Introduction:

I'm sure a lot of people (well, maybe not a lot) have stumbled on to this fairly new "sequel" to MI. I'm new at writing fanfiction (although, I've been lurking the site since I was like, 12), and I would like to start doing commentaries, and I'm going to write one on this horrible fanfiction. Originally, I was going to do a commentary on the original MI, but I thought this would be more fun to do because the story is still in progress.

For those who don't know, this fanfiction was written by an author calling herself xxx666BagatelleIris666xxx. She has written one other fanfiction, which I would say is actually worse than this sequel, titled "Don't Jump" (after the Tokio Hotel song. Noticing a pattern?), which revolves around an emo, human version of Shadow the Hedgehog that time travels, written in exactly the same style as MI ("Enoby" and "Darko" are even in it).

Don't say I didn't warn you when I say this is the worst piece of canon-raping shit I've ever read: .net/s/7777965/1/Dont_Jump

The writer, who's name is apparently Bagatelle Iris (seriously, who names their kid that?), claims to be a fangirl of Tara Gillesbie, while at the same time claiming she has no idea who Tara is when people say she is a Tara impersonator or Tara herself. I find it a little hard to believe that after so many years of remaining dormant, Tara would just spring up in 2012 and start posting new crap to , especially since there is an account, xxxmidnitegoffxxx, who claims to be the actual "Tara," and was in fact just trolling when he (its a guy named Todd) posted MI to the site in 2006. The original bloodyrists666 account has friended xxxmidenitegoffxxx, which contributes to the possibility xxxmidnitegoffxxx is the real thing. However, Tara's account (bloodyrists666) has been hacked multiple times, and there are sources online (Encyclopedia Dramatica, for one) that claim xxxmidnitegoffxxx isn't genuine. Whatever the case, I doubt that this is actually Tara. Had she only written the MI sequel that she is writing now, I would be more curious as to whether or not she is Tara, because its very similar in style to the original MI. The problem is, "Don't Jump," despite seeming a lot like MI at first, is different. You'll get it if you've read both MI and "Don't Jump."

So, after a somewhat lengthy introduction, here is my commentary. ^_^

If people like this, I'll do one on "My Inner Life" (that Zelda crapfic) and other bad fanfiction.