Finally after all this time thinking of how to rewrite ajs here it is! i'm so sorry for disappointing you for saying i was stopping the rginal ajs but i felt like i rushed it and half the plot was random abit so i've changed the plot abit. If you want me to continue writing the orginal ajs and this one ill be glad to but enough of me going on...

I give you the new rewritten Akatsuki's Jigoku Shoujo!

Also this is dedicated to MistyTrees, Ying9, Canbea and many of my other faithful reviewers from the orginial!

The sounds of a thousand birds and bubbling of chakra was heard if you were close enough to hear or see the two lone figures standing on one of the statues each side of the valley of the end. One figure surrounded by strange red chakra with two fox tails was no other than Naru Uzumaki better known as Naru Namikaze. She had her clothes torn up and blood coated. The second figure standing opposite her was a demon in some ways, the power given to him by a curse mark. He was only known as the famous Uchiha clan survivor Sasuke Uchiha, his clothes were also torn and blood coated but not as much as Naru's clothes. He had in his hand Kakashi's famous technique, the Chidori, while Naru held in her hand the fourth hokage's famous technique, the Rassengan. Both of them just stared at each other smirking wondering if this would be the last attack they would both do. Soon they both leaped from each statue towards each other then time seemed to slow down for Naru as her memories and past with Sasuke flashed before her eyes including the many hugs and kisses they shared but when Sasuke ran away from Konoha that was her way of seeing his rejection. Sasuke was in no better condition as he watched his little fox approach him with the rassengan and wondered where they went wrong in life to end up like this. Soon they were face to face their attacks ended up going off track from the previous target though. Sasuke's chidori ended up in Naru's chest making her gasp in shock and in the need for breath. Naru's rassengan ended up in Sasuke's stomach making him grunt in pain from the feeling of his insides twisting around. The rain soon started to come down heavy as their hands left each others body and their bodies came crashing into the water and rocks below. Blood leaking out their bodies mingling in with the water. Naru found a rock close to her and used the last of her energy and strength to lift her body onto it as she tried to breathe. Sasuke just remained floating on top of the water his hands clutching his stomach in pain. Neither of them noticed Kakashi, Shikamaru, Gai and Asuma arrive as they were too busy with their injuries.

'Naru are you ok?' Shikamaru asked her as he lifted her into his arms holding her bridal style. Naru gasped in pain as Shikamaru looked over her body for injuries. He found she had a cut straight through her right eye made by a kunei, the chidori mark in her chest, burns on her whole body and her hand was cut, burnt also.

'I'm…ok…just get…Sasuke back…to Konoha,' Naru gasped as she then fell into unconsciousness as did Sasuke. Kakashi then grabbed Sasuke and the six made their way back to Konoha quickly to get the two into a hospital fast as it was most likely they would both die from their injuries. They rushed them to Konoha looking like blurs through the trees. Soon they landed in front of the gates panting abit to see Tsunade with medic nins ready to take Sasuke and Naru away to the hospital. Everything seemed to be a blur after that as they were both rushed into the emergency rooms which were spare as Neji and Chouji were still trying to be saved also. This was major panic as there wasn't enough medic nins to handle all four at the time with each of their conditions.

'We need a team of medics to sort Naru out, same with Sasuke!' Tsunade shouted as she walked towards reception where Hinata, Ino, Tenten, Sakura, Kakashi, Shikamaru, Gai, Gaara, Temari, Kankuro, Asuma and Kurenai were waiting patiently for news on their team mates. Shizune then came running through holding a few scrolls which were used for emergencies only and headed into Naru's room where they were healing her. This made Tsunade worried and she let out a deep sigh.

'you'll be glad to know that Kiba is ok, Neji and Chouji are now in stable condition but I'm not completely sure with Naru and Sasuke, they came in near death condition and might not be able to survive this,' Tsunade informed the group before she walked away into Naru's room as she needed the most care. The group just sat in silence taking in the information as they wondered why the war had to happen and why their friends/students had to suffer for it.

XXXXX With Naru XXXXX

Tsunade and Shizune were both desperately trying to get Naru's heart working properly again as it kept beating slower and slower by the second as did her breathing. It seems the Chidori had hit her straight where the air goes through to the heart damaging the passage way. It seemed most likely that Naru would most likely die than heal but Tsunade and Shizune weren't going to give up just yet.

XXXXX With Sasuke XXXXX

The medic nins were doing their best to heal the bloody Uchiha but the Rassengan had damaged his organs inside and would have to be replaced if they found any serious damage to them. It seems his heart was ok but he's breathing was slower than normal which worried them to no end. They all just concentrated on getting their prized Uchiha healed.

XXXXX In Naru's mindscape XXXXX

Naru was surrounded in black as she just seemed to float in the never ending darkness of her consciousness. She could feel herself dying and thought it typical of her. Kyuubi just watched his container with sad eyes, he had grown attached to Naru since she was a little kid trying to survive everyday from drunken angry villagers to elite skilled Anbu. He could see the sparkle in her eyes grow dimmer by the minute making the situation even more sad. No matter what he tried he couldn't reach her and she couldn't hear or see him. Kyuubi just reflected the good times he had with Naru and smiled sadly before letting a tear go knowing if he's container survived this she would be in for more pain than she expected.

XXXXX In the real world XXXXX

Tsunade and Shizune had managed to heal as much as her chest and lungs as they could but nothing seemed to get her breathing back to normal or her heart beat. She was blind from the cut through her right eye and she couldn't even open it as it was damaged beyond repair. Most of her burns had gone also but they were harder to get rid of as it was Kyuubi's chakra that made them. Soon Naru was wheeled through to another room where they kept her for the night and the same happened with Sasuke but he seemed in better condition than Naru was.

XXXXX The next morning XXXXX

Neji, Chouji and Sasuke woke up and noticed their bodies healed all together but had to stay in another day to make sure they were ok to walk about. No one but Tsunade and Shizune knew of Naru's condition but weren't going to tell the others just yet as they knew it would cause more panic and arguments than there was already. Jiraiya was in Naru's room watching the face of his student. He was planning to surprise her with a three year training trip but now this happened he wasn't so sure that was going to happen anymore. Tears silently slid down his face as he remembered Naru's father the night he sealed Kyuubi into Naru. If Naru were to die he would just crack, he felt guilty for Minato now he grown onto Naru he felt like she was the one thing keeping him alive. He viewed her as a daughter, Tsunade viewed Naru as a daughter. Tsunade had actually agreed to date Jiraiya to see what it was like and they became a couple but have been keeping it a secret apart from Shizune and Naru who knew about it by spying on them. Jiraiya was brought out of his thoughts but the sound of Naru's heart stopping. He quickly picked up Naru carefully and headed for the Hokage tower where Tsunade was with Gaara, the Konoha twelve (Chouji, Neji and Sasuke are there also) and their sensais giving them the update of what happened.

'Tsunade Naru's stopped breathing!' Jiraiya yelled as he came flying through the window to see them all looking shocked. Tsunade just stood up and quickly ran to him and she checked Naru's heartbeat for herself. All you heard was Tsunade's screams…

Phew that took a while to write and to come up with hope you liked it cause i have to admit i had fun writing this version even if it is a little different to way i usually write my stories anyways ill give you a little preview so next chappie and ill start with the polls again!

Poll 1 : Which two Akatsuki members should come get Naru?

A) the sexy art members Deidara and Sasori

B) the sexy immortal members Hidan and Kakuzu

C) the sexy Itachi (fangirl squeal) and sushi Kisame

the choice is up to you my lovely readers... i've missed your reviews and silent cheering me on... I've missed it all! i'll start updating again cause i just had a long period of time where my muse wasn't being inspiried but its back! anyways Ja Ne Kisa xXx

Preview :

'Kit...no...'

'Naru come back!'

'I've got to leave this place...'