Hi guys I'm writing a sequel to Allegiant and I just want to say that sometimes I may not post regularly because of school, etc. There might be some Hunger Games action going on sometimes :). If you want to suggest any ideas or help me make changes in the story, feel free to review!
Tobias POV:
After hearing what Caleb told me about Tris I feel like shooting myself. She can't leave me! After all we've been through, I can't stay by myself. I need her. As soon as I get myself together, I run as fast as I can to the hospital, pushing and shoving several people on my way. I quickly ask for Tris's room number and rush over there. As soon as I see her, I start to cry.
Tris POV:
Where am I? What happened to me? Where is Tobias? I ask myself, looking around the place I am in right now. I'm in a house with a cracked TV in front of me. It is not a Dauntless or an Abnegation house, it looks like a miner's house. Next to me is a lady with tears on her face, and on my other side is a girl, about 12, staring at the TV with anger. I try to talk to them, wanting to figure out what is happening, but they don't notice me. On the TV there is a show with some interviews going on. There is a beautiful girl in a dress LIT ON FIRE, giving the audience a death stare. I look on the caption: District 12: Katniss Everdeen.
Tobias POV:
Tris has been asleep for 4 days, and the doctors say that she has a 2% chance of waking up. I had to beg them to keep her attached to the heart monitoring device, created by this guy called Beetee. They gave Tris a week to wake up, or there would be a funeral for her otherwise. I look at her still, beautiful face and her blonde, shimmering hair. I go back to the times we have spent together. When she was the first jumper, the ferris wheel, how I wanted to kill her because of Jeanine putting me in that simulation. I am still so amazed by how she didn't hate me for all the mean answers for her questions at the beginning of initiation. How she didn't get mad at me when I screamed at her during the part of initiation where she went through Lauren's fearscape. I love her so much. Tris, my beautiful Tris, I beg you to wake up. My life will be nothing without you. Please…
Tris POV:
I hear someone breathing next to me. I could guess this sound anywhere, It's Tobias! I want to yell his name, but as soon as I say a word, instead of his name, blood starts coming out of my mouth. It's full of it, I spit it out, and Tobias wakes up immediately. I feel my body shaking, with more and more blood running out of my mouth.
Tobias POV:
Tris woke up. But with her body shaking and her spitting out blood. I called the doctor right away and kept on screaming at him: "Save her, now! SAVE HER!" The nurses dragged me out of the room, because I was "distracting the doctor". After what it seemed like forever, the doctor finally let me back in. When I passed him, I gave him the best death look I could possibly make. And then I saw her. Her small, even tiny, beautiful body laying on the bed attached to a lot of wires. When Tris saw me, she wanted to get out of the bed and hug me, but I was first. I ran up to her and said: "You are not going anywhere, my dear Tris!" giving her a long kiss. She's back, and I'm not going to lose her again. Never.
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