Alice Human Sacrifice: konichiwahinata version

I love the vocaloid song "Alice Human Sacrifice" and felt like making my own version a few Alices I created that were originally alter egos I've had. I hope you guys like this and write a review of how I did or which Alice you liked best. Also, this'll be in English since I don't know Japanese, so I hope it doesn't mess it up…. Here goes and I hope you don't mind a different intro since this is after the original song!

(Intro)

Alice 5: There was once a little dream that did not want to disappear and so it decided others would create its world. This dream lured many people into its Wonderland.

Alice 6: The people who entered became trapped in the Wonderland and no one has ever become the true Alice. Although they came close, it mattered not. They would be doomed to remain in the Wonderland forever…

Alice 7: Even though no one ever made it, others followed, chasing the dream to become the true Alice. The dream can never die and the reverie will live on…

(Alice 5)

The fifth Alice was a childish yellow one

This Alice took the form of a young dragon

She played throughout the Wonderland and imagined many things for fun

From her naïve imagination came a Yellow Country filled with children who she thought would forever play

That is until her kingdom was overrun by a greedy woman from not too far away

The fifth Alice was slain and did not recognize the threat in time

Her naiveté and desire to act like a child became the reason she and her yellow country died

(Alice 6)

The sixth Alice was vengeful silver one

Wielding a massive silver sword and decorated with many scars

Out of sorrow, she hunted down each person who left each of these wretched marks

One the was done and her enemies slain

She felt an unusual kind of pain

The fifth Alice was overcome with remorse felt the desire to atone

Her sins were many and soon begged for the forgiveness of a nearby silver land plagued by an evil man

Seeking redemption the once vengeful Alice put up one last fight with her mighty sword in hand

She defended the Silver land from the wicked man but atonement's price was a wound in battle that resulted in her death

She smiled, forgiven by all, as she wept until her final breath

(Alice 7)

The seventh Alice was shy black one

She was a shape shifter that had the ears of an elf, tail and claws of a wolf, and wings as dark as night

With a katana and other weapons but most important to her, close friends like her at her side who joined her when she eventually took flight

She was loved by many in the Wonderland and fought loyally alongside her friends, defending her loved ones and being defended by these friend she loved with all her heart for they made this Alice feel truly alive

The shy seventh Alice and her friends created a happy and fantastical black kingdom that drifted in the sky

They were always flying and hanging out as though they were a family, always together

The seventh Alice was a proud part of an accepting yet unique family that would last forever

The seventh Alice protected and saved many lives from evil, her purpose to heal or prevent others' pain

She and her friends were so powerful that they were never torn apart or slain

They became the family that the Wonderland revered for all time

This family along with their followers left all that was painful or sad behind

The seventh Alice was accepted and became the true Alice, a title she and her companions shared

They defended all that was good in the Wonderland, known as being people that truly cared

The Seventh Alices remained in the Wonderland and kept watch from the black kingdom together

The family of friends whose legacy lasted even past their deaths, remembered and loved forever

The End