I was not a fan of the ending of Allegiant die. So this is going to be a lot better. This how I think it should end. I hope you all like it.
Tris
Tris and Uriah were locked up, and it was all thanks to David. So tonight is the night that they will get out of this prison. But they had help." Tris, is it time? Yes, okay ready." She knew that Uriah was probably better off then they are. I'm okay. She left it open for Tris to read. Their friend went into Uriah cell and open it. "Yes. Okay, then now hit me with this." No, I have a family here, and I am not going to leave them. Fine, then you and your family can come with us. As long as my family comes with use. I will go with you. Okay, then ready set." And Uriah hit their friend on the back of the head. He said" Sorry." And they started to run. As soon as they got done one of the halls the guard started shooting at them out before they could hit one of them Uriah got there first."Tris go get that gun. On it." They both ran up to the two guards and grabbed their gun. Tris grabbed the gun up off the ground, and they started running towards the exit.
Tobias
He was at Dauntless for Zeke and Christen. But he didn't want to be there not without Tris he was too much hurting right now. Tobias was at dinner at Dauntless with Zeke, and Christen they were trying to get him to date again just like always. But he didn't want to he was still in love with Tris, and to him, she was still alive somewhere even though it has only been a few months since she died." Tobias, you could give him a look at the video after dinner? Sure. Thank you. Your welcome. After they were done eating they walked by the net. When they saw someone jumping to it, and they quickly got off the net, then someone else jumped, but they were shooting the people above them.
Tris
Tris and Uriah got outside of Dauntless before people started to shoot at them again." Uriah goes first I'm a better shooter then you are. Got it." Uriah said "Okay." "Get off the net as fast if you can't that is fine I am jumping in about 20 minutes. Uriah jumped first. Tris waited but the more people she was able to shoot down the more they came. Tris jumped next, she swung around her back pointed to the grounded, started shooting.
Tobias
Tobias and Zeke stop walking, looked at each other, they were shocked. Tobias ran over and yelled," Zeke go get the guns." Tobias only had two guns on him. Tobias ran to get a clearer view and started to shoot. Zeke ran out with a gun and started shooting next to him. After a while, they took down all of them. Tobias saw Tris and Uriah on the floor." What the hell? How are you both here you are supposed to be died?" Tris and Uriah were about to say something but they both pass out. Tobias ran up to Tris and picked her up in. Zeke ran up to Uriah to take him to the hospital. " What's going on? Tobias was running when he told them to go get Cable and Cara here now. Christen told them okay and started running to go get them. Tobias and Zeke got to the hospital and yelled for a doctor. Zeke and Uriah mom came up to them both and ask what is going on? And then she saw Uriah and she likes what the hell. Tobias and Zeke lay Tris and Uriah down on the bed. They did not want to leave but they know that their loved ones need to be looking over so they left the room. When they were outside of the hospital Tobias was walking back and for.