AN: Konnichiwa! I originally wrote this story, but it was REALLY bad! So I
gave my rough draft to my friend Fire Lady, and she rewrote it using mine
as an outline. She used some of my own 'things' from the original copy in
her copy. So...Yeah.. That's it!!
Frozen Tears
She looked down at the frozen ground before her, then looked to the cold metal sword being plunged through her stomach. She looked at the man in front of her, a sword through his heart. He fell to the ground, and did not move. She felt her legs become weak and was no longer able to hold herself up, so she fell to the cold ground beside him. She lifted her hand to his face, his beautiful green eyes that used to be so full of life and love, were now cold and dead. His mouth that used to give her the kisses she loved so much was now forever frozen in a heart-wrenching scream. Tears slowly start to fall, tears that no one will ever see, tears that will never reach the ground. For as they fell they froze upon her delicate cheeks. One by one they fell until she gave up. She looked don at his sword; the metal feels cold against her body. It was a constant reminder to her now of his last betrayal.her last betrayal.
"Just let me die." She gasps out. Finally she starts to feel her eternal sleep envelop her. The sleep she has been waiting for. *For at least there.. He will be. Waiting. Waiting for me. *
Here she lies in a pool of warm blood, but she feels this sense of "warm" no more. The only feeling with her right now is cold. A cold that chills her to her bones. A cold that will haunt her. Tears again begin to fall from her face. No not tears of sadness but of happiness. Her beautiful pale cheeks are slowly being covered by tears that will never fall. Frozen tears that will never set free the sorrow and grief she feels deep inside her. Her frozen tears. She smiles as her eternal sleep is finally here.
AN: If you ever, by some CRAZY whim, want to read the original version, you can just email me and I'll email it to you. Sayonara!
Frozen Tears
She looked down at the frozen ground before her, then looked to the cold metal sword being plunged through her stomach. She looked at the man in front of her, a sword through his heart. He fell to the ground, and did not move. She felt her legs become weak and was no longer able to hold herself up, so she fell to the cold ground beside him. She lifted her hand to his face, his beautiful green eyes that used to be so full of life and love, were now cold and dead. His mouth that used to give her the kisses she loved so much was now forever frozen in a heart-wrenching scream. Tears slowly start to fall, tears that no one will ever see, tears that will never reach the ground. For as they fell they froze upon her delicate cheeks. One by one they fell until she gave up. She looked don at his sword; the metal feels cold against her body. It was a constant reminder to her now of his last betrayal.her last betrayal.
"Just let me die." She gasps out. Finally she starts to feel her eternal sleep envelop her. The sleep she has been waiting for. *For at least there.. He will be. Waiting. Waiting for me. *
Here she lies in a pool of warm blood, but she feels this sense of "warm" no more. The only feeling with her right now is cold. A cold that chills her to her bones. A cold that will haunt her. Tears again begin to fall from her face. No not tears of sadness but of happiness. Her beautiful pale cheeks are slowly being covered by tears that will never fall. Frozen tears that will never set free the sorrow and grief she feels deep inside her. Her frozen tears. She smiles as her eternal sleep is finally here.
AN: If you ever, by some CRAZY whim, want to read the original version, you can just email me and I'll email it to you. Sayonara!