The Ultimate Warrior,
Rising Evil
Disclamer: ok i know we all hate these, but i still have to say, that DBZ DOES NOT BELONG TO ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i wish it did.................
Prologue:
"AHRAGH!" Pain, Unimaginable Pain! Unlike anything i've ever felt! Throughout all of the pain, of all of the battles i have ever survived, nothing has ever ben this intence, this "AHHH!" I -I can't fight it, it's too strong i, no - uh....... :: then everything went black::
A.N. ok, since that was so short, i descided to just throw chapter 1 in with the prologue, k? disclamer above(obviously)
Chapter1: Vegeta
"Boy - what the hell did you have to go and do that for! Why you -" Vegeta's onslaught was cut short, when Gohan suddenly stopped writhing in pain, and stood. That alone wouldn't have been enough to stop Vegeta, but what did stop him, was his EYES. Gohan had at that time looked up, and Vegeta; who ruthlessly, destroyed helpless victims while laughing. Vegeta; who mercilessly would torture his opponents, making them beg for mercy, while he stood, taking pleasure in their pain, and suffering. Vegeta, the Prince of the entire saiyan race, who has faced death, numerouse times, and had experienced the agony of dying looked up into the pools of black that were Gohan's eyes, and froze, in fear. Vegeta had never feared anything in his entire existence, even having died, at the hands of his worst enemy; hurt him;broke him,but never accualy scared him. Now, -what he saw in the eyes of the gentlest person he had ever met in his whole lifetime, the one who could accualy feel sorry for even such a monster as Cell, in those once gentle, and serene eyes, Vegeta now only could see, Pure Evil. His entire essence began to tremble unbiden. Never in his whole life had he known what it was like to truly fear someone. Now looking at the young boy who was forced to grow up, and mature into a fghter before his time, who had to give up his youth, his childhood, to become strong enough to defeat his opponents at such an early age, the boy who- reminded me, of myself Vegeta thought wordlessly. Before Vegeta could get a grasp on his emotions, he looked on, frozen in pure Terror, as Gohan turned, with the muredrous look in his eyes that just barely supressed that 'kill', 'hate', emotion, once never even a thought, and now: ever pressent in Gohan's imposing glare.
Vegeta watched, as he turned, and bowed to Babidi, speaking at last, the words "What is you first task, master?" Babidi smirked, an evil smile playing upon his lips, as he replied " Now Gohan, for your first task, under my service, I want you to eliminate this- neucence, that is defiling my presence." Gohan answered, barely containign his insane glee, "With Pleasure, master." Before turning and lunging for Vegeta with murder in his eyes. Vegeta barely had time to register what he was hearing. He was just standing there in shock- Gohan, selling out to the enemy?! Traitor! How!? Before being brutaly snaped back to this nightmarish reality, as Gohan delivered a crushing blow to his ribs, shatering a few, and the momentum, driving one to reirce his left lung, making it increasingly dificuly to breathe, with each painskaking breath. Blood filled his lungs, slowly smoldering him, as he dazzedly registered the flury of punches and kicks, exploding agony, into every part of his pain wracked body, when finaly everything stopped for a frozen moment in time, as Gohan flew up, and shouted "Dark MASENKO!" and powered up a glowing ball of pure dark light, and threw it at vegeta's broken body; his vision gone, he took one last breath, and seeped into unconsiouseness.
SORRRRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i was typing this on wordpad, so there's ALOT of spelling errors....also: I know; this was short, I HATE SHORT! ....but it does make a good cliffhanger, ne? well, i'm gonna go start typing up the half of chapter 2 that i have....WARNING! i think i want anouther good clifhanger, so i MIGHT, end up splitting what i origionaly had in half.................... OR NOT! it depends on my sis's and friend's opinion.......k? if i don't i'll just leave it as it was, (the longer version of ch2) and will be able to get the FULL 2(whick explains ALOT) up, so PLEASE REVIEW! .....hehe, just asking, OK FINE, I SAID I'D HURRY! I'LL HAVE IT OUT SOON GUYS, SO QUIT BUGGING MEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rising Evil
Disclamer: ok i know we all hate these, but i still have to say, that DBZ DOES NOT BELONG TO ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i wish it did.................
Prologue:
"AHRAGH!" Pain, Unimaginable Pain! Unlike anything i've ever felt! Throughout all of the pain, of all of the battles i have ever survived, nothing has ever ben this intence, this "AHHH!" I -I can't fight it, it's too strong i, no - uh....... :: then everything went black::
A.N. ok, since that was so short, i descided to just throw chapter 1 in with the prologue, k? disclamer above(obviously)
Chapter1: Vegeta
"Boy - what the hell did you have to go and do that for! Why you -" Vegeta's onslaught was cut short, when Gohan suddenly stopped writhing in pain, and stood. That alone wouldn't have been enough to stop Vegeta, but what did stop him, was his EYES. Gohan had at that time looked up, and Vegeta; who ruthlessly, destroyed helpless victims while laughing. Vegeta; who mercilessly would torture his opponents, making them beg for mercy, while he stood, taking pleasure in their pain, and suffering. Vegeta, the Prince of the entire saiyan race, who has faced death, numerouse times, and had experienced the agony of dying looked up into the pools of black that were Gohan's eyes, and froze, in fear. Vegeta had never feared anything in his entire existence, even having died, at the hands of his worst enemy; hurt him;broke him,but never accualy scared him. Now, -what he saw in the eyes of the gentlest person he had ever met in his whole lifetime, the one who could accualy feel sorry for even such a monster as Cell, in those once gentle, and serene eyes, Vegeta now only could see, Pure Evil. His entire essence began to tremble unbiden. Never in his whole life had he known what it was like to truly fear someone. Now looking at the young boy who was forced to grow up, and mature into a fghter before his time, who had to give up his youth, his childhood, to become strong enough to defeat his opponents at such an early age, the boy who- reminded me, of myself Vegeta thought wordlessly. Before Vegeta could get a grasp on his emotions, he looked on, frozen in pure Terror, as Gohan turned, with the muredrous look in his eyes that just barely supressed that 'kill', 'hate', emotion, once never even a thought, and now: ever pressent in Gohan's imposing glare.
Vegeta watched, as he turned, and bowed to Babidi, speaking at last, the words "What is you first task, master?" Babidi smirked, an evil smile playing upon his lips, as he replied " Now Gohan, for your first task, under my service, I want you to eliminate this- neucence, that is defiling my presence." Gohan answered, barely containign his insane glee, "With Pleasure, master." Before turning and lunging for Vegeta with murder in his eyes. Vegeta barely had time to register what he was hearing. He was just standing there in shock- Gohan, selling out to the enemy?! Traitor! How!? Before being brutaly snaped back to this nightmarish reality, as Gohan delivered a crushing blow to his ribs, shatering a few, and the momentum, driving one to reirce his left lung, making it increasingly dificuly to breathe, with each painskaking breath. Blood filled his lungs, slowly smoldering him, as he dazzedly registered the flury of punches and kicks, exploding agony, into every part of his pain wracked body, when finaly everything stopped for a frozen moment in time, as Gohan flew up, and shouted "Dark MASENKO!" and powered up a glowing ball of pure dark light, and threw it at vegeta's broken body; his vision gone, he took one last breath, and seeped into unconsiouseness.
SORRRRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i was typing this on wordpad, so there's ALOT of spelling errors....also: I know; this was short, I HATE SHORT! ....but it does make a good cliffhanger, ne? well, i'm gonna go start typing up the half of chapter 2 that i have....WARNING! i think i want anouther good clifhanger, so i MIGHT, end up splitting what i origionaly had in half.................... OR NOT! it depends on my sis's and friend's opinion.......k? if i don't i'll just leave it as it was, (the longer version of ch2) and will be able to get the FULL 2(whick explains ALOT) up, so PLEASE REVIEW! .....hehe, just asking, OK FINE, I SAID I'D HURRY! I'LL HAVE IT OUT SOON GUYS, SO QUIT BUGGING MEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!