It was a warm summers day the sun blistering, birds chirping and childern playing outside.
Lakon woke up feeling refreshed and in the mood for some hunting. He stood up and grabbed his bow, arrows and dagger. Thinking to himself how much money he would make today and how many animals would die by his hands. He climbed out his window and onto one of the many roofs surrounding his small appartment, he jumped roof to roof his speed increasing by each rooftop suddenly he heard screams coming from one of the back alleyways. The scream causing Lakon to lose balance and fall luckily he managed to stay on the rooftop by clinging to one of the chimneys, now being closer to the source of the screams he could hear a voice "NO! SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME" a girl said sounding frightend "this one should fetch a nice price, boss." a male voice said sounding excited "Yes, they tend to pay more for the younger ones" another male voice said sounding very calm. Slavers these filthy criminals that sell people, Lakon seemed to sna, his eyes looking like the eyes of a cold-blooded killer. "You people killed her" he whisperd to himself, Lakon jumped down to ground level being spotted by the two slavers "And who are you" one of the men said "Your worst nightmare" said Lakon smiling as he reached for his bow. The girls crying now seemed to die down as she watched Lakon "What're you doing, do you want to be cut up by us? leave this is your last warning." Lakon seemed to have ignored the man as he loaded his bow with an arrow "You fool, now you've done it!" said one of the slavers dashing towards Lakon. Lakon fired his bow which hit the man attempting to kill him right in the heart, the man dropped to the floor and curled up in pain. "Superb accuracy, Mr. a person with your talents would make an excellent employee. What do you say you replace this fool and bring this girl back to HQ with me?" said the man not seeming to care that his partner just got shot with an arrow. Lakon walked towards the man who had the arrow stuck in his heart and flipped him over so he could see his front, he then stomped on the arrow now laughing as the man stopped breathing. The girl who was about to be kidnapped continued to look on in a state of fear while the man next to her was now horrified. "No." lakon said as he put away his bow took out his dagger and dashed for the other man.
-This is my first attempt at writing and i would like to become a decent writer in the near future, therefore i'd like tips on how i could improve and how bad this chapter of a story i may or may not do is.-