Hey everyone! This is my first fanfic so if there is any tips you would like to give me send me a PM or write something in a review. I think this should be a one shot but if you want me to make more chapters I will. Ok, on with the story!
PS: This is not for Mylan fans.
Disclaimer: I do not own Maximum Ride. If I did I wouldn't be writing fanfics!
The Death of Dylan
Dylan POV:
"OH MY GOD!" Max screamed, "LEAVE ME ALONE YOU [insert swear word]!"
"Come on, Max I was created to love you! Why can't you accept that?" I asked. That was probably a mistake considering she's been screaming at me like this for the past two weeks. She turned and faced me; her eyes were full of hatred.
"I will never love you," she said, her voice menacingly calm, "Why can't you accept that?" well, I got pretty angry when she said that because I know she won't love me cause Fang is in the way. Fang, I hate that guy! He steals away Max from me so she can't even find out who I am! But I will get her; it won't be easy, but she will be mine!
"Max, you may not love me now but I bet if Fang left you would," I said.
Her face darkened then she said, "You will be dead by dawn." And with that she stormed down the hall into her bed room. Now how many times has someone said that threat and nothing happened? Exactly, a lot. I just shrugged off the thought that Max was serious and went to bed.
Max POV:
"He's asleep now," I whispered, "You guys can come out." I sat on my bed as I watched a group of FanGirls walk out of my closet. There were five of them, Mollie, Jennifer, Hope, Lola, and Hannah. I had posted on Fang's blog to find any FanGirls who hated Dylan. I was surprised to find that there were millions of them! So I guess it' team Fax for the win.
"Lola, get the torture tools," Mollie ordered her friend. Lola obeyed without hesitation and pulled out a brief case.
"So a slow painful death or a quick and easy one?" she asked, turning to me. I thought for a moment, I wasn't quite sure which one to choose. Then I thought of how much he wants Fang to leave and I knew which one to choose.
Dylan POV: (A/N: This will be the last POV changes.)
I was sleeping peacefully until I felt a painful burning in the pit of my stomach. I opened my eyes and saw five girls standing around my bed. Like WTH? The burning in my stomach got worse.
"Who are you and why are you in my room?" I asked. They all grinned evilly at me and looked at each other like they were plotting something against me. That freaked me out like a lot!
One of the girls stepped forward. She had short-ish, brown hair and big, blue eyes.
"We're here to make sure that your end comes quickly," she said in an eerie tone.
"Nice evil tone there, Mollie," another girl said. The other girl had long, wavy, brown hair and big, brown eyes.
"Thank you hope," said the girl who apparently was named Mollie. The other girls stood there waiting for something to happen. That burning feeling I my stomach got so unbearable I screamed in pain.
The last thing I remember are all those girls grinning and chanting, "FAX RULES! FAX LIVES FOREVER!"
So that's my first fanfic! I hope you enjoyed it! Questions? Comments? Feel free to PM me or write a review! Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. And do you guys think I should make this a story or just leave it as a one shot?
R&R love, No namer44