Hey everyone ive decided to try my hand at an Eva fic let me know if you like it!

Disclaimer: I do not i repeat do NOT own Eva only the Character Alex Sona and his Eva.

Important:

OK everyone i personally went back and re-read what i had read and after reading some of your reviews your right i had done some really stupid things like skip some really intresting events like most of the first part of the story all together... and Having a new kid pop up out of no where and the way i did it made it seem like he was uber strong but hes not hopefully the new part of this redone chapter will explain why the third Angel was destroyed so quickly and such but yeah here ya go.

'Eva' thinking

"Eva" talking

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Neon Genesis Evangelion: Path of hope.

Chapter one: The mysterious eighth child and the third Angel.

The Future Tokyo-3 year 2034 Ruins of Nerv.

Alex Sona sighed heavily from within the entry plug of Unit X mentaly preping himself for the job at hand, glancing up at the moniter infront of him he saw his mother smiling at him from the control room and waving. Grinning Alex became more relaxed as the voice of the techs came over the comm. link.

"Unit X preped and ready for transfer."

"Sync holding steadily holding at 62"

"Blood pressure and Vitals normal"

"Pilot mental status proper."

"Prepareing transfer."

Cara Sona grabbed the microphone and said clearly to Alex "Remeber Alex the special Progressive knife you carry may have no effect on the angels now adays but it was specifical made to destroy Sachiel nothing else after that you wil need to use your own skill and i want you to know even though ive never said it i do love y..."

She was cut off by a huge roar from above.

"Shit!!! we judged to soon!! The twenty-third Angel has arrived!!"

Whiling around Cara shouted "How long before tranfer!?"

"Twelve minutes and counting! but not it our energy gets destroyed again!"

Growling Alex said "Can you send me to the surface and still have the power to transfer?"

Cara swong around to stare at the black and red Evangelion before her, but as she went to speak the Tech apoke up.

"Technily we can but it might take about three minutes longer because of how damaged our Magi are."

Taking a deep calming breath Alex looked at the comm. link making eye contact with his mother before saying "Do it."

"Alex yo..you cant! Unit X is currently only figured for the Angels of the past!! if you go out there you risk being torn apart or worse and if you die so does the last hope for mankind please Alex dont!" Cara yelled worriedly tears streaming down her cheeks.

Alex smilied softly and said over the roar of the Angel against the last defenses "Mother you must understand i have to as the fate of mankind rests on my shoulders i have to fight to make sure the future of the world is a place of great peace where mankind lives there own lives and not as one, A place in which im not crafted into a weapon and not a place like this A place in which you never have shown me affection till now, a place in which Father didnt have to die to become bound to my Eva for it to work, A place where the sun is visable longer then two hours a day, all i want is a place where i can learn to love." by the end of his speach Alex was in tears.

"Angel has passed the last defenses and is on its way!!" a tech called out suddenly followed by another.

"Five minutes to transfer placing on hold power being rerouted to launch elevator."

"Power routed, lady Sona?"

Gritting her teeth Cara Stood firmly in her postion before calling out firmly "Launch Eva!!"

Tokyo-3 surface

Alex gritted his teeth as the G-force pushed him hard into his seat as he arrived on the surface to face the newest Angel standing before him. It was the most humaniod one he'd seen so far, it stood slightly taller then an Eva and was bright blue and had large blades for arms.

'This must be the fortold Adrian well prepare for a fight!'

"DIE!!!!!!!" Alex yelled charging the Angle while picking up a Progressive Naganata and swining it at the Angel whos arms came up in a cross defense catching the weapon between them.

control room

"Magi system has begun transfer again seven minutes left."

Cara stared at the struggleing form of Unit X against the Angel before whispering "Alex I only did what i had to, to prepare you for your fate you were chosen by the Magi system as the Eighth child for a reason... just like Amy was the seventh in her Unit V" pauseing to glance at the destroyed Unit V in the Cage next to the remains of the failed Eva Unit T before going on as Alex was thrown away from the Angel who dived on him with its bladed arms in which he was barely able to defend himself. "Amy... your best friend...your only friend you two were so close yet she died for you to live on to go to the past to insure a safe place for us all...Good luck Alex i DO love you"

"Transfer in one minute!!"

Tokyo-3 surface

Alex groaned in pain as he lifted his extremly damaged Eva from the ground and glared determinedly at the Angel when his Eva began to shake as intense energy flowed throughout it.

"H...hey whats going on!"

"Dont worry Alex! the transfer has begun! good luck in the past!" came the voice of one of the techs as everything around the Eva vanished into darkness.

Alex's last thoughts in his own time were 'Dont fear Shinji im coming you wont be alone in this war I swear it!

Present day Tokyo-3 station Year 2015

"Due to the State of Emergeny All land lines are currently out of order please return to your shelter..."

Hanging up the phone one Shinji Ikari sat down on the sidewalk with a sigh and waited for Miss Katsurgi.

Pulling a letter out of his pocket Shinji blinked owlishly at photo before replaceing it thinking 'what a weird person.'

Shinji stood up and saw a girl dressed in a school uniform with blue hair stareing at him before his attention was attrached to the war planes flying over head 'what the?'

Shinji glanced back to notice the girl had disappeared shruging Shinji turned to head down the street only to leap away as a giant missile flew past exploding sending him flying slightly landing on his backside as a car came skidding to a halt infront of him with a woman who said "Are you Shinji Ikari?" and at his nod she said "then get in now!"

Grabbing his bag Shinji ran to the car and climbed into the passangers seat and as he slammed the door she took off before he could even buckle his seat belt.

A half hour, a few near-death accidents and one encounter with a Giant purple robot later Shinji and Miss Katsurgi who told him to call her Misato, were in an elevator heading into the core of Nerv headquarters.

Misato began to fix her make-up after tossing Shinji a book saying "here read this"

Picking it up Shinji read the front out loud "God is in his heaven, and all is right in the world." 'what is it father does?'

After getting off the elevator Misato proceeded to get them lost and the were found by Dr. Ritsuko Akagi who took them the right way onto a boat and drove them somewhere while her and Misato talked Shinji brooded for a while.

After stopping the disembarked and stepped into a dark room but before he could say anything about the lights the came on.

Shinji jumped back as the lights came on and he came face to face with the giant robot from before and quickly looked at Dr. Akagi and asked "Is this the robot from before?"

She looked at him and said "Strictly speaking shes not a robot, she is mans only defense against the angels, the ultimate fighting machine, Artifical life form Evangelion this is the first Unit." with awe and love in her voice.

Shinji just looked at it and asked "so, this is my Fathers work?"

"Correct" was heard as Shinji looked up to see the shadow of his Father.

"Its been awhile." The man spoke clamly

Shinji glared up at the man "Father."

"Shinji you will pilot Unit 01 against the Angel." Gendo Ikari said to his son.

Shinji lowered his head and said "So thats why you called me here to send me to my death! NO! i wont do it! Never you bastered!"1

'Thats what you think third child this will go as i plan.' Gendo thought before saying "In that case go home i have no use for you there is no room in war for cowards." before turning to the panel next to him and saying "Fuyutsuki wake Rei she's not dead yet."

As Shinji glanced over at the cart bring someone in he felt a male voice not his own enter his thoughts saying 'Do not fear Shinji im coming you wont be alone in this war i swear it'

Rei struggled to sit up only managing to by using her arms to steady herself looking up her eyes looked with Shinji's eyes breifly before earthquake of sorts shook the place causeing steel bars to far from the ceiling directly toward her.

Shinji seeing this take place quickly dashed for the girl manageing to lessen her fall and guide her to the ground. As her did this the sound of tearing metal was heard as a giant arm came and stopped the bars from crushing them.

Looking down at the girl in his arms Shinji yelled "Alright Father ill do it."

Grinning evilly Gendo nodded to Ritsuko who escourted Shinji away to prepare as Gendo thought ' i knew you would see it my way boy...soon yui soon.'

Nerv Control room

Shinji was prepareing to rise above to fight the Angel when suddenly everyone in the control room started yelling things out.

"Extremely large energy readings coming from the area east of the Angel unidentifible!" Maya yelled out typing commands on the computer before her.

"The areas natural light and force is being distorted!" another Tech said

"What is going on Captain?" The Commander asked calmly 'nothing can go wrong my plans must not fail!'

Misato glanced at the screen before her eyes grew wide and she yelled " Sir something is appearing near the Angel!!!!"

For the first time ever the Commander jumped up from his seat and ran to the computers knocking one of the techs out of the way breifly typing and suddenly the camara switched to the distorting and twisting of the surrounding area then suddenly there was a flash of brillant golden light and standing infront of the Angel was a Heavily Damaged black Eva with a red Cross across its chest with what looked like Eva Unit-01's head but with an extra eye in its forehead.

Inside Unit X

Alex stared around in Awe as brillant flashes of light exploded around him as he felt himself being thrown around before finally coming to a halt which was followed by a burst of golden light and when he could see before him was the third Angel Sachiel.

Grinning Alex called up a comm. link and contacted Nerv of present day through sound only.

Nerv -control room

Everyone in the control room including Shinji in his Eva was stareing in shock at the newly appeared Eva when suddenly a small screen open up in the corner of the screen showing the injured Eva and Angel the smaller screen showed a red X that said 'Sound Only'

"Excuse me but is this Nerv?" Came a strong but strained voice.

Grabbing the microphone Gendo said "Yes this is Nerv control room now explain who you are and where you got and Eva!"

The voice came again as the Eva got into a battle stance and removeing a extremly long progressive knife from his shoulder slot "First my name is Alexander Sona as for my Eva ill explain after i destroy Sachiel." and with that the Evangelion rushed the shocked Angel dodgeing its attackes before thrusting the blade of his weapon into the Angel's core.

End chapter one.

Author's notes:

1.yes shinji said that hes still the shy kind of person just not as much.

There is the much needed remake of chapter one i hope it is loads better but if not let me know.

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