THIS IS MY FIRST FANFICTION. Read and review, just don't bruise my ego. ;;
Jasdero and Devit beling to Hoshino Katsura. But I can tell you if they belonged to me I'm make them do hilarious things and film them. Maybe put them up on Youtube. And then hide them away in my closet.
THIS STORY CONTAINS MILK.
Just kidding, "milk" was a typo. I was planning on saying "This story contains mild shonen-ai between two brothers. If you don't like it, don't read it."
On with the story...
Devit groaned as he opened his eyes. He could barely see. Memories flooded back to him: those exorcists that had somehow saw through their fooling glasses… that damned vampire escaping from their flawless trap… him and Jasdero falling…
Wait... Jasdero. Where is he?
Devit's dark eyes strained in the dim light as they swept around, searching for his brother. They finally rested on a huddled shape about two feet away from him. Devit scrambled toward the shadow, skidding on rocks and pebbles. He gently lifted the blonde's head and held it in his lap.
"'Dero? 'Dero, wake up," Devit said softly.
He lightly shook the sleeping blonde. He didn't respond. Jasdero's eyes were closed and his breath was coming in shallow gasps. The dark-haired teen called out to him again as tears crept into his eyes.
"Jasdero! Wake up right now or… or I won't buy you new hair! I know I promised you I'd buy it for you but I can't if you don't wake up!" Devit babbled to the unconscious Noah as his eyes welled over.
Tears fell onto the fallen teen's face as Devit rocked back and forth, Jasdero's head still lying in his lap. The sobbing boy quickly replaced his thighs for his softer jacket. Devit moved closer to the blonde's chest and crawled onto his hips. He put his hands on either side of Jasdero's face as he stared at his brother's unopened eyes.
"Jasdero…" Devit closed his eyes and took a breath. "Jasdero!"
The force of Devit's scream caused more tears to fall from his eyes and spray down on Jasdero's sleeping face. Jasdero let out a light moan as his eyes slowly opened.
"Devi…? Wh-where are we?" He managed to whisper as he sat up.
"'Dero!" Devit shouted happily. He wrapped his arms around his brother and started to cry into his shoulder.
"Devi… I'm alright…why are you crying?"
Devit looked up at the blonde and grinned as he covered Jasdero's mouth with a chaste kiss.
"I know you're alright. I know."
ALRIGHT, SO... This was my first fanfic. Was it somewhat okay for someone who sucks at writing?
I didn't plan for Devit to be so... emo about it. But I guess if your brother was unconscious you'd be kinda "BLAH" too.
But yeah.
REVIEW PLZ.