Replacement: my character's in here again. Hope it sounds as good to you as it did in my head.
Tori looked around her in dismay. Her room was not at all as she had expected. Though part of her had known not to be too optimistic. Her situation had not made her the first priority. But she had thought the Superior would at least understand a woman like herself could not share quarters with someone of the opposite gender. They had treated her like a child. But to be fair, she was the "baby" of the group. She was only fifteen after all. A month younger than Roxas. It's not fair! She thought over and over. But then scolded herself for being so childish. If she was to prove herself worthy and prove the men wrong, she would have to maintain a proper adult behavior. She would have to be stronger than the others, smarter. Well, that should simple enough. They were only men after all. Shallow and weak-minded. And she knew, far too well, that she would have to endure many a crude comment. The male species have but one thing on their minds. They all had rather questionable pasts. Axel being the worst of them by a long shot. She shuddered, trying not to think of what it would be like, sharing a room with the perverted red-head.She had heard a lot about him and she didn't like any of it. He was selfish, self-consumed, vain, suggestive, rude and achingly simple.
Axel didn't understand how he displeased her so. He didn't know why his name had been mentioned along with hers. He didn't know why she had been placed in his room. But he didn't care. He just wanted her to talk to him. When the living arrangements had been announced, she looked like she had been slapped across the face. He had smiled and tried to look as friendly and welcoming as possible, but she had ignored him. She acted like it was his entire fault. He had tried to be accepting, but how could he, when she refused to accept him?