my first avatar fic. r&r!
i ran to my door and went in my hous. mom im hom! i yelled. i ran upstairs befor she could anser. practise had run lat n i onlee had too minits till avatar caim on. i went to my room n flipped on the tv. it wuz allreddy on. avatar is my fav show. my friends all mak fun of me cuz i watch a show on nikelodeon. they all watch mtv. neway, i dun really car wut they say. i lyke it. at the first comershul brake i went downstairs n got a snack from the kitchin. my mom told me notta eat much cuz dinner was gonna be soon. i said ok. i ran back upstairs. ther wuz a comershul just goin off. i finished my snak just as avatar wuz goin off. that wuz a good one. all thru dinner i could onlee think about avatar. i tried to do my homework but all i could think of was avatar. so i decided to skip homeowkr that nite. i sat on my bed dydreamin about my fav show. itd been a long day and so not meaning too i fell asleep. when i woke up the next mornin i could feel peepl lookin at me. i opened my eyes n screamed. i wuz on a ship n peepl were lookin at me! sumone hereing the scream sed what wuz that. i started lookin around. this place looked familyur. then suddenlee i knew wut wuz so familyur about it. i screamed agin. whos screamin? asked a deep male voice. it was zuko! my fav char in avatar! just seein him in persun made me scream agin. will u stop that? he asked. sorry i sed feebly. ur dressed strangely he sed. i then relized that i wuz in my pajamas. i neerly screamed agin but put my hand over my mouth. when i calmed down, i sed well uh im not from here. a stowaway? he sed suspiciously. no i sed. i dunno how i got here. o well u cant stay here. i begged him to let me stay so he said ok but id have to work. i sed it was fine with me. so i worked n i wuz so good they made me his person servant! it onlee took me a month cos his other one wuz killed in a fight wit zow. so i happily served zuko. i knew i wuz in lov cos i wuz forgotten my other life. i didnt remember those peepl. i wuz totally intoo zuko. at first he wuldnt talk much to me but i decided to try too brake the ice. i started to make wierd faces at him. try as he might he couldnt keep a strait face. from there he started talkin to me. he wuz eeger to hear of my stories from where i wuz from. they were the onlee things i rememberd about that place. then one nite six monts later he kissed me. i wuz so suprized n then he wispered n my eer i wanna marry u. i screamed. he wuz used to it by now. i kissed him. this wuz the happiest day of my life! the onlee thing better would be to catch ang. i supperflyingtaklehuggleglomped him n we slept togetther. the next mornin i saw teh flyin ox over teh ship n i wuz all ong n i woke up zuko n we got dressed n started chasin him but alluva sudden zow is behind us n is firin at us.
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So wut do u think? tell me! lyk ong!111oneoneone hope u lyk it!
Jess 3s Zuko 4evr!
Ha ha ha! If you read this and were horrified...don't worry. I haven't joined the dark side! I actually began this as a joke to my good friend, Kishi, in response to the author's notes in his Avatar fic, Kara No. This fanfic is purely intended for a teaching tool or possibly a good laugh. In other words: DON'T write this way, and DON'T take it seriously! I actually had a very hard time writing this, because it's so natural for me to want to put together a good story. It's a lot harder than one would think, certainly. Anyway, I hope you laughed and didn't take seriously this fanfic. If, however, you DO wish to read a really good fic about Avatar, please visit my friend Kishi's fic. (. Free plug!)
P.S. - For anyone reading this who is following my Shingo story, don't worry! I've not abandoned Shingo! I plan to update soon. The good reviews have really inspired me:) Thank you all!