Sonic Reflex
Author's Note: I have read many, many Sonic fan fiction, and most of them seem horribly done. Everyone is out of character, fan characters are tossed in left and right, and very few of them have relevence to the plot of the series they represent. I am not saying all Sonic fan fiction is like this, but a large percentage of it is.
My goal is to produce a piece of Sonic fan fiction that incorporates Archie Sonic and perhaps SatAM Sonic into the SonicTeam Sonic universe, with a fair deal of relevence. There are a few characters that I can't use, and also some characters from these other series will have to have a change in role or rank, but I still aim to make the two collide with relevence to the SonicTeam Universe.
You are permitted to give me suggestions, but I may choose not to take them. Any review is a helpful one, whether good or bad. I am a fanfic reviewer myself in my free time, so I understand how vital it is to helping a story along. I hope you enjoy Sonic Reflex.
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Chapter 1
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The gigantic ship towered over the busy Mobotropolis, a somewhat large city on a not-so out of the way part of the planet. The ship was large, casting a shadow over the vicinity. The pilot know it would make a spectacle if he were so close to the city, so he decided to park a distance away; to initiate his plot. He rubbed his chin, walking to his control panel to overview a digital map, his bald head shining due to the overhead light. He grinned, laughing somewhat maniacally, smirking a little as he looked down on the map, rubbing his mustache in a scheaming fashion. He seemed to have something in mind, but was unsure of how to initiate it...
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Sonic, along with his dear friend Tails, were taking a break in the city of Mobotropolis. Trouble always seemed to follow our duo, and naturally this time would be no exception to that rule. Tails was resting in bed, as it was still too early for him to wake up, and Sonic was looking at the city out the window of his hotel room. This wasn't his first time in Mobotropolis, as he traveled a lot at a constant, though the first time he had only passed through it on his way to a different location. It looked nice though, so he decided he'd take a vacation there at some point, and now was a good a time as ever. He smirked, just itching to run around town as he would tend to do in his vacations. It was still early morning, around eight AM, and he didn't want Tails to wake up with no one there to greet him. Normally this wouldn't be a big deal to him, but it was a big city, and he had the slight concern that his friend would get lost if he tried to find him. He sighed, and layed down on his bed, huffing a bit as he crossed his legs, his feet wiggling in his socks. He really did want to go out.
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"Hah! A brilliant idea!" Vector exclaimed, simply lifting his arm in triumph as he watched Charmy set up their office. "Setting up in a big, dangerous town like Mobotropolis has gotta get us more work than we've gotten before. We'll be rollin in dough in no time!"
"Yay dough!" Charmy exclaimed, flailing a little in the air as he set up a 'hang in there baby' cat poster on the wall, giggling to himself. "Dough dough dough!"
Espio sighed, leaning against a wall with his arms folded, opening his eyes partway. "This town is hardly my idea of a hot spot. There's almost no moment of peace. No time to relax at all."
Vector laughed, walking to his desk and sitting down, resting his legs on top of the desk. "Exactly! This place is a gold mine! We'll be raking in cash in under a day."
There was a knock on the door, and without allowing any of them time to respond, it opened. On the other side were Mighty and Ray, one on top of the other in a pyramid fashion. Both had large grins on their faces, obnoxiously large grins. "Hey there!" Mighty exlaimed, leaning his head in. "We heard you guys got a room on the floor above us!"
Ray nodded in agreement smiling contently. "We run the missing person beauro, and it's great to be working in the same building as the great Chaotix!"
All three of them looked rather uninterested, simply nodding. Charmy continued to fly around the room childishly, looking as if he were spazzing out. Mighty smiled, opening the door a bit more. "So, ah, if you guys ever wanna team up sometime..."
Vector frowned, shutting his eyes. "Nope."
Espio shook his head. "No."
Charmy laughed, pointing at them in a mocking fashion. "No way you amatures!"
The two frowned, sighing a bit as they turned, shutting the door. "Aaaaaw!" They said in unison, shaking their heads sadly. None of the Chaotix had any signs of guilt, having just turned the duo away.
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The weasel put on his vest, then his gloves, looking in the mirror as he adjusts his hat, glaring a little bit. He spins his guns, putting them in their holsters (or wherever it is that people put their guns), his large fang gleaming a bit.
"What are ya doin?" A female exclaimed, causing him to jump slightly in alarm. He turned to her and glared, folding his arms.
"I'm getting ready." he said, froawning. "I got a revenge mission Nic."
The female laughed, rolling her eyes a little "Revenge ey? What kinda revenge?"
"That's none of your business!" her brother roared, lowering his hat a little. "And what are you doin here anyways?"
Nic laughed, putting a hand to her mouth as she did, her tooth gleaming under the light. "I got hired ta hunt down a mad bomber mate. So don't think I'm followin ya. Though it is funny that all signs are pointin to the same location yer goin to."
Fang lowered his eyelids, turning to walk past her, opening the door. "Whatever. Just don't get in my way." He slammed the door, walking down the hallway. Sonic...makin a fool outta me the last time we crossed paths. No one makes a fool of me, not even you. Believe me, I will get my revenge...
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"Froggy! Where are you!" A big cat cried out in distress, looking around the city frantically. People passing by seemed somewhat irate, while others tried to ignore it. Ray happened to eye him outside the window, smiling.
"Mighty! Look! Someone has lost something!" He exclaimed, putting his hands against the window.
The armadillo gleamed, walking to the window, looking down. "Say, yeah! Think he'll come to us?"
"I sure hope so." Ray said, a smile across his face. "We owe a lot of money as is. It's been so long since we've actually been able to find anyone who was lost!"
Mighty nodded, and frowned, sighing a little. "Our reputation is starting to sink, a lot...This is the sorta boost we need. Afterall, with the Chaotix in the same building, we have heavy competition!"
Ray nodded in agreement, sitting back in his chair. He looked out the window, and sighed, praying the cat would come to them to find his friend.
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Ten AM. Tails had finally woken up, stretching on his bed. Sonic gleamed in excitement, sitting up and putting on his gloves. "Morning Tails."
Tails smiled, and nodded, putting on his own gloves as he yawned. "Hey Sonic. What do you say we go out for breakfast?"
Sonic shook his head, standing, and walking over to put on his shoes. "Naw, you can have some in the lobby if you want Tails. I was just waiting for you to wake up so I could tell you where I was going."
The two tailed fox sighed, smiling weakly as he rubbed his temple. "Okay, so where exactly are you going then?"
"I'm going to explore the town bud." He replied, grinning. "I'll be back around one. Tell ya what though. I'll go look for restaurants, and we can have dinner together or something. My treat. How's that sound?"
Tails smiled, and nodded, standing up to go to the lobby. "Ah, sure, okay Sonic. I'll be in the room when you get back, okay?"
Sonic grinned, opening the door. "Sure thing!" He nodded, and ran down the hall getting out of the building almost faster than his friend could blink. Tails smiled weakly, sighing as he shut the door, locking up and heading down to the lobby.