The Fall of reach... By Josh Aka The Rookie
Planet reach,
(The Point of View of Noble Six, and his thoughts On Noble team)
I stared into my helmet, It was an Odst Helmet which was plain white with a gold trim. I was currently in a warthog travelling to the nearby UNSC Outpost where Noble Team would be waiting for me.
The warthog came to a halt, I jumped out and Spotted a Spartan, I thought to myself "He must be the Sniper," Whilst watching him place ammo clips into his sniper. I walked towards the doorway of the building,
"Contact with Visegrad Relay was lost last night. All signals flat lined at twenty-six hundred hours." A voice from inside the building, "I responded with trooper fire teams, which have since been declared MIA.","And now you're sending us.","The Office of Naval Intelligence believes that deployment of a Spartan team is a gross dislocation of valuable resources. I disagree."
I listened into the Conversation before walking in, An Arm Blocked me and the arms Owner said "Commander.", The "Commander" and a Spartan next to him had said "So that's our new number six." I took a step forward and a Spartan with an EVA helmet that has a skull on it, said "Kat, you read his file?" I Quickly put 2+2 together and gathered "Kat" was the one who blocked me, "Only the parts that weren't covered in black ink." She replied.
The "Commander" turned back to the screen and said "Anyone claim responsibility, sir?", a voice replied "ONI thinks it might be the local insurrection. Five months ago, they pulled a similar job on Harmony. Hit a relay to take out our eyes and ears, then stole two freighters from dry-dock. That cannot happen here. Reach is too damn important. I want that relay back online, Noble One." ""Sir. Consider it done." The "Commander" replied "Then I'll see you on the other side. Holland out." the voice from the screen said before it turned off.
"Lieutenant." The "Commander" said to me, "Commander. Sir." I replied to him. The other Spartans got up and headed to the door, "I'm Carter, Noble Team's leader." He points to the other Spartans and said "That's Kat, Noble Two, Emile and Jorge, Four and Five. You're riding with me, Noble Six." We headed to the Falcons that were outside preparing to take off "I'm not gonna lie to you, Lieutenant. You're stepping into some shoes the rest of the squad would rather leave unfilled." I semi Nodded in reply,
"Me, I'm just happy to have Noble back up to full strength. Just one thing. I've seen your file. Even the parts the ONI censors didn't want me to. I'm glad to have your skill set, but we're a team. That lone wolf stuff stays behind. Clear?" "Got it, sir." I replied.
"Welcome to Reach." I heard Jun say over the comms.
So that was my first PROPER story Tell me what you think.. Any suggestions