She's Coming
Chapter 2: Marie's Turn
By: Diva'sDream
Rated: PG for being kinda scary
Category: Suspense/Horror (DUH!)
Summary: Well basically, this is the sequel to "She's Coming". But this time, it's Marie, the first victim's sister that Samara's coming after... Mwahahahaha!!! *Evil Laughter*
Disclaimer: Nope! Sadly, I do *not* own "The Ring" or anything associated with "The Ring", except for my fanfics. So don't even think about trying to sue! *Gives everyone a threatening glare* ...Okay, with that being said, ENJOY!!!
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I can't believe this is happening to me! Why did I watch that *wretched* tape? Why?!
I mean, I knew I was practically digging my grave *by* watching it! So why in the world *did* I watch it?! I'm such an idiot!
...Well, soon all of this won't matter in the least anyway. She came for my sister about a month ago and now the little girl's coming for me!
...I can just tell that this is gonna make news headlines! I can just imagine what it'll say...
"Headline! 17-year-old Marie Anderson died mysteriously yesterday, a month after her 14-year-old sister Chloe Anderson also died in the same mysterious manner. The cause of both deaths is still undetermined. More on this story at 11:00."
...My time grows short! I only have *five* minutes left. I'm wishing that my parents hadn't gone out tonight! I'm all alone as well as defenseless.
She's gonna kill me! I *can't* get away! The little girl will never give up! She never sleeps...!
I try to find a place where I think she can't get to me. I see the broom closet and start towards it. But wait...!
That girl, Katie, was found dead in a closet! She watched the tape. The little girl came after her!
But...she would be *expecting* someone to think just that, right? She would be expecting them to go somewhere *else*. I *might* be able to hide from her in there...!
So I try it. I go into the closet and lock the door behind me. Then, I get on my knees on the closet floor and duck my head as if expecting that to protect me.
...But I guessed wrong about everything... I hear the wet footsteps coming toward me. She's coming! She's coming to kill me! This is it. It's all over! I've lost...!!!
I keep myself curled up in a tight ball. The door creaks open! I can feel her staring down at me, *waiting* for me to pick up my head! She stands there for a few seconds. She's trying to outlast me!
She finally grows impatient. She grabs me by the hair and pulls my head up. I smell my hair start to burn almost instantly before I'm forced to open my eyes!
My eyes open...
Her long, dark hair moves away from her face...
I see the ring in her eyes...
I try to scream but can't...
My face contorts...
...And I die...
The End
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Well, that's it. If you liked it, review! If you didn't, it's your choice. I would like to thank Amber for reviewing the first chapter of "She's Coming" and giving me the idea of doing this to a family member. ^_^ Thankees!!!
A/N: Just so you know, if you paid attention to all of the character's names (not including Samara's), you can figure out my full name. First, middle, and last!
By: Diva'sDream
Rated: PG for being kinda scary
Category: Suspense/Horror (DUH!)
Summary: Well basically, this is the sequel to "She's Coming". But this time, it's Marie, the first victim's sister that Samara's coming after... Mwahahahaha!!! *Evil Laughter*
Disclaimer: Nope! Sadly, I do *not* own "The Ring" or anything associated with "The Ring", except for my fanfics. So don't even think about trying to sue! *Gives everyone a threatening glare* ...Okay, with that being said, ENJOY!!!
* * * * * * * * * *
I can't believe this is happening to me! Why did I watch that *wretched* tape? Why?!
I mean, I knew I was practically digging my grave *by* watching it! So why in the world *did* I watch it?! I'm such an idiot!
...Well, soon all of this won't matter in the least anyway. She came for my sister about a month ago and now the little girl's coming for me!
...I can just tell that this is gonna make news headlines! I can just imagine what it'll say...
"Headline! 17-year-old Marie Anderson died mysteriously yesterday, a month after her 14-year-old sister Chloe Anderson also died in the same mysterious manner. The cause of both deaths is still undetermined. More on this story at 11:00."
...My time grows short! I only have *five* minutes left. I'm wishing that my parents hadn't gone out tonight! I'm all alone as well as defenseless.
She's gonna kill me! I *can't* get away! The little girl will never give up! She never sleeps...!
I try to find a place where I think she can't get to me. I see the broom closet and start towards it. But wait...!
That girl, Katie, was found dead in a closet! She watched the tape. The little girl came after her!
But...she would be *expecting* someone to think just that, right? She would be expecting them to go somewhere *else*. I *might* be able to hide from her in there...!
So I try it. I go into the closet and lock the door behind me. Then, I get on my knees on the closet floor and duck my head as if expecting that to protect me.
...But I guessed wrong about everything... I hear the wet footsteps coming toward me. She's coming! She's coming to kill me! This is it. It's all over! I've lost...!!!
I keep myself curled up in a tight ball. The door creaks open! I can feel her staring down at me, *waiting* for me to pick up my head! She stands there for a few seconds. She's trying to outlast me!
She finally grows impatient. She grabs me by the hair and pulls my head up. I smell my hair start to burn almost instantly before I'm forced to open my eyes!
My eyes open...
Her long, dark hair moves away from her face...
I see the ring in her eyes...
I try to scream but can't...
My face contorts...
...And I die...
The End
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Well, that's it. If you liked it, review! If you didn't, it's your choice. I would like to thank Amber for reviewing the first chapter of "She's Coming" and giving me the idea of doing this to a family member. ^_^ Thankees!!!
A/N: Just so you know, if you paid attention to all of the character's names (not including Samara's), you can figure out my full name. First, middle, and last!