Percy's Mistakes

AN: I'm sorry for making people wait just for you to find out I only rewrote what I originally wrote. Please forgive me.

Pov:

I sat alone on my bunk in camp-half blood tears frealy cascading down my face as I wept for the losses of so many of friends and loved ones.

Flashback:

"Luke you promised." Annabeth said tears welling in her eyes as she spoke.

Luke's eyes flickered from gold to blue as he looked at her "Annabeth?" he stated his voice wavering and he started shaking.

"Luke, you said we could be a family." she smiled at him and her tears finally spilled over eyes as she slowly approaced him.

Luke's body shook as he started to glow and his eyes flickered back to gold his faced contorted into that of rage. "NOOOO!" Kronos screamed and in one fluid motion sliced his scythe across Annabeth's throat.

Rage beyond comprehension filled my bones and I lunged at him slicing wildly at every exposed point I could find. He was blocking as many as he could but I was too angry and my strikes were hitting him despite his efforts causing to mess up in his frustration. One of my swings hit a latch of armor under his left arm and grazed his skin slightly, but to my surprise it went through his skin. The scream from Kronos's throat was horrible and filled with agony and caused me to cover my ears in pain.

End Flashback

I shook the memory that, despite it only being a couple of hours ago, I had relived too many times to count. In my rage and sorrow I slammed my fist into my bedside table shattering it instantly. I reached into the remains of what used to be that table grabbed my dagger, I sat for a second staring at it looking the wicked sharp edge and the gleaming celestial bronze metal.

I closed my eyes and without a moment's hesitation pushed the dagger right into my mortal spot. The pain that followed felt like being dipped in that cursed river right after Hades flayed off my skin. I now realized that the weird sound I was hearing was actually me screaming.

My vision started to fade and the feeling lessened, right before the blackness fully enveloped me I heard my cabin door open. I finally died right as my lips curled into the first smile I'd had in a least a week.

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Third person pov(AN: Most of the story will end being in third but occasional Povs here and there)

Percy opened his eyes expecting to be in the underworld or DOA studios. Instead he was in a city with skyscrapers gleaming proudly and stretching so far up that the tops weren't even visible to him. The whole city seemed to radiate power. It was then Percy noticed to things number 1 would be that despite how bright the city was there appeared to be no sun anywhere, number two would be the seven foot tall man that currently standing behind Percy smirking at him. The man appeared to be around twenty, but his eyes clearly held more wisdom that of a twenty year old man, another thing about him that his eyes literally glowed black.

"Who are you" Percy asked, his voice shaking a bit as stared in wonder at this obviously powerful man.

"I am Chaos and as I'm positive you're wondering this wonderful place is, this is my home the void."

Chaos let out a booming laugh that shook the city as Percy's jaw dropped about as far as it could go. Quickly recovering from his immense shock Percy jumped up and dropped into a bow.

"Oh there is no need for that" Chaos stated waving his hand dismissively. Percy was cut off before he could ask more questions. "Let's take walk shall we?" It was more of an order than a question though.

"Now before I answer any of your questions I must tell you something, that something is that you are undoubtedly the greatest demigod to ever walk the planet earth. Now despite that my granddaughters, the fates, seem to think that you deserve one hell of a shitty life. However, I disagree and I brought you here to send you back t.."

"Back! What do you mean back?!" Percy shouted cutting Chaos off.

Chaos narrowed his eyes at Percy causing him to pale considerably. Suddenly Chaos burst into laughter as he looked at Percy's face that showed pure terror.

"Don't worry you'll be able to prevent all those deaths this time I'm sending you back to when you were on the quest to save Lady Artemis, but not yet first you must be trained." He stated simply.

"Trained?" Percy asked with growing confusion.

Instead of responding he smiled mischievously and touched his finger to Percy letting it spread black energy over him. He chuckled as Percy passed out and hit the ground with a resounding thud.

Percy Pov

Chaos smiled and raised his towards me. Before I could react blackness was spreading around me; however, before my initial reaction of freaking out and going into full panic mode the darkness seemed to sooth me. It reminded me of when I would skin my knee as a child and my mother would run up and envelop me in her loving arms telling me that everything would be okay, and I would believe her without question because back then I remember thinking that my mother was a god and could do anything that she wanted to do, I was pretty close only that my father was the god. It was at this point that I very painfully fainted.

Flashback:

I ran out of the empire state building in a frantic search for my mother to make sure she survived.

"MOM!" I shouted running frantically through the city.

"PERCY, OVER HERE!" was the reply from my stepfather Paul.

As I ran into the alley way where I heard Paul's voice I stopped dead at the sight I saw golden dust everywhere signaling that a monster died here, but what stopped me was my mom laying motionless in a pool of her own blood and Paul staring at me sadly with many tear streaks on his face. Without even thinking I ran up and gave him a hug as fresh tears now spilled onto my face.

I shot up from my nightmare a thin sheen of sweat now covering my body as I shook the thoughts from that day away.

"Ah good morning young Perseus "said a very feminine voice.

AN: So for those who read let me know if I did better and once again sorry.