This is something I was writing for Creative Writing. The problem was, I never told the people about the background of the story! So even though 90 of them loved it, most didnt understand it! Bah! Ok, well here we go real quick. SHE IS DROWNING. This is a STREAM OF DREAMS. Aka- what she is thinking while she is drowning. Soooo you can invent anyway you want how she got underwater, the fact is that right now she is underwater and that is what matters. Ok? Ok! So without further ado I give you,
Forever Never Fades
"Anywhere but here," I whispered, my words flowing forth like dreamy illusions. The letters lingered in the air, delicately fading. The cabin of an airplane replaced the sight of the sloshing liquid.
"Ticket please," the flight attendant asked, his hand extending towards me warmly, "otherwise I can't tell you where you sit," he laughed, his crystal blue eyes hanging like sapphires in the empty space of time. My arm moved, ticket in hand, and as the man took it smiling, the icy water sapped my vision. I was reaching for the surface of a concave mirror, sunlight playing across its body. The yellow matched my dress.
I was seated, my red fingernails fidgeting with the air vent unsuccessfully. No matter how much I would spin, twist, and scratch, it wouldn't turn off. I was so cold. My hands numbed into a painful symphony of blooming fingertips. My arms were frozen to the core, my matching cardigan bringing no warmth. I closed my eyes, and the suffocation opened them. The mural of sunshine was gone, replaced by the image of my screaming face.
My mother wasn't letting me leave on a Friday night, but that wouldn't stop me. Within the hour I was at the club, alcohol being served every-which-way. Someone handed me a drink, without second thought I could feel it trailing down my throat, bubbling, burning through my esophagus. My lungs let out a roar of fire, tingling and teasing my every nerve. I swallowed, icy water invading my system like a cancerous disease. Sapphire Eyes caught my gaze, I couldn't resist him. I walked, my feet kicked, the Dior heels I was wearing lazily floated away as I tried for the end of my watery dungeon.
I gasped, my lungs filled with liquid, my body purged itself, blood leaving with the intrusion. My eyes swelled, the pressure hammering me behind the irises. Sapphire Eyes leaned in, his lips touching mine. I knew I would never kiss another pair. With hesitation, I reclined. His eyes searched me, piercing into me, past the skin, flesh, and bone, down straight to my very essence, my soul. He saw it, and I knew, "My heart will always find its way to you."
Suspended, hanging by less then a thread, my hands touched ice, trapped; the ring he gave me glistening. My face betrayed a smile, the diamond radiated, his engraving shining through the blackening world, 'Mi Amor'. I was falling, dying, wishing I could have said the words, 'I do'.
"Por Siempre," I promised, and faded away.
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Side Note: Please review my work, all input is accepted. Unless of course you just want to put something along the lines of "Fucking Sucks!" thats nice if it "Fucking Sucks!" but why do you think that? What can be done to make it better? Stuff like that!
MY WORK BELONGS TO ME (c) is not pending or anything!!! ;3 If you steal it I shall find you and cut off your thumbs. Im just kidding, or am i/gg