Hi quick authors note (I hope) my other fanfic, time change, will probably not be updated in a long time. I have come across a HUGE case of writers block and realized I couldn't figure out who I wanted the bad guy to be, Vlad is kinda obvious but I want to be less obvious. I also am EXTREMELY bad at using clockwork.
as a response to jeanette9a, its harder then it sounds, I'm not even in high school yet, the bitter irony is I love to read (so much so that when everyone else was playing at recess I was reading a book) but I SUCK at writing, S-U-C-K. The ideas for stories I get are EPIC but I can't get them on paper, well I can but they loose momentum before the epic stuff happens
also I would like comments telling me ways I could improve this story. But don't criticize too much, its not like I'm a professional writer.
(btw, phantom planet never happened)
disclaimer:
I don't own Danny phantom if i did it wouldnt be cancelled
I don't own anything here but the story
I DO own a cat (sorta) technically he's my sisters but he likes me better
I DO own an obsessive addiction to doctor who (and I'm not even british)
I DO NOT OWN DANNY PHANTOM! So dont try to sue me or i'll slap you with a fish (and no, I don't mean a virtual one)
darkest fears
chapter one: nightmare
Danny was exhausted. He hadn't been getting any sleep for nearly a month. Sure, part of it was the box ghost being his annoying, and extremely lame, self. But something else was troubling Danny and his friends were starting to worry.
Nightmares had been haunting him ever since Dani had left. They were chaotic nightmares with no real order to them, terrible images that made the famous Danny phantom, epic kick-butt ghost fighting teenage ghost, tremble in fear.
Fearamora POV
What could be so terrible, so devastatingly frightening, that it made a super hero afraid? The best way to answer is to start with the simple, yet oh so very complex word, fear.
I'm Fearamora fright, the fright knights older, and much more mature older sister. I will be your narrator for now. Your probably wondering, two Halloween ghosts? Well you can relax, I'm not a Halloween ghost. I'm actually a lot like Jazz, I'm a psychology ghost, but I specialize with one area imperticular, overcoming fear. Now your wondering, a dead psychologist from mid-evil times? And how come i get rid of fear if my brother brings it? Well in answer to the first one, yes I know its hard to believe, get over it. In answer to the second one, is Danny ANYTHING like jazz? I mean look at their grades!
But lets get back to the point, fear. It take many shapes and has many sizes. Some people fear not being popular, some fear bad grades, bullies, the dark, some are even afraid of vending machines. The list goes on, most are petty or irrational, but some... some were dark... some were so dark they chilled even me to the bone. Out of all the fears in the universe, Dan Phantom was one of the worst.
What do you think so far? Epic right? :) I would love comments on ways I can improve it
andibeth out.
