You and Me

by pixie paramount

...it's just you and me and that little town in Bethlehem... — Gift!poem.

You And Me
by: pixie paramount (3/8/2007)

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i keep thinking that i have done God wrong
because i think (know) that i am
filthy filthy filthyfilthyfil--
because i keep thinking of you and me
and that little town in Bethlehem

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author's note:
The last line, I know, should be changed to "that little town in Isreal"...but Bethlehem sounds better, anyway. Plus, this is a draft--thus, unfinished--and I would like crit, if you please, before I give it to my friend for her birth-day (I love you, Maddie-kins ♥). Hopefully, with a better title in mind.

(Also, I'm sorry if the prompt annoys anyone. Just blame my friend Maddie, she wanted a love poem directed at Jesus from Mary Magdelen/Judas's point-of-view. Because, um, she reads waaaay too much into The Bible.)
- Pixie