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Here's the promise story.. please read Never Be Replaced before this story since this is Chapter 13 and 14.. and also one thing Review this please...

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Sweet Tempation

Chapter 13

He was back. She was back. They were back. As soon as he let go of her he said, "should we let the others know..you know about us." She was confused. "I don't know." She look at him with a worried face. "You shouldn't... Tamaki might not be ready for that.. you know he has feeling for you.. but I think he's coming to his senses." so am I.. the youger Hitachiin left the three last words to himself. "I agree with Kaoru." he nodded to his brother.

"You three again!! and also Mr. Fujioka, of all the people in my class...I'm dissapointed." She stared at Haruhi making her feel guilty. She sighed. "Gomenasai sensei, I caused trouble again." She looked at the teacher leave. "..and for you my dear bestfriends, stop dragging me to your kicks.." She send them both deadly glares, the deadliest she could send them. "Babe don't be mad at me, if you want you could punish me tonight." He winked and stole a kiss from her. "Pervert." she looked away and grabbed Kaoru's arm. "Let's go Kaoru, we don't need your brother disturbing us in our research." she hugged his arm and left leaving a now pissed off Hikaru. "I'm just kidding, Haruhi." he yelled, desperately trying to catch up to them.

"So Kaoru, where do you wanna...umm start," she lloked up at the younger Hitachiin. Start?? what does she mean by that..does she really mean that...did she lost her mind and took me instead of Hikaru.. "I can't hold it anymore..." she stormed at the restroom/bathroom.

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Kaoru's point of view

No way, she's going to do it..with me...I can't believe I'm betraying my brother..oh well...I need to accept this great offer...It's too good to be true...I can't pass up to this once in a lifetime opportunity.. "Kaoru, I can't hold it anymore...please let's hurry..I don't want to burst here." God is she getting hornier everytime we get closer..to the bathroom. I don't think I'm ready to do this, I don't know if she'll enjoy it. "We're here." She cheere.

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Hikaru's point of view

Why the hell is Haruhi teasing me and sticking to Kaoru instead of me... oh yeah, I'm not her bpyfriend..yet..but I want her that bad..that bad.. As I was trying to find Haruhi, I saw Kaoru my twin with...Haruhi, headed to the bathroom.

Why the fuck is Haruhi so worked up for, and why are they both sweating. "Oh God, that was quite long, Kaoru thanks for leading me." What the fuck, did they do, and what the hell is she thanking for...le-leading her... did they just...do..it...without me or instead of me!!

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Back to the normal point of view

That was all of it...she just wanted to use the bathroom...for her personal business... he frowned at a now smiling Haruhi. "Did by any chance, Hikaru catched up with us?" She asked him. Before he could open his mouth and say no, Hikaru popped up from one of the bushes behind them. "..uhh I'm here.." He was so uspet that he couldn't face his two bestfriends. They all headed to the camp grounds, but unfortunately got lost. When they all arrived every-one were already at their tent. They walked and searched for their tent.

Several minutes later

"As your punishement, you have to sleep in a sleeping bag and you'll have your own place, don't worry its out of range from here, and totally safe." The teacher pointed them the way and gave them 3 sleeping bags. As they walked deeper to the forest, Hkaru dialed his home number and ordered one of his servants to bring 1 tent for 3 peoples that can sleep in it. He then hanged the phone up.

"Kaoru would you mind to get the tents that I asked." He simply nodded and head his way, which is the opposite way of where there going, leaving Haruhi and Hkaru alone.

As soon as the younger Hitachiin was out of both hearing and sight range he said turning to Haruhi, "What happened.." Pinning her to a tree. "Hikaru..wha-what?!" She looked at Hikaru whose now almost ready to cry. "Tell me the truth Haruhi, did you make love with my brother without me knowing!!" He gripped his wrist as he was licking her neck forcefully. "Hikaru, stop, and why sould I betray you anyway, so stop this alre-" He took the chance to get full access of her mouth. She moaned. She felt him begging for more access. He used his other free hand to hold her chin, making her open her mouth. He took all his advantages and roamed her mouth. She finally gave up and surrendered as they slowly broke their great passionate kiss. He smirked at her sight of being a helpless girl who can't resist him, and a girl who needs more than passion to be complete...Lust...that as the only thing she needed to be complete. "I thought you wanted me to stop, so I stopped." He felt that he need to complete her but he needed to control himself. She put her arms around his neck, "did I say that?" she stuck her tongue out "blehh!!" she looked at his lovers now pissed face. "I dare you to do that again!!"

She did the same thing but she felt something caught her tongue. "I want you to beg me to release your tongue from my finger and I also want you to punish me for being naughty.." he gently bit her ears. "No" she resisted showing all her pride. "That's what you want, then I'll have no choice but to torture you as my punishement." he pinned her in the ground.

"Don't tell me you're going to do this all night?" A voice came from behind them. "Kaoru thank goodness..I'm saved." She struggled but just got caught closer to the older twin. She felt a bump at her lovers pants. "...Hikaru, what's wrong with your pants?" she asked and looked at the sight, blushing madly. "..haruhi, it just happened when I first pinned you down, and it just keep raising..." The younger twin didn't bother looking at the two and set the tent up. "If you two are planning to fuck all night, would you get your own tent, and make sure you don't wake me up with all your moans or anything.." He shrugged. She pushed Hikaru away and head to where Kaoru is. "I wasn't planning to do that, and you Hikaru would you do something about that erection of yours, its disturbing and I feel uncomfortable around you.." She gave him and his erection a quick glance and shrugged. "You're so mean Haruhi, I can't believe you disgrace my pal whose going to befruit you eventually." He smirked at the idea of Haruhi begging him to do it. "In your dreams Hikaru, and I don't want that to happen unless I'm in the mood or age." She needs to control herself to stop the temptation. "It's finished Haruhi, since Hikaru is being perverted to you, you can sleep in my side." He smiled at her pretending to be innocent. "Haruhi, the teacher gave us our bags with our clothings in it packed by our parents.." He gave her, her own bag.

"Oh god, why did okaasaa, packed this." She held up a tight t-shirt with a bear printed on the middle and an ultra mini short. "I guess I better change...in the bushes?!" She just remembered that the changing room is really REALLY far away from where they are. "No peeking!!" She yelled and gave them both long deadly glares again, but unfortunately they did peeked and also taped it in the video "for further investigation" as they say..

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Chapter 13 done yay!! It's just limes but the second 'ill be lemons... Note : please review and be nice this is my first fanfic...