It was right after they had met up again after 2 years and begun their descent to Fishman island that they decided to celebrate. During the getting drunk,gobbling down Sanji's delicious food,having fun with his friends again Luffy got quiet amongst all the cheering and laughing. He stood up from where he was at and started walking to the head of Sunny. Everyone had stopped what they were doing. Even Zoro had woken up from his nap sensing the dark cloud that appeared over his captain. Everybody went back to what they were doing,with less vigor of course,knowing their captain would want to be alone for now.
Once he sat down on his special seat he started to think. No not think. More like he was remembering The War of the Best. The way he had charged in thinking he could save Ace. Ace ….. if only he had been stronger then maybe just maybe Ace would still be here. The agonizing pain he felt back then,the pain he thought he had gotten over,was coming back at full throttle. His shoulders started to tremble,he clenched his fists and shut his eyes tight trying to block out the images that kept playing in his mind. When he started to shake violently because the images were beginning to be too much. Everything suddenly stopped the minute he felt an arm wrap around his shoulders and ruffle his hair soothingly and say "I thought you were over this Lu" Luffy's eyes opened up in a flash once he heard the person speak. That voice belonged none other than to his beloved big brother. Portgas D Ace. B-but wasn't he dead?
I would really appreciate if i can get some feedback that way i know what i should do for chapter 2.I already have it written down but if my first chapter has mistakes most likely i will repeat those mistakes. Any feedback would do wonders so please review :)