disclaimer: yeah, i don't own the lord of the rings.
anyway, this is the first poem i've ever written about the lord of the rings. comments and criticism are extremely welcome! so read and rewiew...please?
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Today we go
To war, to death
To oaths fufilled
And promises kept
To evil's reign,
To end of days
With hope
That slowly, surely fades
Ride now to ruin
And to world's end
Fear not the shadow,
Fear not death
For here at what seems
The end of all things
Newfound hope
The morning brings
And at the rising
Of the sun
Victory, at last,
For Men is won
Then crowned is the king
Within whose eyes
Shines the light of those
Who never die
Now all have reached
Their journey's end,
But some wounds there are
That time can't mend
Now sail from white shores
Under a silver sky
To a far green country
With a swift sunrise....
anyway, this is the first poem i've ever written about the lord of the rings. comments and criticism are extremely welcome! so read and rewiew...please?
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Today we go
To war, to death
To oaths fufilled
And promises kept
To evil's reign,
To end of days
With hope
That slowly, surely fades
Ride now to ruin
And to world's end
Fear not the shadow,
Fear not death
For here at what seems
The end of all things
Newfound hope
The morning brings
And at the rising
Of the sun
Victory, at last,
For Men is won
Then crowned is the king
Within whose eyes
Shines the light of those
Who never die
Now all have reached
Their journey's end,
But some wounds there are
That time can't mend
Now sail from white shores
Under a silver sky
To a far green country
With a swift sunrise....