Okay, this is my first fanfic.. EVER, so please be kind. But of course some positive criticism would be very helpful! Please review.
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter. *Sad face* I do however own a pic of myself and the great Dan Radcliffe, Hundreds of pics of my family and I in The Wizarding World from January, oh and loads of posters, all the dvds (and shockingly the first movie in Video from my 9th birthday in 2002) and 7 tattered books J. Sorry I really wanted to show off a bit.
What can I do, when the best part of Me, was You.
Chapter One.
Rose.
Hogwarts, Hogwarts,
Hoggy Warty Hogwarts,
Teach us something, please,
Whether we be old and bald,
Or young with scabby knees,
Our heads could do with filling,
With some interesting stuff,
For now they're bare and full of air,
Dead flies and bits of fluff,
So teach us things worth knowing,
Bring back what we've forgot,
Just do your best, we'll do the rest,
And learn until our brains all rot.
"Just do your best, we'll do the rest, and learn until our brains all rot." Fred and James sang, so slowly, emphasizing every word, as if in mourning. "Ahem" Mcgonagall coughs, staring deliberately at my two cousins.
Smiling I glance at my other cousins, Dominique, Lily and Albus were all laughing, while Hugo and Louis appeared to be scheming already, we only got here an hour ago!
And Roxy.. Poor Roxy was sitting there.. Looking down at her empty plate. "Hey, are you okay Hon?" I whisper quietly to my older cousin. "Huh? Ohh.. Yeah of course" she replies but looks down the table, at her boyfriend, or rather, her ex boyfriend Dave. The lying ass broke up with Rox at the end of the school year last year. Roxy still hasn't been the same, she spent the whole summer moping around. And what was he doing now? Laughing at something stupid joke one of his cronies said. Glancing back at Rox I see a single tear roll down her cheek.
Fred looks up at his twin, and immediately reddens, with anger.. Him and James are very protective over all us girls. Fred especially for his sister, who has become such a fragile person. She used to be so full of light, laughing all the time, joking, and just generally being a normal teenager. But David Punnett took that all away. Brave my ass! He doesn't deserve to be in Gryffindor, or Hogwarts for that matter. He took her whole Hogwarts years away from her. They got together in their third year. He liked her from first year, and he chased after her, she didn't even like him that much! She gave him three years of her life, for nothing!
Fred jumps up and storms down the where Dave and his friends are sitting, prone to overreacting, like all us Weasleys and Potters. He starts shouting at David "You bastard! Look what you did to my sister! You absolute waste of space, don't you ever come near any of my family, you're lucky I don't hex you right now" he says while taking his wand out of his robe pocket. "Don't you even LOOK at my sister, or I swear to Merlin, I'll kill you-"
"Don't you dare fucking threaten me Weasley! I could have you, no proble-"
"Mr Weasley! Mr Punnett. This is not the way to start your sixth year, detention all this week starting tomorrow night! And ten points taken from Gryffindor-EACH! I will not have this language in my school, you are supposed to be an example to our younger students, particularly our first years! Now sit down, and Shut Up!" Headmaster Mcgonagall shouts, storming back up to the head table.
Roxy glares at her brother, "Oh Merlin, you unbelievable PRAT Frederick Weasley, how could you embarrass me like that! I do not care about that idiot anymore okay!" she practically hisses at Fred. Dom nudges me under the table. This is a great start to the new school year. Its just going to get better I suppose. *Fuuuun*
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Fred
Great, just what I need, silent treatment, from my sister! For trying to help her, no less. Well two can play at that game. She'll come crawling back, we have DADA together today and she wont have anybody to talk to except me! Hah! Walking down the stairs of my dorm, and turning the spiral staircase, my eyes move, as if by some magnetic force, to the most beautiful girl -woman- in this school.. No the world! Emily O'Shea, the most amazing girl I have ever seen. And all mine! Have I mentioned she's amazingly gorgeous!
My eyes rake over her body, as if I've never seen her before, she stands tall at 5'6, but that's fine, I'm so tall myself at 6 foot. Her body, tall and lean from Quidditch, and some Muggle game called Soccer. Her breasts, wow they're amazing! You would never think she possessed anything so fantastic under this tatty school uniform. And then of course, that gorgeous face, that I really am a sucker for. Big round full lips, heart shaped face that always has colour in those cheeks, with a scatter of freckles. But the one thing, the thing that melts me, and turns me into a soppy little romantic, are those eyes! Those beautiful eyes she has. Light brown, with darker brown around the rim, and the light green specks throughout. I could get lost in those eyes for a week and not realise. They hold so much knowledge, they've been through so much in just sixteen years, but yet shine brightly, as if happy to see me, little old Freddie.
She runs and leaps into my arms, wow, I forgot how great she felt in my arms, "hey you!" she whispers into my ear. "Hi baby, I missed you!" I reply, nuzzling my nose into her soft blonde, waist length curls. "I know, it doesn't feel like its only been a week, huh? Wow I've missed this, its not the same when we're in The Burrow, with all your family." She unlatches her legs from around my torso, with little first years looking, and James coughing like he's about to die. We can keep that for the bedroom.
She grabs my hand, as if wanting to hold some part of me, like I am with her. I need to have her, because when we're together its almost like we're one, wow I am such a sap. James would disown me if he could hear my thoughts. But he'll see, when he falls in love he'll know exactly what it feels like.
"Ye ready to go to breakfast or what? I'm starving mate" James seems to poke through my thoughts.
"Okay okay, lets go then!" putting my arm around Emily's waist we stroll down to The Great Hall, getting whispered comments from all around us, mostly from the first years, who probably never saw a celebrity before, let alone a Weasley or Potter. "Its because your so strikingly beautiful y'know" I bow my head and say into Emily's ear. James makes vomit noises, "Please, I haven't even eaten yet and I feel like im going to get sick."
"You'll see, cous, one day you'll understand, speaking of which, look who's walking towards us, none other than Amelia Wood." I smirk, James has been in love with her since first year, and every time he asks her out she turns him down, but snogs him whenever we have a party and she drinks too much Firewhiskey, just leading him on even more. Which I don't appreciate, seeing as I'm usually the one who has to pick up the pieces. Its not just girls who fall in love and have feelings you know!
"Shut it mate!….. Hey Amelia, hower things?" He directs his attention to Amelia who is a few feet away now. "Fine James, thanks. Hey Emily, sit next to me in Divination yeah?"
"Course!" Oh I forgot they were like best friends. With her long brown hair, and curves, Amelia Wood was good lucking, I can see why James likes her, but spending five years chasing after her! What's with that?
He needs to get over her. And I know just the girl! Isabella Brown, shes THAT girl, if you get me, the one that you go to if you, er, want to get something out of the way. Poor girl doesn't even seem to realise she's being used. I'd feel sorry for her if she didn't hate my family so much, I mean, we never did anything to the girl! But since day one she seemed to have a grudge. Hmm, maybe I should ask my dad. My aunts and uncles seemed to make a few enemies when they were here.
When I zone back in Emmy was finishing off your conversation with Amelia and James was just staring at her, mouth open wide like a troll. We carry on walking into the great hall and down to our family at the Gryffindor table. Ahh its good to be back, I sigh. Now, James and I need to think up some great prank for next month, Halloween only comes around once a year you know! Hogwarts wont know what hit them. . . .
Well yeah, that's chapter one. I don't really know about it, but it is my first ever fanfic! I hope ye like it, and if not well then ye can help me fix it J Review please! I know its fairly boring but if I were to write the shocking major stuff that's coming up then by 10 chapters in (if I get that far.. Im only going to continue if people read and respond!) it will be so boring.. Haha.. Anyways J please review guys! Il have another chapter or two up by the weekend if you review! And I promise the first month of Hogwarts will be verrrry dramatic J
Reviews make some news spread around Hogwarts, about none other than.. The Potter and Weasley family of course! J and some serious shizz go down in Hogwarts :3
Oh and also, technology like literally repells me, so it may take awhile for me to figure out how to use Fanfic properly (: