From the
Terrible Crossover Fanfiction Idea Generator prompt. "Your
challenge is to write crossover fanfiction combining 24 and Kirby.
The story should use religion as a plot
device!"
None of these settings or characters of my own creation, I am working in the cultural turf of both Kurby and 24.
It was 11:01 AM, the start
of the third hour of the longest day of Jack Bauer's life.
Again.
He measured the day as beginning at 8:00 AM, of course. Nothing
important had
happened in the previous eight hours. Or the
fifteen months prior, come to think of it.
Things had been fairly
placid compared to recent events over the past three hours. The
ghastly airport explosion at 8:03 AM. The disquieting rumors of a
nuclear-nerve-gas
container on the loose. All this activity by a
new faction. The suspicious death of their
one lead, just as he
was about to give them information on the terrorists.
Jack Bauer remembered it like it had happened twenty minutes ago. Which it had.
Now it was 11:03 AM. Jack Bauer walked across the floor
of Counter Terrorist Unit LA like the American hero and patriot he
was. He glanced at the shuffling desk workers doing jobs vastly less
important than his. Jack Bauer fully expected that within four hours
CTU officers like this would be trying to arrest him for 'going too
far', within five they
would be given shoot-on-sight orders,
and within eight he'd be forgiven and in charge of
this
facility.
The CTU director raised his eyebrow as Jack Bauer
entered his office. He considered
trying to remember the man's
name, but decided it wasn't important. His name, whatever it was,
wouldn't be Jack Bauer.
"What do we do next?" Jack Bauer asked, his iron-edged heroism merging with his tireless devotion to protecting America's citizenry. "Nichols was our one lead, and he died suspiciously twenty minutes ago."
"Yes, Jack," the director said. "I know all that."
"That's Jack Bauer," Jack Bauer growled.
"Uh, right. Yeah. What you might not know is that there's some new information."
"About time. Is it an Islamic jihadist cell?"
"No."
"Is it a shadowy Russian arms dealer supplying an Islamic jihadist cell?"
"Doesn't seem to be."
"Is it an
American corporation run by my long-estranged father manipulating a
shadowy
arms dealer supplying an Islamic jihadist cell?"
"Not
this time. Rather, a CTU file has dug up some old data that's of
particular
relevance to our predicament."
"That makes
Nichols' suspenseful and shocking death pretty pointless," Jack
Bauer
commented. "Why didn't we have this file before?"
"I
don't know. Anyway, we seem to be dealing with a messianic cult,
devoted to the
worship of some being known as the KIR, an
individual of boundless power and consumption. The cult has an
emphasis on stockpiling food, plans to unleash a chemical attack on
downtown LA, shady business connections and tightly-drilled
fanaticism. Yet the information is only partial. There's a CIA
operative taking off from Japan within the
hour, he has a lot
more information that should cover some of the gaps."
"Why can't he just e-mail the information to us?"
"I don't know. Anyway, his plane will be arriving in three hours."
Jack Bauer blinked. "From Japan? That's a pretty short travel time, isn't it?"
"He's on a fast plane."
"Well,
we can't wait that long," Jack Bauer said. "Within three hours,
this cult could
have unleashed a chemical warfare attack and
killed ninety million people in downtown LA alone. We have to act. Do
we have a new lead?"
"Yes," the director said. "There's
a patsy being used by the cell, coincidentally he
lives right
here in LA. The name is Brian Grant. He lives at 514 Olite Drive. We
believe
he has ties to the cult, and is selling them software. I
want you to go to Grant's home
and find out what he
knows."
"Right. I'll tie him up and torture him mercilessly."
"You could just try asking first. He might
not have any idea that he's helping such a
dangerous group, and
could be willing--"
"Torture. I'm all over it."
The director sighed. "Whatever you feel is best."
"What will you be doing while I'm off with Grant?" Jack Bauer asked.
"What
I usually do. Staring at the distance. Trying to get my computer to
work. Bickering
with subordinates for no constructive reason.
Getting distracted by my ex-wife. Crying
because I'm not as
heroic as you are."
Jack Bauer considered shooting his boss
in the head. He'd done that to a previous CTU
director, and it
had done no end of good for office morale. On second thought, he
decided
against it. Keeping CTU stocked with incompetents made
him look even more awesome.
Besides, he wanted to keep most of
his murders for the afternoon. Jack Bauer turned and
walked
briskly out of the director's office. It was 11:12 AM.
It
was 11:16 AM. Jack Bauer strolled to his patriotic car, got in and
began driving
rapidly out of the parking lot. He felt a bump at
one point, but kept going without
checking. If he had hit
someone, it had most likely been a terrorist anyway. He listened
to
Rush Limbaugh through the drive, just like every American should
do.
Grant's house was five miles from CTU, and it took until 11:38 AM to get there. Normally it didn't take that long to drive through rush hour traffic in LA. This really was the longest day ever.
At 11:38 AM Jack Bauer pulled his car into park, jumped
out to the drive way, ran up the
pavement and knocked at the
door. A minute later, at 11:39 AM, the door cautiously
opened. A
balding man wearing a blue suit and green tie stood there
warily.
"Brian Grant?" Jack Bauer asked.
"Yes, that's me. What is this about?"
"My name is Jack Bauer, and I'm a federal agent. May I come in?"
"I--"
Jack
Bauer drew his gun and shot Grant in the foot, then reached out with
his other hand
and broke both of the older man's arms. Each
snapping of the bone was another assertion
of the righteous and
eternal power of the United States. Grant screamed. Jack Bauer
stepped into the house, grabbed him by the neck and pulled him
over to the kitchen. Good, a chair. The other element he needed to
torture, besides an unfaltering conviction that the end justified the
means.
Grant seemed to have lost consciousness. Jack Bauer
used a roll of duck tape to stick him
to chair, than gathered a
few knives from a kitchen drawer. Grant revived and started
screaming again. A woman rushed down from upstairs.
"What are you doing to my husband?" she demanded.
"I'm a
federal agent, ma'am. This is counter-terrorist business. Please do
not attempt to
interfere."
"This is insane!" she insisted. "You can't just do this."
"I'm Jack Bauer. I can do whatever I want."
"I'm going to call the police."
Jack Bauer swiveled, grabbed her by the head and
smashed her face into the wall until she
was unconscious, then
turned back to Grant. Often things went better without the woman.
Jack Bauer knew he wasn't a misogynist because he loved his
daughter. He picked up a
butter knife and held it in front of
Grant's face.
"Tell me about the KIR-cult," he said.
"I don't have any idea what you're talking about," Grant said.
Jack Bauer knew he was lying. So he pressed down with
the butter knife and cut off
Grant's left hand with a single,
firm, slice. He reflected that it wasn't nearly as
awesome and
patriotic as the time he killed a man using only his front teeth, but
it
wasn't bad. Grant had passed out again. Jack Bauer stopped
the wound with duck tape, than slapped Grant's face until his eyes
opened.
"Tell me about the KIR-cult," Jack Bauer repeated.
"Fine! Yes, I'm a member. I worship the great Consumer, who will establish his omnipotent rule over this country, over this entire planet! His mercy and wrath are awesome, and all who defy him will know a swift death."
"Tell me where I can find the cult leader," Jack Bauer said.
"No. I will never give him up to you. My faith is pure, my resolve mighty."
"I
don't understand how traitors like you can hate America," Jack
Bauer said, picking up
the butter knife again and cutting off
Grant's other hand. "After all it offers you, and
all the
sacrifices patriots like me have made to protect you."
Grant
screamed again. Jack Bauer plucked out his left eye, than tossed it
down the
garbage disposal.
"Stop, stop! I'll talk! The
Great Leader can be found in a facility four blocks from
here.
Just off Wagon Station."
"Thank you," Jack Bauer said
sincerely. He reached out and snapped Grant's neck, than
stood
up and walked away, proud in the conviction that this household was
now safe from
terrorists. He loved his daughter, and he loved his
country. It was 11:48 AM.
It was 11:56 AM. Jack Bauer looked
at the blank, silent warehouse from across the street.
It looked
like a terrorist facility to him. As he ran across the street towards
the
building he considered telling CTU about this development,
and bringing in backup. Nah.
They'd only get in the way.
Jack
Bauer jumped through the window, rolling over the glass fragments and
down the long hallway. He stood up in the beige, central room,
confronted by five terrorists holding
rifles. Jack Bauer drew his
pistol and killed them with four well placed bullets. It was
neat
that he was able to do that. Jack Bauer wasn't sure how, ever since
his wife's death
his physical capacity seemed to have increased
by leaps and bounds. Yet his joy in the
deaths of the terrorists
was tempered by the sorrow that he hadn't been able to torture
them first, for the glory of America.
Re-loading, he hurried into the next room and saw a short, round, pink marshmallow being standing in front of a large map of the United States.
"Freeze!" Jack Bauer said.
The weird pink-marshmallow thing turned to face him and said something incomprehensible.
"What?" Jack Bauer demanded, mapping out
his seventy four best ideas for torturing the
terrorist. "Speak
American, not your barbarian Arabic."
The pink blob made
another noise that Jack Bauer couldn't decipher. Small matter. If
the
weirdo didn't speak English he'd still torture all the
information out of him. Jack Bauer
was feeling unseasonably
stocked. It was only the fourth hour so clearly the pig blob
wasn't
the chief terror architect, probably it was only a minion of a minion
of a minion.
Still, he got a chance to torture a recognizably
non-humanoid for the first time. He
wasn't sure what
information he needed, but he'd think of something to ask when he
was
cutting into the bright pink skin. Jack Bauer glanced around
the room for some tape.
The creature opened it's mouth and made an odd whirling noise. Unaccountably, Jack Bauer felt a strong pull against his gun, wrenching it from his hand before he could react. All his steely resolve and fanatical nationalism were of no avail as he watched his treasured terrorist-killing weapon fly into the gullet of the pink menace. The creature swallowed, and all traces of the gun vanished.
Jack Bauer stared in horror, feeling even
worse than the time he'd been medically dead
from torture
performed by a shadowy oil cartel that had tried to nuke Los Angeles.
"You're not human!" he shouted at the pink monstrosity.
"That means you couldn't possibly be a citizen of the United
States of America. You're a terrorist and an illegal
immigrant."
Jack Bauer rushed forward to punch at the monstrous being. Before he'd gotten halfway the thing sucked in a gust of air and blew it at him. Jack Bauer was thrown like an acorn in a tornado, smashing painfully onto the ground.
Jack Bauer
winced, and placed a hand along the edge of his heroically right-wing
chest.
It felt like he had several broken ribs, some internal
bleeding and a ruptured spleen. He
should be fully healed in
thirty minutes or so. That still left the immediate problem of
overcoming the pink terrorist. It was a hard situation, and a
lesser man than Jack Bauer
might have give in to pain, or the
basic physical realities. However Jack Bauer was not a
lesser
man. He figured that if he could invade a Chinese embassy, he could
find a way to
kill this weird alien thing.
Abruptly, the
creature spoke again. The words were still gibberish, but this time
Jack
Bauer seemed to hear an echo of meaning in his mind, like
some sort of psychic
impression, the words "Surrender and
worship me." Jack Bauer pulled himself to his feet
and stared
down at the blob with the righteous determination of a white male
American who had been wronged.
"My name is Jack Bauer, and
I'm a federal agent," Jack Bauer said. "I will never worship
you, for I worship nothing except my country. I love my country.
Notwithstanding that I
know every government leader is corrupt,
evil or incompetent, and America has tried to
kill or imprison me
at least a dozen times. A patriot must serve his country, and
sometimes that means landing a plane on a runway while the
president tries to shoot you
down. You are a terrorist, and are
therefore the very opposite of an American. You
deserve to die,
and I deserve to kill you. Have I mentioned that I'm Jack
Bauer?"
Somehow the pink marshmallow managed to make a shrug
without having any visible
shoulders. It hopped forward, pulled a
gigantic hammer out of thin air, and smashed it
into Jack Bauer's
head. The hammer annihilated the skull as easily as the Bush
administration had eroded core Constitutional liberties,
pulverizing Jack Bauer's brain
with a loud thwack. The corpse
fell to the ground.
It was 11:59 and 57 seconds. 58 seconds.
59 seconds. It was 12:00, noon on what had
become the shortest
day of Jack Bauer's life.
