Just a little drabble I wrote for a friend. This is my first story here. Constructive criticism and tips are always welcome.
(By the way, Adam is Tom Hiddlestons character in Only Lovers Left Alive.)
"Watch them." Loki murmured in your ear as he stood behind you. One of his hands roamed over your naked bode while the other one moved your head up to look at Adam and your friend. She writhed underneath him as Adam pounded his cock into her. Moans echoed through the room. Lokis hand wandered down your body and between your legs and he started rubbing your clit. His breath is hot against your ear and you drop your head back on his shoulder. Your friend threw her head back and locked eyes with you. She smiled.
„She enjoys it as much as you do, darling." Loki whispered hotly in your ear as he drove two fingers inside of you, curling them to hit your sweet spot. You whimpered in pleasure and started moving your hips against his hand which made Loki smirk, his pearly white fangs poking out. „You eager little minx." he snarled, pulled his fingers out of you and pushed you forward so you're on your hands and knees. You didn't have time to protest because shortly after you felt his cock filling you up to the hilt, making you moan in pleasure. You dropped your head on the sheets but Loki grabbed your hear and tilted your head back so your eyes are fixed on the two lovers in front of you. Loki started fucking you in deep, long strokes as he nibbled on your throat, biting down but not hard enough to draw blood.
Soon his thrusts became more erratic, the slap of skin on skin turned you on even more and you could feel your orgasm approach. You watched your friend as she arched her back and came hard just as Adam bit down her throat to suck her blood and spilled his seed inside of her.
Loki reached around and rubbed your clit hard and fast. „Come. Come for me, darling." he growled. Your walls clenched around his cock as you reached your climax. Your lover fucked harder into until he came inside of you. He bend down and grabbed your throat. His sharp teeth pierced your skin and you cried out in pain and pleasure. Loki moaned as your blood ran into his mouth. You took a few deep breaths as Loki pulled back. He smiled at you and kissed your forhead. „Rest now, my dear." he whispered before you blacked out.