AN:
This isn't directed at anyone in particular however you know if you own one of
these horrid creatures, please do the world a great service and kill her/him…
…Mary-Sue
"Good morning everyone," said Dumbledore, "I've
called you all here for a very serious and important announcement." He paused
for a dramatic effect, "As you know there have been many fanfics
in the Harry Potter section at FF.N, so therefore there shall be a new class
you must take." There was a groan from the students, Dumbledore
ignored it, "This class will be called "Protection
From Ignorant Authors", you will be taught
together rather then traditional way in houses. Next year you shall meet the
first thing you must be wary of and have your first classes after you have
identified the danger, that is all."
*******
"What do you think of the new class?" Hermoine asked
on the Hogwarts' Express headed for…Hogwarts of course!
"Hey how did we get here!?" Ron asked looking alarmed,
"Weren't we just in the Great Hall?"
"It's a fic remember?"
"Oh yeah," he looked as though he had just woken up from a bad dream to find
out he was in a real nightmare.
The compartment door opened again and in came Draco Malfoy. A sneer on his lips.
"Hey Weasley," he drawled, "Nice robes" Ron jumped up
to curse his nemesis but a beautiful girl beat him to it. Her she had blonde
hair that fell around her face as though framing it, red lips, a drop dead
figure and shinning eyes. Malfoy lay on the floor,
black from the curse she had thrown at him. She made sure to step on him as she
made her way over to the aforementioned company.
"Hey!" he bubbled sickeningly, "My name is Mary-Sue and I just transferred here
from America," she said all this in
a crystal voice that reminded one of angels singing. She blew a bubble with her
gum.
"Um…hi…I'm Harry and this is Ron and Hermoine."
"Harry Potter!? Hi! Well I'd better go I'm sure all my friends are waiting for
me," outside the compartment was what looked like could be half of the
population of Hogwarts. Whoever wasn't cheering over
what she did to Malfoy was glaring at Mary-Sue with
jealousy.
"I think I'm in love with her," Harry said, "did I just say that!?"
"Yup, but you can't have her because she's mine!" Ron shouted. Harry and Ron
stared at each other, oh no! It was one of those characters. This must have
been the challenge Dumbledore had been talking about.
***
After the sorting that evening (Mary-Sue had been put in Gryffindor
of course but Slytherin would have been suffice), Ron
and Harry were sneaking around Hogwarts under their
invisibility cloak. (They were trying to escape from the people who had crowded
around Mary-Sue in the common room asking questions about life in America and
how she did that amazing hex.)
"Is it safe yet?" Ron asked nervously.
"I think so."
They stared to head back when the ran into Snape and dun dun dun Mary-Sue!
"Oh…you win Mary-Sue!" Snape sniffed. Mary-Sue's eyes
were alight and she smiled winningly, looking absolutely gorgeous in the
absence of light.
"Promise you'll never bother the Gryffindors again!"
"I won't!" he cried practically on his knees, "I love you Mary-Sue!"
Harry and Ron were looking very bewildered under Harry's invisibility cloak.
Suddenly Mary-Sue pulled it off of them.
"I knew you were around somewhere."
"How did you know we were here! You couldn't see us!" Sputtered
Harry. He couldn't help feeling a little lightheaded though with this
stunning girl near him. Mary-Sue just laughed, "I can see through invisibility
cloaks, my eyes are special."
"…right" Suddenly the Earth trembled as hordes of Death Eaters invaded the
castle. Harry, Ron, the rest of the student body and the staff were caught off
guard but not Mary-Sue. She had been able to sense them coming because of some
secret in her past.
"Come on it's time for me…I mean for us to save the day!" She ran into the
battle with her wand out. Harry and the other characters put up a brave fight
(though not a brave a fight as Mary-Sue and she managed to save at least one
main character along the way). More Death Eaters came until, Mary-Sue and the
rest of the light side, were surrounded. Everyone looked very afraid, except
for the incredible Mary-Sue; she just held up her wand and watched calmly as
she blew away 10 Death Eaters.
Out of the shadows came Lord Voldemort.
"Mary-Sue join me."
"Never!" Mary-Sue screamed,
tears running down her face making her look even more beautiful then ever
before. She then did a very complex spell and Voldemort retreated cursing her name. He sent one more
spell her way (the death spell) but she is up and walking again without any
trouble.
"I've had enough!" cried Ron, "How come you won't die?!"
"Because I'm Mary-Sue I can't die (unless it's a heroic death) and I stay
forever young and beautiful."
"She's right," interrupted Dumbledore, "She is the
first creature you must watch out for and she is also the hardest to get rid
of."
"You're boring, beautiful, from America AND you can't die!!" said Harry looking
as though he had been told he would have to go back to the Dursely's
for Christmas.
"Nope."
"This isn't fair! She's too perfect," Hermoine
yelled, "She's just the author trying to put themselves into their fic!"
"10 points for Gryffindor," said a voice in the back
that sounded like Flitwick.
"But I'm not perfect! I have a quick temper and sometimes I'm evil!" Mary Sue
argued.
"It all amounts to the same thing in the end," Hermoine
said wisely, with the rest of the characters nodding their heads in the
background.
"Oh well!" Mary-Sue gushed brightly, "I'm here now so why don't we all just get
along, oh and don't forget to review my story all you readers and tell me how
great it was. If you don't do it then I won't write any more!"
"Now there's a punishment," muttered Draco. Mary-Sue
was quick to hex him before he even had time to draw his wand.
"Time to see if you can get rid of her," said McGonagall.
"Let's do it!" shouted Ron drawing his wand.
"I'm with you!" said Harry, he started to hiss and called all the snakes in the
area. The snakes all came and gathered around Mary-Sue, she looked at them and
they couldn't bring themselves to do what Harry commanded them (kill her! For the love of G*d!). They all curled around her feet,
hissing angrily at the rest of the children. Harry looked like he wanted to cry.
"Let me have a go," said Hermoine rolling up her
sleeves. "There's no counter attack for this spell," she muttered the
incantation at Mary-Sue but Mary-Sue was too quick and flung a spell back to
counter it.
"But there is NO counter spell!" Hermoine wailed in
disbelief.
"But I'm Mary-Sue! Remember?"
"Looks like there's only one thing to do" said Ron seriously and the others
nodded gravely. They leaned back, clapped their hands over there mouths and
hollered up to the author.
"We need your help! You must get rid of her!" The author was sympathetic to her
characters pleas and sent a letter to Dumbledore
saying the he was loosing his new transfer student. Mary-Sue was going back to
hell where she belonged.
The whole school cheered.
The End? Let us hope so.
AN: I know it isn't exactly funny but the point of this is for me to get out a
little frustration in this "rant". Perhaps another lesson shall follow on
spelling and grammar errors.
Author's piece of advice for avoiding making a Mary Sue: Make a character to
fit a plot, not a plot to fit a character.
