I know that I'm not good at updating if anybody wants to help me that would be greatly appreciated. I need help with my story I have good ideas of where I want this to go I just need that extra help. PLEEEEEEEEAAAAASE!!!!

This is the remake of my previous story starting at chapter 1 obviously.

I own nothing of twilight!!!

_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_

I was 16 when it happened……..

*Flashback* Sunday, September 5th

We arrived at Billy's at noon because Charlie had pulled an all nighter got off at 10 am and had to get all his fishing gear ready. I had asked him if he really wanted to go fishing he just looked so tired he cracked a smile and said 'Yes Bells' always smiling at my tendency to worry about him. Somebody had to do it so I stepped up to the plate.

Who was I to deny Charlie his fun and plus I wouldn't mind seeing my best friend Jake I haven't seen him in a while we've been friends since we were both in diapers!

"Hey Billy got here as fast as possible" he said shooting an apologetic look to Billy who just shrugged it off as nothing

"No big deal Charlie I know you've been working crazy hours just glad you could make it. And Jake here has been bugging me about seeing Bella" he added the last part in there smiling as he said it

I blushed and obvious reaction to being the center of attention even if just for a minute

"Thanks a lot Dad" Jake mumbled getting a slight tint of pink in his russet colored cheeks

"Well we'll be back late, no funny business, and order pizza if you guys get hungry" Billy said looking at both of us

"Kay" I said looking down at my feet.

"Got it Billy"

We both said at the same time making our words sound like a jumbled mess

We both just looked at each other laughing hysterically

10 hours later Charlie came in pushing Billy they both looked dead on their feet

"Catch any fish?" I asked trying to be interested both nodded too tired to answer

"What did you guys do?" Billy asked enthusiastically

"Well um Jake and I played a video game. . . which I won at!. Watched TV, and some movies we just got done eating the pizza before you guys came in"

I heard Jake mumble

"You only won because you cheated"

"Whatever all I did was accidently bump into your arm, not my fault you can't hold onto the controller butter fingers" I said taunting him I nudged his side causing him so stumble a little I just started laughing at his pouty face which made him more angry at the fact that he had been beaten by a girl.

Returning the favor he about pushed me out of the window I just glared playfully at him

"Enough kids, Bells ya ready to go?" he asked yawning the process of asking me

"Yea Dad" I turned around to go but then had to turn on my step again

"Bye Billy and Jake see ya next week" I said waving as I exited the door I heard Jake mumble something like 'sure sure'

I made my way to Charlie's cruiser talk about attention getter I sighed and hopped in the passenger seat. I already had myself buckled before Charlie even had his keys out of his pocket. He was so going to be the sleeping of the dead when we got home. I could probably fire his gun and he would just grumble and roll over I giggled at my own thoughts

When he finally got inside I examined him more closely seeing if he was okay to drive.

"Dad you look like the walking dead. Let me drive you can sleep on the way home"

"Bells your only 16 I will drive us home it's not that long of a drive I can survive" he said unintentionally rhyming his words.

"Dad I have my permit I can drive you're in the car" I pleaded with him

"No end of discussion Bells" he snapped

"Fine" I huffed I couldn't really hold it against him he has been letting me drive every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday practicing my skills.

Halfway home I started to doze off. I didn't think I was this tired but apparently spending the whole day with Jake tired me out. At least Alice wasn't dragging me around a mall making me try on 20 million different outfits.

A couple minutes into my sleep I felt my head hit up against the window. What the hell

"Dad" I groaned his name only to realize that the bright light shining in my eyes were not a good thing Oh My God

"Dad, Dad wake up" I screamed to him he jumped and jerked the wheel I braced myself for impact this was going to hurt. Charlie predicted the path of the car and jerked his wheel a hard right we were barreling at 65mph towards a tree.

I woke up in a daze to darkness, the smell of rust and salt, and the smell of gasoline this is not good. I turned my head from side to side I noticed Charlie was not responding

"Dad" I grumbled out my voice felt really scratchy. I was started to be overwhelmed by the smell of blood god I hate blood. To keep myself from passing out I started breathing through my mouth and out through my nose. Breath in Breath out calm yourself Bella

"Bella" I heard Charlie say

"Dad are you okay? stay with me Dad"

"I think we've been in an accident Dad I need to get help." I said feeling my tears starting to build up.

"I'm sorry Bells I should've listened to you."

"It's okay Dad really I need you to stay with me" I said pleading with god to keep my Dad alive

"I love ya Bells" Charlie said the end of his sentence fading out

"I love you too Dad" I got no reply

"Dad, Oh god Dad please open your eyes Charlie oh god" I started sobbing maybe he just needed to rest

I reached for the radio only to have a sharp pain radiating from my arm. I then reached with my left hand having to lean in farther to reach Charlie's radio I hoped this worked

I squeezed the side button on the radio with all my energy I'm starting to feel faint

"Hello" I whispered into the radio I hoped they could hear me

"Hello is anybody there" using my fast fading energy source

"Chief Swan is that you I thought you had the night off, just can't stay away can you?" Officer Pratt said into the radio.

"Help" I yelled out with as much force as I could muster up. And then everything went black. I had used all my energy everything that I had left.

I was falling into an abyss of blackness; I just hope I can pull through