~this is my first fanfic writing....soOoOo please r/r and gimme lotsa suggestions if you may! ~_^ ~
(What would have happened with Rikku if she never joined the gang? well here's her story!)
*her eyes opened slowly...peering around through her unfocused eyes*
...wh...where am I???
*she lifts up her hand, she looks at it and sees the sand all over it*
unghhh...I'm all dirty...and...my back hurts!!
*she stands to her feet, looking at her wretched Al Bhed outfit...she shrugs and unzips it from the back, and throws off her mask.*
mmmm..I guess I'll go straight...even though I have no clue where I am...
*she walks...maybe for 15 minutes...and she comes upon a place full of lights and happy children. She stands there on a platform, things flying over her heads*
oh...oh...someone tell me where am I???
*a group of people stop and stare at her, like all time stopped when she bursted out*
eh...eh heh heh...
*some kids come up to her, one with blonde pigtails and one with spikey hair*
w...whassup wif yer eyes??/?
...uh...oh...um...
they're all spirally and stuff!!!!
*the people surrounding her now gasp, a crowd forms like a stampede...all curious about this girl who dresses funny and has odd eyes*
*pushing and shoving occur*
hey...uh..h..hey!!!
*an old man with a cane steps through, his cane lights up a light blue and makes sparks as it hits the floor*
step back! please step back and let me have a look at the girl!
*Rikku sighs, feeling better...well kinda better...now that the man has stepped in*
*the old man looks at her eyes* Just as I thought....hmmm...Come with me!
*he grabs her wrist like a child and takes her away...making a line through the crowd*
*he takes her to a small metal house with a blue glow*
Please...sit.
Yes...alright...
Loosen up girl I'm not going to hurt yah! Heehee! I have heard about you kinds from the gods.
The gods? How come they had ta tell yah? Where am I?
You mean you don't know where you are?
*Rikku nods*
I was underwater fighting for my people...and out of nowhere Sin showed up and I woke up on a beach...
Wh...wha??? My...my prayers!! They have been answered! My dear...you are in Zanarkand!
(alright alright...please gimme some reviews since this is my first...please diss me! :) j/k lemme know what you think! )
(What would have happened with Rikku if she never joined the gang? well here's her story!)
*her eyes opened slowly...peering around through her unfocused eyes*
...wh...where am I???
*she lifts up her hand, she looks at it and sees the sand all over it*
unghhh...I'm all dirty...and...my back hurts!!
*she stands to her feet, looking at her wretched Al Bhed outfit...she shrugs and unzips it from the back, and throws off her mask.*
mmmm..I guess I'll go straight...even though I have no clue where I am...
*she walks...maybe for 15 minutes...and she comes upon a place full of lights and happy children. She stands there on a platform, things flying over her heads*
oh...oh...someone tell me where am I???
*a group of people stop and stare at her, like all time stopped when she bursted out*
eh...eh heh heh...
*some kids come up to her, one with blonde pigtails and one with spikey hair*
w...whassup wif yer eyes??/?
...uh...oh...um...
they're all spirally and stuff!!!!
*the people surrounding her now gasp, a crowd forms like a stampede...all curious about this girl who dresses funny and has odd eyes*
*pushing and shoving occur*
hey...uh..h..hey!!!
*an old man with a cane steps through, his cane lights up a light blue and makes sparks as it hits the floor*
step back! please step back and let me have a look at the girl!
*Rikku sighs, feeling better...well kinda better...now that the man has stepped in*
*the old man looks at her eyes* Just as I thought....hmmm...Come with me!
*he grabs her wrist like a child and takes her away...making a line through the crowd*
*he takes her to a small metal house with a blue glow*
Please...sit.
Yes...alright...
Loosen up girl I'm not going to hurt yah! Heehee! I have heard about you kinds from the gods.
The gods? How come they had ta tell yah? Where am I?
You mean you don't know where you are?
*Rikku nods*
I was underwater fighting for my people...and out of nowhere Sin showed up and I woke up on a beach...
Wh...wha??? My...my prayers!! They have been answered! My dear...you are in Zanarkand!
(alright alright...please gimme some reviews since this is my first...please diss me! :) j/k lemme know what you think! )