So I got a request from The Mystical Palm Tree to make the prologue a bit more clear, so I'm doing so! (I love taking on challenges)
Allegiances
Shadowclan
Leader Deepstar brown and black spotted tom
Deputy Frozenclaw white tom with grey paws
Medicine cat Greenmint fluffy tabby she-cat
Apprentice Icicleheart White she-cat
Warriors
Fogclaw light grey tom
Mouseear brown tabby tom
Snowywhiskers black she-cat with soft, white paws
Tendrilsplit brown tabby tom with a stripe along his tail mentor to Brownpaw
Spiderfang grey and white tom with a tooth sticking out of his mouth
Darkheart well muscled longhaired tabby tom mentor to Ferretpaw
Twistedfoot white spotted brown tom with a useless paw
Whiskernose tortoise-shell tom with long whiskers mentor to Yellowpaw
Weaselclaw golden tabby tom mentor to Hollowpaw
Rockheart tan tom
Nickear black tom with a long nick in his ear
Shallowpoppy white she-cat with tabby patches
Calmwind grey tom with darker flecks
Apprentices
Brownpaw brown tipped tom
Yellowpaw tortoise-shell tom with yellow eyes
Ferretpaw brown and white she-cat.
Hollowpaw black she-cat with unusual ice-blue eyes
Queens
Fallingrain red dappled she-cat mother to Frozenclaw's kits Runningkit and Dawnkit
Prettycloud white she-cat mother to Twistedfoot's kits Frostkit and Owlkit
Frostyfur longhaired light grey she-cat with green eyes expecting Darkfur's kits
Elders
Snakeeye flat-faced grey tom with squint eyes
Frogflight very old brown and grey she-cat
Thunderclan
Leader Fishstar grey tom with white
Deputy Quailfeather speckled brown she-cat
Medicine cat Benttail white tom with a kinked tail
Windclan
Leader Duststar brown and black tom
Deputy Alderclaw white and grey tom
Medicine cat Waterstep grey blue she-cat
Riverclan
Leader Daisystar
Deputy Scorchedfur
Medicine cat Lavenderpetal
Prologue- sensing a dark cloud
A white she-cat slowly walked up to Prettycloud's body. The scent of death mingled with that of lavender hit her nostrils. The faint meowing of her newborn kits came from the nursery.
"Greenmint wants to see you." A gentle voice of a tom whispered.
The she-cat jumped, whirling around, "Frozenclaw! You surprised me."
"Greenmint asked for you." He repeated.
"Why should I go?" she hissed.
Her brother rested his tail on her shoulder. "She may have hurt you in the past but she's still your mentor."
"I hate her! She let Prettycloud, your old apprentice, die! She beat me up! She hated me! I want nothing to do with her!"
"Does she know that?" Frozenclaw said calmly although his eyes blazed.
The she-cat flinched. She had always pretended to be kind and helpful towards Greenmint. "No." she choked out.
"We'll discuss Prettycloud's newborns later. Right now you must go to Greenmint. It may be the last time you ever see her." he spoke with the calm authority of a leader.
Without arguing further, she slipped into the leader's den, where she saw the outline of Greenmint, who was saying goodbye to Deepstar.
Opening her jaws she could detect the faint scent of her mentor under all the herbs. Wordlessly, Deepstar left, wanting Greenmint to say goodbye to her apprentice privately.
"Greenmint? I'm here." She whispered to her mentor.
"Come closer." The old cat rasped.
Greenmint was definitely dying. Her breath reeked of fear and her eyes had a distant look about them, though they still reflected the pride she always had.
"What is it?"
"There is a dark cloud among us now."
"A dark cloud? You mean one of Prettyclouds kits?"
"Exactly. I thought Prettycloud was the dark cloud but I still sense evil."
Evil? How is that possible?
"Watch them, Icicleheart. Watch them like a hawk watches a mouse." Greenmint gave a shudder and then was still.
Icicleheart picked up the body and dragged it over to Prettycloud's. Cats dipped their heads to her as she past them. Frozenclaw beckoned her.
"What did she say?" he asked her.
Icicleheart hesitated. "Nothing. Nothing at all."
I don't know if there's much difference to be honest, but it was fun to do it all the same.