Hi guys this is my new story
I hope you enjoy it.
I do NOT own star wars

"Your highness" captain panaka bowed to the young queen "the planet is secured. Viceroy gunray and the others are in the cells."
"Anything else captain?" The queen was sitting in the throne room. "What about the pilots?"
-they are here outside the room your highness.
-tell them to come in.
The doors opened and the pilots walked bowed in the same young queen noticed the ten years old among the pilots and smiled at him.
"I'm very grateful for what you have done you"she smiled at every single one of them.
They bowed again and left the room.
-captain?
-yes your highness.
-Accompany me to the healing wards.
She stood up and walked towards the door.

"Your highness" the head healer Gem Sol bowed to the young woman.(a/n just a random name)"how can I help you?"
- I'm here to visit the injured people healer Sol.
The com-unit beeped and the healer picked up the com-link and pressed the signal was weak but they could understand the message.
"I need a help...generator complex...melting pit...please"the voice pleaded.
Padme suddenly remembered the being in the main hanger,the fear she felt when she saw his sickly yellow eyes and the blood red she remembered the Jedi,the master-padawan jinn and padawan Kenobi ,the ambassadors from the former supreme chancoller Valorem who were sent to negotiate with though she had spent a little time with them but she liked she went to mos espa she get to know qui-gon better but she didn't know much about padawan had only seen him few times in the meetings with the "queen". Once in the cockpit and another time when he was fixing the hyperdrive. And when they were returning to noticed that the jedi team were avoiding each other. They barely padawan had moved to the engine room to sleep. And Anakin had moved to his she talked to Anakin he explained everything that happened in the tmple to her,from the first council meeting until the time when they rejected him and qui-gon stepped up to train him and said he would train was confused. She knew about the Jedi rules. It was impossible for a master to have two apprentices. But then Anakin told her that qui-gon said obi-wan was ready to become a was shocked to hear tried to talk with obi-wan and she found out that the young man was angry with his mentor, for what he felt embarrassed when he was talking to her but after a few hours they became friends. When she heard the message she didn't heard the voice of a heard a voice of a young man who was rushed with the healers and her guards to the melting pit.

She waited impatiently for the ray shields to turn off .when they did she ran with the healers behind saw two unconscious figures laying on the ground. One of them had hole in his chest and the other looked like a ghost.
She sat down beside the older oneand touched his hand to see that he was cold and... went to obi-wan's side he was still alive but he was weak and exhausted.
-Take them to the healers ward now.

He opened his eyes but closed them again fast. Too much light. he opened his eyes found himself in the healing Ward. As a padawan,obi-wan spent a lot of his time in the disliked it very then when he woke up qui-gon was by his -gon... . a wave of grief hit him master was great qui-gon jinn was killed by the then he had survived and had killed the sith by cutting it into wished qui-gon was alive and he had died...
-hello Jedi Kenobi
He turned his head towards the sound .he saw the queen.
-your highness.
He tried to sit a little upright but pain shot in his chest and right shoulder where he had landed when he'd fallen of the platform.
"Relax .healer Sol said that you shouldn't move much"
-what happened?
-we took back the palace,received your message and rescued you.
She sat down by his side.
"Obi-wan... I'm sorry for qui-gon..." She put he hand in his hand and squeezed it.
He held her hand tightly.
"The Jedi council and a few senators are coming to 'll be here in 2 days. " She informed him
"The council? Why?" He asked
-for 's what they told me.
-and the chancellor'd be here to right?
-yes. I'm sorry.I have to go.I have a meeting. After that I'll be bye

As the days past,he felt the darkness growing, like it was getting nearer to chancellor and the council had thanked him personally. Then master Yoda and master windu had asked him to explain what had happened. He had opened his mind to them and they had seen what had happened. They searched for the sith at the bottom of the melting they found no body they only found his belived he was had said that he had past his trials and he was a knight now .after obi-wan told yoda about his promise to train anakin,yoda told him that he was too young(a/n obi-wan is 23) to take an apprentice but he himseld eould take anakin as his padawan learner .qui-gon's funeral was going to be held in two dark feeling had grown stronger than before. it grew stronger at night he sneaked out of his shared room with Anakin and had followed the path where he sensed the dark side found himself in front of chancellor's room.
As master yoda said,there are always two sith.a master and an apprentice. The master is the one who is behind these doors.
He walked back to his had to think of a plan.a plan to expose the sith to master Yoda but first he had to meditate.

I hope you enjoyed this short chapter. as soon as my exams are finished I'll update all my stories. I promise.
Please reviews encourage me to write better.
So I guess I'll see you guys
And
May the force be with you ;-) ;-)