This is my first Fanfiction. Do not flame it. Constructive criticism however, is welcomed.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, Naruto Shippuuden, the Akatsuki, or T.V. I do own my OC Jamie.
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NEW WORLD AKATSUKI
It started out as an ordinary day. School was out, so I spent nearly the whole day watching T.V. There was a Naruto Shippuuden marathon on, with every episode from Naruto returning to the Leaf Village to the death of Orochimaru. I watched them all, and then turned to my computer to read the manga online. Did I mention that I am a total Naruto fan? Oh, I forgot to tell you about me. My name is Jamie. I'm 16 years old, with brown hair and hazel eyes. I was alone in the house, as I had been when since I turned 16. My parents decided that I could take care of myself, and did nothing but pay my bills while "they" sat in the lap of luxury. It was fine with me; it gave me time to catch up on the manga and fanfics. Enough about me though, now on with the fanfic. At 9:00 PM, I decided that it was getting late, so I headed upstairs rest for a tomorrow filled with nothing, or so I thought. I slept peacefully for a while, until about 10:30. A person sized picture frame appeared on the wall over my head. Suddenly, two person sized Akatsuki stepped out and ended up standing on my face. My eyes shot open and I made a WTF look. Or at least, that's the look I tried and failed to make because there were 4 men's size 10 boots on my face. The S-rank criminals finally noticed where they were standing, and moved off. The offenders seemed to be 1 Hoshigaki Kisame cosplayer, and 1 Uchiha Itachi cosplayer. The costumes were pretty good, but I didn't appreciate that then. I only had one question in my mind.
"What the H*** are you doing in my house!?" I screamed.
"Shut up brat." Said the Kisame cosplayer. "It's not like we know either. We're supposed to be in the Hidden Leaf Village."
"Well the Leaf Village is about a dimension away from here." I say sarcastically.
"What do you mean by that?" The Itachi cosplayer asked. "We were there just a second ago."
"You mean to tell me that you are the real Akatsuki?" I asked. They tensed.
"Wants to know?" Retorted Kisame.
Damn it, I think I have a problem.
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That is it for now until I get at least 3 reviews. Ideas are needed, so your OC might end up in this story. Review, or suffer 72 hours of torture. Just so you know, more Akatsuki won't be coming until the third chapter. Mangekyou Sharingan