The New Enemy
Disclaimer- I own NOTHING!!!!! (you get the idea)
synopsis- ok, so far all of my fan fics have been using villains that Akira Toriyama created. This
one is different- the villain is someone tottally new because I couldn't think of any evil geniuses
bent on ruling the universe- I mean all of them wanted to rule it, but they weren't exactly geniuses.
so This story takes place- as do all of mine- after the Freiza saga, before trunks and Goten, and
before Bulma and Vegeta are together. Vegeta is not Ssj yet. oh, and I know this sounds like the DBZ
movie Worlds Strongest, but its not.Now, to the actual story.
It was a pitch black dark night, and much to cold for the old man's liking. The wind blew savagely,
whipping up fierce whirlwinds of snow around him. "How dare they" he thought "I was so intelligent, so
valuabale" he reminisced about the last years. Was it 10? 20? 100? he had lost count after being
alone for so long. Just because he had gone a bit to far. He slowly began to remember, the ancient thoughts
not warming his heart, but making it colder. He was short and balding. He had a crown of wispy white
hair that came about to his ears. He was nearly blue with cold, he had been wandering around the
Antarctic tundra for so long. He was still bitter of his old comrades. He recounted the day it had happened.
It was in the early days of the world- writing was practiced, but books were burned. He had been
a scientist- thousands of years ahead of his time. his partner, Brutus, was unfaithful. A spy for the
people. He, Ian, had trusted Brutus with some of his most secret inventions- including a machine
that could put any liveing organism into suspended animation. Ian had known Brutus would turn against him
but he hadn't expected it so soon. That day, so long ago..........
FLASHBACK to 'that day'
Ian is working in his lab on the machine that could put the living into suspended animation. It
still had a few bugs- like the fact that it would take below freezing temperatures to make the
organism animated once again, and it would take several years of exposure to this climate.
"Brutus, hand me that wrench. Brutus?" He looked behind him. No one was there. Suddenly
there came a hard pounding at the door. Then many angry voices "Come out here! Face us!!!!"
Ian was startled. "No! It wasn't supposed to happen yet! Why did I take that good for nothing..."
but his thoughts were interupted by the door crashing off its hinges and onto him. He hit his head
and blacked out.
When Ian woke up, he was strapped inside his machine and Brutus was fumbling with the
switches. "No!" Ian thought desprately "No! those are the teleportation caontrols! If that
bumbling oaf flips those, I'd be in suspended animation and sent Kami-knows-where!!" Suddenly all
went black, and Ian remembred where he was--Antarctica, who knows how many years later.
BACK to the present--
"Those idiots! I could have made them great! Its a good thing I was so much smarter than them."
As much as I hate to admit it, Ian was right. He had set up a full functioning labratory on antarctica years
before his demise. It had technology that even Capsule Corp. didn't. Now he just had to find it- it was
camoflauged so it would be almost impossible to find unless you knew it was there. "AH-HA! there
It is." he pulled out the key card he was fortunate enough to have had in his pocket and slid
it through the slot, and the door gave a whining grunt, and reluctantly slid open, slamming as
soon as he got in, nearly crushing him. he was in a squareroom, 2 feet both ways, with a huge
metal door in front of him.
"Voice activation, password" said a female monotone.
"Tortilla" Ian stated.
The door slid open smoothly, allowing accesss to the chamber within. It was a huge room
with a domed ceiling with infinite contraptions lining the walls. One of those four sided score
boards was suspended from the ceiling, except it was four t.v. screens. " i wonder if I still have
power."
He flipped a large switch and alot of little lights illuminated the room and the t.v. turned on to
the one channel it was always on- the news. He turned the tv off and got to work. He was pretty much throwing
everything he could get his hands on and super gluing it toghether. When that didn't work, he
took another one of his gadgets and, eventually, it was held together tightly. It could'nt be
taken apart by ANYTHING- Super Saiyens included. When finished, it looked like a huge laser,
except its base was what looked likea glass clyindrical Case, about 4 feet tall 3 feet across.
It was a special kind of material that absorbed energy and ki blasts (bet 'ya know where I'm going
with this) In fact, thats what his entire lab was coated in. The only thing that wasn't was Ian.
"Now I just need a source of power." he thought. He turned on the news, and watched the
current events, getting himself aquainted with the world he was about to take over. The armys
couldn't stop him, because the laser fired ki blasts more powerful than heavy artillery. What it did was
take the energy the 'glass case' absorbed and multiplied it many times, forming it into ki, if it
wasn't already. (so basicly, if you touched the walls of the case, you'd lose energy, and it would
form into ki blasts. Everything else simply repelled attacks) Suddenly a buliten shot across the
news. A burning apartment building, with one person stuck at the top that the Fire Department
couldn't get to. Suddenly, just as flames engulfed the building, a streak of orange shot across the screen, and
the girl was safely on the ground.
"Huh? what happened?" He rewound (another invention) and slowed it down. "A person?
People can't fly! Ohhhh. An extraterrestial Biological entity! By the look of the hair- a Saiyen!
(told you he was smart. He knew about the saiyens before everyone.) But what would a Saiyen be doing on
Earth except to destroy it? Why would he save someone?. No matter. He will be an excellant source of
energy. Androids!" yes he was ahead of his time. The androids came in, except they didn't look
human. They had the body, but they were metal- made of that same attack repelling material."Go. Capture
the Saiyen. Wait-" thte screen was now showing Krillen in the backround, along with Goahn and Vegeta.
"Capture ALL the Saiyens, but not the bald one. He looks to weak." the androids went off, and Ian
busied himself with makin two larger cases, so now there were three.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Now the DBZ part begins--
Chi chi, Goku, Gohan, and Krillan were waiting outside Capsule Corp. for Bulma. They had to go shopping, but
Bulma didn't want to leave Vegeta alone in the house, for fear he might destroy it. He (very reluctantly)
finally came out, but refused to ride in the car, saying he'd rather fly the entire way rather than
have to sit next to Goku (Kakarot in his words) They were half way there when shouts were heard.
Goku Gohan and Krillen immeadiately flew out of the car dragging Vegeta with them. They came upon the
burning building, and Goku spotted the person at the top. He flew at breakneck speed, grabbing her, and
depositing her safely on the ground. Then they all flew back to the car before they were mobbed
with people. After dropping off Krillan, Bulma, and Vegeta, Chi-chi gave Goku and earful about
going into dangerous situations.
"REALLY GOKU! I DON'T CARE IF YOU DIDN'T GET HURT, BUT YOU SHOULD AT LEAST TRY TO SET
AN EXAMPLE FOR GOHAN!!! HE COULD HAVE BEEN SERIOUSLY INJURED!!"
"Aw, come on mom..." Gohan began, but Chi-Chi interupted
"AND YOU! FOLLOWING YOUR FATHER INTO DANGER--YOU'RE LUCKY YOU'RE ALIVE!!!!" it continued
like this the rest of the way to the Son House. By the time they got there, Gohan figured he'd
better give his mother time to cool down, and flew off to train, leaving his dad
to deal with his angry wife. He decided he'd just fly around the forest a few times, then it would be
dinner time. He began his first round, pushing himself to go faster and faster, seeing if he could
break the light barrier. Suddenly, a twig snapped below him and he skidded to a halt, looking down, hoping
it wasn't his mother. It wasn't. It looked like a person, except it was metal. It had seen him.
Gohan flew down, figuring he'd better find out if it was dangerous.
"If it is," he thought, "I can take care of it; its not very big" How wrong he was.
***********************************
later-back at the Son house-
Chi-chi was still mad, but she'd calmed down a bit. "Goku, would you please go find Gohan
and tell him its time for dinner?"
"Ok" *any thing to get out of here!* He flew off in the direction Gohan went, but stopped,
confused, when he couldn't find him, or even pick up his ki. He landed in a clearing- foot prints came in,
but didn't go out. It also looked like a battle had taken place- the bushes and under growth were
smashed, and there were scorch marks on the ground from what looked like ki blasts. "Chi-chi is
not gonna like this. If this is from Gohan, he's in trouble!" he thought "Maybe chi-chi shouldn't
know- yeah, she'd just yell at me, and then I couldn't save Gohan." Mind made up, he flew off toward capsule
corp. to get Vegeta to help him. As much as he didn't like it, Krillan wouldn't be much help on
this one . If Gohan could be defeated by it--well he was stronger than Krillan. Goku sped up, but
when he reached Capsule corp., a scene much like the last met his eyes, except Bulma was on her knees
sobbing. "Bulma! whats wrong? where's Vegeta?"
"Goku! thank Kami you're here! Vegeta- he's in trouble!"
"What? Why? what happened?"
"There was this metal thing *sob* it looked like *sob* a person! He tried to fight it, and
and.....and..... It TOOK HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *WAHHHHH!!!*" Bulma was sobbing uncontrolably.
" Bulma, Bulma, Relax! I can't sense his ki, so do you know which way they went?"
" No... They just...They just...DISAPPEARED!! WAHHH!!!!"
"Just Disappeared? how...?''
to be continued---- don't you just hate me??
~mysticGohan33~
Disclaimer- I own NOTHING!!!!! (you get the idea)
synopsis- ok, so far all of my fan fics have been using villains that Akira Toriyama created. This
one is different- the villain is someone tottally new because I couldn't think of any evil geniuses
bent on ruling the universe- I mean all of them wanted to rule it, but they weren't exactly geniuses.
so This story takes place- as do all of mine- after the Freiza saga, before trunks and Goten, and
before Bulma and Vegeta are together. Vegeta is not Ssj yet. oh, and I know this sounds like the DBZ
movie Worlds Strongest, but its not.Now, to the actual story.
It was a pitch black dark night, and much to cold for the old man's liking. The wind blew savagely,
whipping up fierce whirlwinds of snow around him. "How dare they" he thought "I was so intelligent, so
valuabale" he reminisced about the last years. Was it 10? 20? 100? he had lost count after being
alone for so long. Just because he had gone a bit to far. He slowly began to remember, the ancient thoughts
not warming his heart, but making it colder. He was short and balding. He had a crown of wispy white
hair that came about to his ears. He was nearly blue with cold, he had been wandering around the
Antarctic tundra for so long. He was still bitter of his old comrades. He recounted the day it had happened.
It was in the early days of the world- writing was practiced, but books were burned. He had been
a scientist- thousands of years ahead of his time. his partner, Brutus, was unfaithful. A spy for the
people. He, Ian, had trusted Brutus with some of his most secret inventions- including a machine
that could put any liveing organism into suspended animation. Ian had known Brutus would turn against him
but he hadn't expected it so soon. That day, so long ago..........
FLASHBACK to 'that day'
Ian is working in his lab on the machine that could put the living into suspended animation. It
still had a few bugs- like the fact that it would take below freezing temperatures to make the
organism animated once again, and it would take several years of exposure to this climate.
"Brutus, hand me that wrench. Brutus?" He looked behind him. No one was there. Suddenly
there came a hard pounding at the door. Then many angry voices "Come out here! Face us!!!!"
Ian was startled. "No! It wasn't supposed to happen yet! Why did I take that good for nothing..."
but his thoughts were interupted by the door crashing off its hinges and onto him. He hit his head
and blacked out.
When Ian woke up, he was strapped inside his machine and Brutus was fumbling with the
switches. "No!" Ian thought desprately "No! those are the teleportation caontrols! If that
bumbling oaf flips those, I'd be in suspended animation and sent Kami-knows-where!!" Suddenly all
went black, and Ian remembred where he was--Antarctica, who knows how many years later.
BACK to the present--
"Those idiots! I could have made them great! Its a good thing I was so much smarter than them."
As much as I hate to admit it, Ian was right. He had set up a full functioning labratory on antarctica years
before his demise. It had technology that even Capsule Corp. didn't. Now he just had to find it- it was
camoflauged so it would be almost impossible to find unless you knew it was there. "AH-HA! there
It is." he pulled out the key card he was fortunate enough to have had in his pocket and slid
it through the slot, and the door gave a whining grunt, and reluctantly slid open, slamming as
soon as he got in, nearly crushing him. he was in a squareroom, 2 feet both ways, with a huge
metal door in front of him.
"Voice activation, password" said a female monotone.
"Tortilla" Ian stated.
The door slid open smoothly, allowing accesss to the chamber within. It was a huge room
with a domed ceiling with infinite contraptions lining the walls. One of those four sided score
boards was suspended from the ceiling, except it was four t.v. screens. " i wonder if I still have
power."
He flipped a large switch and alot of little lights illuminated the room and the t.v. turned on to
the one channel it was always on- the news. He turned the tv off and got to work. He was pretty much throwing
everything he could get his hands on and super gluing it toghether. When that didn't work, he
took another one of his gadgets and, eventually, it was held together tightly. It could'nt be
taken apart by ANYTHING- Super Saiyens included. When finished, it looked like a huge laser,
except its base was what looked likea glass clyindrical Case, about 4 feet tall 3 feet across.
It was a special kind of material that absorbed energy and ki blasts (bet 'ya know where I'm going
with this) In fact, thats what his entire lab was coated in. The only thing that wasn't was Ian.
"Now I just need a source of power." he thought. He turned on the news, and watched the
current events, getting himself aquainted with the world he was about to take over. The armys
couldn't stop him, because the laser fired ki blasts more powerful than heavy artillery. What it did was
take the energy the 'glass case' absorbed and multiplied it many times, forming it into ki, if it
wasn't already. (so basicly, if you touched the walls of the case, you'd lose energy, and it would
form into ki blasts. Everything else simply repelled attacks) Suddenly a buliten shot across the
news. A burning apartment building, with one person stuck at the top that the Fire Department
couldn't get to. Suddenly, just as flames engulfed the building, a streak of orange shot across the screen, and
the girl was safely on the ground.
"Huh? what happened?" He rewound (another invention) and slowed it down. "A person?
People can't fly! Ohhhh. An extraterrestial Biological entity! By the look of the hair- a Saiyen!
(told you he was smart. He knew about the saiyens before everyone.) But what would a Saiyen be doing on
Earth except to destroy it? Why would he save someone?. No matter. He will be an excellant source of
energy. Androids!" yes he was ahead of his time. The androids came in, except they didn't look
human. They had the body, but they were metal- made of that same attack repelling material."Go. Capture
the Saiyen. Wait-" thte screen was now showing Krillen in the backround, along with Goahn and Vegeta.
"Capture ALL the Saiyens, but not the bald one. He looks to weak." the androids went off, and Ian
busied himself with makin two larger cases, so now there were three.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Now the DBZ part begins--
Chi chi, Goku, Gohan, and Krillan were waiting outside Capsule Corp. for Bulma. They had to go shopping, but
Bulma didn't want to leave Vegeta alone in the house, for fear he might destroy it. He (very reluctantly)
finally came out, but refused to ride in the car, saying he'd rather fly the entire way rather than
have to sit next to Goku (Kakarot in his words) They were half way there when shouts were heard.
Goku Gohan and Krillen immeadiately flew out of the car dragging Vegeta with them. They came upon the
burning building, and Goku spotted the person at the top. He flew at breakneck speed, grabbing her, and
depositing her safely on the ground. Then they all flew back to the car before they were mobbed
with people. After dropping off Krillan, Bulma, and Vegeta, Chi-chi gave Goku and earful about
going into dangerous situations.
"REALLY GOKU! I DON'T CARE IF YOU DIDN'T GET HURT, BUT YOU SHOULD AT LEAST TRY TO SET
AN EXAMPLE FOR GOHAN!!! HE COULD HAVE BEEN SERIOUSLY INJURED!!"
"Aw, come on mom..." Gohan began, but Chi-Chi interupted
"AND YOU! FOLLOWING YOUR FATHER INTO DANGER--YOU'RE LUCKY YOU'RE ALIVE!!!!" it continued
like this the rest of the way to the Son House. By the time they got there, Gohan figured he'd
better give his mother time to cool down, and flew off to train, leaving his dad
to deal with his angry wife. He decided he'd just fly around the forest a few times, then it would be
dinner time. He began his first round, pushing himself to go faster and faster, seeing if he could
break the light barrier. Suddenly, a twig snapped below him and he skidded to a halt, looking down, hoping
it wasn't his mother. It wasn't. It looked like a person, except it was metal. It had seen him.
Gohan flew down, figuring he'd better find out if it was dangerous.
"If it is," he thought, "I can take care of it; its not very big" How wrong he was.
***********************************
later-back at the Son house-
Chi-chi was still mad, but she'd calmed down a bit. "Goku, would you please go find Gohan
and tell him its time for dinner?"
"Ok" *any thing to get out of here!* He flew off in the direction Gohan went, but stopped,
confused, when he couldn't find him, or even pick up his ki. He landed in a clearing- foot prints came in,
but didn't go out. It also looked like a battle had taken place- the bushes and under growth were
smashed, and there were scorch marks on the ground from what looked like ki blasts. "Chi-chi is
not gonna like this. If this is from Gohan, he's in trouble!" he thought "Maybe chi-chi shouldn't
know- yeah, she'd just yell at me, and then I couldn't save Gohan." Mind made up, he flew off toward capsule
corp. to get Vegeta to help him. As much as he didn't like it, Krillan wouldn't be much help on
this one . If Gohan could be defeated by it--well he was stronger than Krillan. Goku sped up, but
when he reached Capsule corp., a scene much like the last met his eyes, except Bulma was on her knees
sobbing. "Bulma! whats wrong? where's Vegeta?"
"Goku! thank Kami you're here! Vegeta- he's in trouble!"
"What? Why? what happened?"
"There was this metal thing *sob* it looked like *sob* a person! He tried to fight it, and
and.....and..... It TOOK HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *WAHHHHH!!!*" Bulma was sobbing uncontrolably.
" Bulma, Bulma, Relax! I can't sense his ki, so do you know which way they went?"
" No... They just...They just...DISAPPEARED!! WAHHH!!!!"
"Just Disappeared? how...?''
to be continued---- don't you just hate me??
~mysticGohan33~