Okay, so on the poll I put up "Which Alien Is The Most Ticklish?", Snare-Oh was the choice by one point, so I decided to do this story with Snare-Oh and will do another one with Whampire, since they were both pretty close. Enjoy!

Disclaimer: I only own Rachel, Sergeant Williams, and Tina.


Grumpiness Never Lasts With Tickles Around

Rachel was laying on her bed, her grumpy mood making her feel tired. She was grumpy because she had lately been dealing with bullies, gossipers, and worse, some crooks who had been vandalizing her uncle's store. Thankfully, Sergeant Williams caught the crooks, but that didn't make Rachel feel any better.

She was so grumpy that she didn't notice something moving towards her until something poked her stomach gently, making her yelp and jump up, turning to see who was behind her and she saw it was Snare-Oh. "What is it?" she asked grumpily.

"Whoa, why so grouchy?" he asked.

"Take a wild guess," she said sarcastically and moved towards her window. Snare-Oh came up behind her and placed his hands on her shoulders.

"Hey, don't be like that," he said gently.

Rachel just sighed and hung her head. "What's up, Snare-Oh?" she asked him.

"Nothing, just wanted to check up on you," he said. "Stressed?"

"Yeah," she said.

Snare-Oh gave it some thought and his tendrils moved to wrap around Rachel's arms. "I know what can fix that," he said and didn't give her a chance to ask as he began tickling her.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Rachel burst out laughing when Snare-Oh began tickling her stomach, which was her weak spot. She squirmed, but he held her tightly in his tendrils so that she couldn't escape him.

"Cootchie cootchie coo," he crooned at her. "You're so ticklish!"

Rachel somehow managed to get free of him and went to run, but Snare-Oh caught her and they both fell on her bed with the mummy alien gently pinning her down as his hands moved her shirt up a little to reveal her stomach and he resumed tickling her.

"SNARE-OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH! STO-HOHOHOHOP!"

"Nope! Not until your grumpiness is gone!" he singsonged to her as he continued tickling her. Rachel couldn't stop laughing as she finally felt better, thanks to Snare-Oh.

Then she abruptly coughed, making the mummy alien stop instantly. She lay there as he lay beside her and she snuggled into his hug as he rubbed her back.

"Are you alright?" he asked.

She nodded. "I'm fine," she said. "Just a little winded."

"Good," he said with a smile in his voice.

She smiled back. "I don't know what I'd do without you guys. You're all like older brothers to me," she said. Snare-Oh hummed in agreement.

Suddenly, a voice came up to them. "Can I join?"

Rachel lifted her head and saw it was Tina. "Hey, sweetie," she said. "Of course you can join us."

Tina climbed up and scooted between her father and aunt. "Is everything alright, princess?" her father asked.

"I don't feel good," said Tina.

"Like you don't have any energy?" Rachel asked gently and Tina nodded.

"This day is so boring," said the small alien grumpily.

Rachel lifted her head and looked at Snare-Oh with a smile. Catching her train of thought, Snare-Oh gently pinned Tina down.

"Time for more tickles," he chuckled as he and Rachel tickled Tina and the small alien laughed and laughed, then the two girls teamed up to tickle Snare-Oh, who practically shook the walls with his loud laughter until they were all exhausted and snuggled into each other.

Rachel smiled as she realized that grumpiness could never last. Not as long as tickles were around.


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