Hi!
This is my first Lost fanfic. I hope you enjoy. See it as
Chapter 1, if you like, and I'll write more depending on It tells the story of Ben
Cooper, who has been washed up on the island after his boat is caught
in a Anyway,
I hope you enjoy.
your
reactions and reviews. This takes place in Season 2, between Fire
+ Water and The Long Con.
storm. The paragraph in italics is his flashback.
He opened his blue eyes. All he saw above him was the swirling abyss of the clouds above; still blackened by the storm that knocked him out a few minutes...or hours ago. He didn't really know. He fumbled up, his hair dripping wet, with the salty water dripping down onto his lips and into his mouth, the saltyness causing his tongue to retreat in disgust. He was lying on his boat all this time. Just floating in the sea. As he looked around he saw the boat wasn't moving. It was lodged between two rocks and was sinking slightly, as some water was beginning to seep onto the deck. He saw that land wasn't far away. An island... He thought. Seeing that his time was running out, he dived into the sea and swam to the piece of land that was waiting for him ahead. It wasn't that far. He could make it. Although, as he swam the current was battling against him. It got stronger, the waves pulling him under, the land floating away from him. The water gushed into his mouth and he saw himself slowly sinking beneath the water. Darkness prevailed once more.
He opened his eyes again. He coughed up that salty water, his chest forcibly beating it out of him as he leant over and gagged on the beach. He looked around him and saw a crowd of people circling him.
"Where
am I?" he croaked, his voice still frail after the ordeal.
"You're..." the handsome man looked around to the others
as if to ask how to answer that question, "...on an island. My
name's Jack. Let me take you to get some rest, obviously you haven't
eaten for a while, and-"
"I don't need rest."
he rudely interrupted. "I need to know who these people are.
Where I am. My boat...I was sailing and it just...it just got lost in
this freak, random storm...and..." he looked up at these people,
listening to his every word as if he was an alien, "...and I
need to go home."
He got up and pushed past the people,
and looked around desperately.
"Where's my boat? What
have you done with my boat?" he shouted, now standing opposite
the crowd with Jack standing in front of them, "Why are you
here?"
"Because we're lost." Jack replied.
"Lost?" he asked, now on the beach letting Jack put
bandages on his wounds while eating a banana, "But how?" he
asked with his mouth full.
"Oceanic 815." Jack told
him. "Flight 815. We were all on it. Our plane went a thousand
miles off course. The tail section crashed at the other side of the
island, the majority of us here were at the front of the plane."
He looked at Jack expecting more.
"You're joking?"
"No." Jack said bluntly.
"So you're
telling me that, I'd say, 40-odd people survived a plane crash?"
he asked cynically.
"I don't lie. I don't have time to
lie. We've been here for two months. Strange things have been
happening-"
"Ow!" he interrupted as Jack put
the needle into his flesh.
"Sorry." Jack finished
up sewing up the wound and put the needle back in his kit. "You
better get some rest. I've gotta go check on something." He got
up, and put on his backpack and starting making his way into the
jungle.
"What strange things?" he called back. Jack
turned around.
"You wouldn't believe me if I told you."
he continued walking ahead.
"My name's Ben. Ben Cooper."
he told him, now seeing Jack as his only friend as others looked at
him as if he was bad news.
"Nice to meet you, Ben."
Jack smiled. He turned and made his way into the jungle.
Ben had to use a raggy bit of cloth no one wanted for bedding and
had to light his own fire. He had been alone all day - no one had
talked to him other than Jack. He was alone with his thoughts, and
gazed up to the stars glistening there beautifully, sitting unaware
of the many problems in his mind. They soothed him somehow. He
glanced to the rest of the camp - other fires glistening like the
stars at different points, people sitting there in couples laughing
and joking, cuddling and playing games, while others preferred to sit
alone. He couldn't understand why these people were so calm. They had
been away from their homes for two months, their loved ones and
familes assumed them dead. They had no chance of getting home. Yet
there they were, sitting together and talking like they had no
problems in the world. He felt the heat leave his face and saw his
fire was slowly dying, the darkness consuming him making him
invisible like he felt. He began blowing frantically and started
looking around for any spare bits of wood and stone.
"No!
No! No! Dammit!" he cursed as he blew at the dying fire,
desperately trying to revive it like Jack done to him today, "Not
now! Come on!"
"Here." a woman's voice said
from above.
He looked up. He saw a woman of Mexican-American
origin, wearing a black vest and holding some wood in her arm. Her
face stood out from the black starry background behind her. She was
holding a few bits of wood and offered some to Ben.
"Thanks..." he said gently, taking the wood off her and
adding it to the fire, bringing it back to life.
"I know
what it's like." she said flatly and bluntly, as if she knew
exactly what he was thinking.
"Know what what's like?"
he ventured.
"To be new. People don't trust you round
here. Because they think you're one of Them. Or have an agenda."
she said, as she sat down beside him.
"One of Them?"
he asked, feeling stupid as he asked it.
"The Others.
These...people. Out there. In the jungle. They live there. And take
people. And corrupt them."
"Right..." he
replied, now realising he's sounding patronising by not believing
what she says.
"My name's Ana. Ana-Lucia." ignoring
him and putting out her hand.
"I'm Ben. Ben Cooper."
he said as he shook her hand.
"Cooper, huh?" she
asked as she eat a bit of mango. She split it in half, "You want
some?"
"Thanks..." he smiled as he accepted.
"So what'd you do in the real world?" she asked.
"I was a journalist."
"Journalist, huh?"
she repeated. "Any top scoops you can tell me about since I've
been away?" she asked nosily and jokingly.
"Not
really." he laughed, sounding uncertain. "Same old crap.
Some celeb picks their nose and it's a top story."
"I
like your accent. Where you from?" she continued her
interrogation.
"A place called Edinburgh. It's in
Scotland."
"Oh wow. I've always wanted to go there.
Beautiful place." she told him as she looked at the sea still
raging at night.
Ben cracked half a smile as if to agree with her.
He rushed down would could have been
countless corridors. They were so clean. He could hear the sounds of
the hospital all around him. The square lights on the ceiling shifted
by as he ran from corridor to corridor like a lost boy in a maze. He
came up to a reception, and approached an unbothered receptionist
drinking tea. Ben got up and stormed away from his father, bumping the nurse out
of the way, fuelled by rage and indescribable sadness.
"Samuel. Samuel Cooper. Is he here? I'm
his son." he said frantically and out of breath. He looked up at
the clock and saw it was 2am. The nurse picked up the phone
unbothered after she input the name on the computer.
"Hello
Ward 2. This is Reception. We're looking for a Samuel Cooper.
Samuel...yes. S-A-M...yes...U-E-L. And then Cooper." she said
and then waited, taking another drink of her tea. Ben grunted in
protest. She took no notice.
"Yes hello..." she said
in a broad Scottish accent, "Samuel's son is here." she
moved the mouthpiece away and looked at him.
"What?"
he asked.
"Your name, dear."
"Ben."
She moved the mouthpiece back slowly as if it was in rebellion to
his offish attitude.
"His son's name is Ben." she
looked at him. "Yes. Your father is there. You can go through."
she told him.
He didn't bother thanking her. He looked at the
signs pointing to Ward 2 and made his way up endless stairs and
walking briskly through countless corridors as people slept all
around him. He finally made his way into Ward 2 and was intercepted
by a young male nurse.
"Oright mate." he said deeply.
"Name?"
"Ben." he said impatiently.
"Of course, Ben. I'll lead ye to yer da'."
He lead
him through the ward. Ben looked at his sides where other people were
sleeping, or still lying away to sick to even sleep. The nurse
stopped and he knew this was it.
"He's in there, pal."
he said and walked off.
It was so quiet now. All Ben had to do
was walk round the corner into the room and his dad would be there.
His throat went dry with dread. His professional, adult mind was
numbed. He was a kid again.
He walked round and entered the
room. His dad was at the far-side of the room by the window, the city
lights of Edinburgh shimmering behind him. He saw his dad was
connected to tubes and things he didn't understand. His face was like
stone; set and lifeless. He opened his yellowish eyes, and looked at
his son making no movement.
"What are you doing here?"
he grumbled loudly despite the fact it was 2am.
"Why do
you think I'm here?" Ben said quietly, pulling himself a seat
under the dim light of the ward after-hours.
"Leave. I
don't want you here." he said, the smell of alcohol fuming from
his breath.
"You think I want to be here?" Ben
snapped, now getting angry but keeping it quiet.
"Then why
are you here?"
Ben was silent. He could tell his father
was still drunk. He looked old, aged and tired. He was only in his
late 50s. His throat swelled and emotion gripped him as he considered
the question he was about to ask.
"Why did you try and
commit suicide, dad?"
His father looked at him through his
tired, depressed eyes.
"You ask me why, son..."
"All the stuff you put us through..."
"To
protect you. From me. I will never forgive you...never...for what you
did to me...I will never forgive you..." he said, his voice
strained with emotion and his eyes reddening with sadness at this
moment of weakness.
"Are you saying you're here because of
me...?" he said, consumed with fear and guilt.
"I'm
saying nothing anymore..." he said, and turned his head away.
"Charlie?" he asked and got
no response. "Listen dude...you kinda...stole Claire's baby and
all-"
"I didn't bloody steal Aaron for the last time
Hurley." he snapped.
"Would you listen to what I'm
trying to say?" Hurley pleaded. Charlie looked up and took off
his hood. "I'm tryin' to say...that...I believe you, man. I know
you're not the kinda guy to just steal babies and put them in
danger...especially Aaron."
Hurley expected Charlie to
thank him. But he merely put his hood back on and remained silent in
a dark way. Hurley looked at him, with nothing else to say. Then he
sees Ben returning from the jungle looking tired and haggard.
"Anyway...people got someone else to talk about for the time
being. Looks like he's the only one not to have a reason to hate you
right now, dude..." Hurley said angrily and walked off.
Charlie stayed silent. And looked over to Ben.
"He
will have soon..." he said under his breath.
That's
it! C+C welcomed!
mcgreevers
