This is my first story to be published. Flames will be ignored, but constructive criticism is asked for. I realize that this won't follow the original story, but that is the basics of a Fanfiction: making a new story up.
Prologue
It started as a normal day in the Leaf village, but that soon changed. The sky changed from bright blue to black. The nine tailed fox was spotted on the horizon. Shouting could be heard.
"Everyone hurry. Get everyone who is not a ninja to safety!"
Ninjas were running everywhere. In all of the confusion, no one seemed to care about a little girl crouched in an alleyway. She had whisker marks on her cheeks. She was the container of the five-tailed wolf. She stood up and something in her mind led her to walk to the battlefield. Some how she was ignored and was able to slip by all the ninjas unnoticed. She happened to wander into the cave where the 4th Hokage was. Upon hearing a noise, the little girl hid behind a rock and watched.
The 4th sensed a small source of chakra and he looked around until he saw the little girl. He beckoned her to come closer. She slowly walked to him. She saw a bundle in his arms and tried to see what it was. The 4th smiled and pulled away part of the blanket. There was a baby in the bundle. The girl smiled. The Hokage got on his knees and got to her eye level.
"Will you promise me something?"
She nodded.
"Please, watch over this little one. Can you do that for me?"
She nodded again. He stood back up.
"He will be the hero of the village."
The five-tailed wolf stored this memory in the girl's mind. For a minute the wolf took over the girl.
"I shall have her protect the boy. When ever she sees him she will feel a connection."
The 4th nodded, "Thank you Gobi."
Gobi let the girl take over again. Someone ran into the cave and the little girl got scared. She quickly hid behind the Hokage's legs.
A young ninja named Kenura came in. "Lord Hokage, the fox is getting closer!"
The Hokage nodded. "Kenura, take this little one away from the battlefield please."
Kenura looked at the girl behind his legs and smiled, "I know who this is. Come on Ikaru, we need to get out of here."
The Hokage thought, 'Ikaru, huh, well Naruto you won't be alone.'
Ikaru quickly ran over to Kenura. Kenura took her into her arms.
"I've been wondering where you were."
The 4th said, " Hurry, and get away from here."
Kenura nodded and turned around. She left quickly and started running away from the battle. She met up with her team who had been assigned to get the villagers to safety. They then headed to the safe houses and waited for news. After a while it was safe for the people to come out. There had been many deaths and the 4th Hokage was among them. It was rumored that there was a baby found by his body and that baby was taken to the 3rd. Some who knew the truth wanted to kill the baby because he had the nine tails sealed in him. Others did not. In the end the baby, Naruto, was taken to the orphanage. Ikaru was taken back as well and the village started to repair the damage.
