go!" then Dean did as he was told. John turned back around into the flaming nursery. He screamed once more,

"Mary! No!"

Dean made it out the door still holding Sam saying soothing words,

"It's ok, Sammy." He looked up at the house, to the room where Sam's nursery once was before John scooped up them both up saying,

"I got ya." just as the house burst due to the flames.


Now back in Lloyd's house, Lillian had just woken up to Hayley crying and was making her way there. Once there she saw a figure and asked,

"Lloyd? Is she hungry?" the figure shook its head and she only shrugged before walking out of the room. In the hallway, she saw a light flickering and knew immediately that wasn't normal so she ran back into the room yelling,

"Hayley!" only to freeze in place before she screamed,

"No!" and Lloyd who was making a sandwich at the time heard her scream.

"Lillian?" He yelled as he dropped the sandwich and took off up the stairs. He continued to yell as he ran up the stairs nearly falling a few times as he scrambled up then so fast. Then he burst into the baby's room only to see little Hayley, babbling in her crib.

"Hey there, Hayleybunch. You ok?" He asked as he got closer. Just as he was about to touch her little hand, she had stretched out, something dropped onto his hand. He inspected it only to have more drop onto his hand before he looked up.

"Lillian!" He screamed in pain when he saw his wife... his beautiful wife on the ceiling. Lloyd then froze in place not knowing what to do when she suddenly burst into flames. Hayley was screaming and her crying seemed to snap whatever was happening to Lloyd back into place and he grabbed her. Lloyd took her out of the burning room just as he heard a door open and a small voice sounding worried,

"Daddy?!" Lloyd found his four year old daughter, Lydia in the hallway and went to his other daughter. He demanded of her,

"Take your sister outside as fast as you can." Lloyd realized he had just given his oldest daughter her first order and he was heartbroken. Lloyd noticed Lydia wasn't listening and was staring at the approaching fire behind him so he shook her and gave her her second order,

"Lydia! Go!" He gently but quickly handed her little sister, Hayley and she took off down the stairs. Lloyd went back to the baby room only to see that the flames had spread faster then what he had anticipated. Lloyd knew there was no way of getting her down but he screamed anyway,

"Lillian! No!"


Lydia made it outside and was staring at the house saying soothing words to the crying infant,

"It's ok, Haywey." just then Lloyd appeared grabbing them both while running and saying,

"I got you." just as both houses burst even farther into flames. Lloyd looked over at his neighbor and friend, John and saw their house on fire as well.

An hour later, the fire department arrived and put out the flames, and bystanders were watching and pointing to the two houses that were on fire. Lloyd had walked over to John, they both stared up at one another before Lloyd joined them sitting on the car asking,

"Now what?" and John answered,

"Revenge." and Lloyd nodded before he headed to his car and drove it up towards John and parking it in front of the other 1967 Chevy Impala and sat once again. This time though on the back staring at the houses where their wives, Lillian and Mary were killed.

"Revenge it is." Lloyd whispered as they sat there on their cars, holding their children.


A.N.- Hi again I hope you are liking this so far and would like me to continue and don't worry I'll be updating A Hero's Love and Dark Side of the Moon soon.

A.N.R.- Hi again hope you liked this better. Onto chapter 2!