Hey everyone! This is my free verse poem that I wrote during a free write in writing class! Please review and only use constructive criticism! Thanks! Oh yeah, and this contains SPOILERS if you haven't read volume 17 and up of fruits basket! This contains suicide and character death! If that is too negative for you then don't read this! (This doesn't really happen in the manga, I just wanted to experiment!)
Disclaimer: I do not own Fruits Basket.
Blood Stained Roses: A Poem About Akito Sohma:
Running slowly into the night
The girl waits quietly out of sight
He passes her by without a sound
He didn't see her kneel to the ground
Dripping small teardrops out of her eyes
He walks by with her name in his cries
"Akito! Where are you?!" he screams up into the air
But the only sound is that of "Nobody cares."
"I deserve this…" she thought weeping into her shirt
"I've been raised to be nothing but dirt."
But she couldn't blame this on anyone else
She had to blame this all on herself
By the tree there lay a gun
She picked it up at the rising of the sun
It was 7'o clock in the morning
And the shots came without any warning
Now everyone knows why there are blood stained roses
By the river, in which her last words were spoken
Wow that was really depressing! 0_0 Next time I'll write a less sadder story! Please review, no flames!