Ok this is my first fanfic. I'm a friend of
Phazon the writer of the forsaken and ZIM
MEETS METROID. You really should read his stoies. Well I hope you enjoy
my story.
The Road Trip to Earth.
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Chapter 1:The Gas Station of DOOM!
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Planet Conventia's Atmosphere. Tuesday 12:54pm
"Well GIR. If this map is correct it should only take a week to get to earth" said Zim as they were passing out of the planets atmosphere. "Ok master" said GIR "…I'm gonna sing The Doom Song."
After much annoying singing…
The Garden Gnome Gas Station. Tuesday 3:29pm
"Ok your total comes up to 396,574,079 Irk Dollars will that be cash or charge"
said the cashier. Zim faints because of price. "That can't be right I only asked for 465 gallons of gas" said Zim. "This is an outrage to Zim. You shall pay. GIR defencive mode: Overly Priced Gas." "Yes Master" says GIR. GIR jumps up in to the air. Then deactivates and falls to the ground. The Cashier and Zim stare at GIR. "So that will be 396,574,079 ID, will that be cash or charge.
So a very angry Zim and very powerless GIR pay for the gas. Then GIR reactivates. "What are these master." says GIR. " I think they're called Garden Gnomes, GIR." "Lets buy'em"said GIR. "NO GIR. I'm almost out of money" said Zim. GIR starts crying and beat Zim with the Gnome. "Ok, Ok. Will buy them" said Zim. So they bought all the Gnomes in the store (which was 25).
Space, Tuesday 9:47pm
"Well GIR I hope your happy. We only have 243 ID left." said Zim. But GIR was not listening. He was to busy hugging one of the gnomes.
Well that's it for chapter one. Please R&R so I can know how I did and so I know what to improve for chapter two.