I don't usually like MC/OC fan fictions, besides a select few, so I decided to write my own. It's my first time writing a fan fiction, so I wouldn't mind a bit criticism! Whatever can help I suppose. I'm trying hard for my story not to sound so.. Cliché? Though that's rather hard to do when you're trying to hook Jacob Black with a totally randomly person! Lol.
Disclaimer- Don't own anything besides Eliza, her father, and any other character that isn't in the book.
What a monster chapter one-
Eliza found herself standing in outside her house, staring at the monster in front of her.
Finally, after about a minute or two of gawking (her and the monster), she let out a scream the same time the same time the monster ran away. Eliza's father ran out in a rush to see what was wrong, after hearing his daughter's scream
"Eliza! Eliza, are you alright?" he asked. "I-I don't.." she started, then "Oh! OH! The monster! It was the monster!" She exclaimed. Eliza rushed inside the house, running full speed to her computer.
On it was the picture she took three days ago of the monster. The same monster that was standing right in front of her just a couple minutes ago.
The giant wolf.
I know it's short, I'll be posting more soon.