I don't own naruto

A.N. this is demon's desire's edited first chapter

'kyuubi speaking/ jutsu'

A small boy dodged as several shuriken shattered the window above him. The boy was young, around age 9. He had spiky blonde hair and bright blue eyes. The boy's name is Naruto Uzumaki, and his sapphire eyes quickly assessed his surroundings. He cursed as a kunai nicked his cheek, and ran faster heading into the forest, his pursuers quickly following. As they neared the middle of the forest, they were shocked to find the boy gone. They growled and moved to search, when a poof was heard, and Naruto slammed a kunai into both of his pursuers' necks.

He smiled. He loved killing drunk villagers. He made his way to a giant sycamore. Smiling, he pulled out a kunai and lightly cut himself. He then drew a pentagram in blood and formed the demon seals taught to him by Kyuubi.

(Flashback)

Naruto groaned as he vainly tried to move his broken body. "Another assassination attempt," he thought, eyeing the assailant's body. Pain shot through his body as the burns on his back slowly healed, the pain causing him to fall unconscious. When he awoke, he found himself in a pipe-filled corridor.

"Come here, boy!" said a booming voice.

Naruto slowly followed the voice, and entered a room with a giant gate with a glowing seal on the bars. Trapped behind the gate was a giant fox with nine streaming tails.

"Come closer, brat!" said the fox.

Naruto calmly walked forward. The fox roared and slammed a tail through the bars. Naruto merely stood, unblinking, as the fox's tail stopped inches from his face.

"Brave, aren't you brat?"

"I know you can't kill me, Kyuubi."

"Aware of my existence are you?"

"As many times as the villagers called me 'demon brat,' I'd be a fool not to figure it out."

"Perceptive."

"Why have you brought me here?"

"I want to help you get revenge on this accursed village."

"How?'

"I was sealed here by the one of the few beings equal to myself, the Shinigami. If you summon him, you can get your revenge on the village."

"What's the catch?"

"To summon the Shinigami requires the user to sacrifice his soul. You will get revenge, but at the cost of your mortal life, however with my chakra, I assure you you will survive.."

Naruto stared at him before slowly nodding and smiling trustingly a the giant demon "I'll do It."

For the next year, Naruto practiced the seals necessary for the summoning. He began heavy taijutsu and chakra control training. These were necessary to build up the large reserves required for the jutsu. Kyuubi began slowly leaking demonic chakra into Naruto's body, preparing him for the massive amount of demonic chakra he would have to channel, by building his chakra coils, while Naruto continued his seal study. Finally, they were ready.

(End Flashback)

Naruto finished his seals and Kyuubi sent his chakra.

"Kuchiyose No Jutsu! ( summoning technique), he yelled, slamming his hands on the pentagram. The energy around him crackled, and Naruto was slammed back as the pentagram glowed with energy. He watched in awe as the energy exploded obscuring his vision with red smoke.

As the smoke began to clear, he could barely out the form of a tall curvaceous woman. She wore a bright, blue kimono, and her glimmering, silver hair reached her waist. She blinked, and Naruto was enthralled by her piercing, silver eyes that seemed to gaze into the deepest parts of his mind and consume his entire being. He shook his head and walked forward.

"Are you the one who summoned me?" asked the woman.

"Yes."

"Do you desire a contract?"

"Yes."

"Do you know the price of the contract?"

"Yes."

"Very well, what is your desire?"

" I want you to serve me."

The woman laughed. "Oh, really," giggled the woman, " for how long?"

"Till the day I die."

"Which will be in the next two minutes, after I extract your soul. Are you sure that's what you want?"

The boy nodded.

"Fine. I accept your request." She reached her hand into his chest and began pulling out his soul, ignoring the boy's confident smile. She had nearly extracted it, when the soul flared red, and the boy began screaming in pain before his eyes closed.

She smiled, and after a second, held the boys soul in her hand. "Foolish boy," she thought, as she devoured the soul. "I feel sorry for him." Frowning, she turned, and was about to disappear when the boy suddenly whimpered. Shock littering her face, she reached down and checked the boy's pulse. It was faint, but still there.

"How is this possible?" she thought. "I know I devoured his soul, so how is he still alive?" Snarling, she picked the boy up, fully intending to shake him until he awoke and explained...when he whimpered again and buried his head into her shoulder. Staring at the boy's peaceful face, she sighed and sat down, the boy still in her arms.

Meanwhile, in Naruto's Mindscape

"Brat, what are you doing?" yelled Kyuubi. "You were supposed to ask the Shinigami to destroy this wretched village."

"Do you think I'm stupid, fox? I realized what you were planning a long time ago. It was the only way for you to escape. My soul powers the seal that contains you. If I had followed your plan, the village would have been destroyed, and with my soul gone, you'd have control over my body.

"My plan will still work, brat. As soon as she takes your soul, I will have control over your body and will destroy the village myself."

'The destruction of this village is my right, and I will not allow anyone else to take it."

"You don't have a choice brat, any second now your soul will be gone and I will have my vengeance on your father."

"My father?."

"Yes, the blonde fool who sealed me inside you, that insufferable Yondaime."

Naruto stared in shock, before quickly composing himself. "In any case, I won't be dying any time soon."

"What do you mean, brat?"

Naruto smirked, reached up, and began tearing the seal.

"What are you doing, brat?"

"When I release the seal, your soul will be free, and since it's far less connected to this body than mine. She'll take your soul instead; meanwhile, I'll have access to all of your chakra that was being held at bay by the seal."

Grinning, he tore the seal maliciously, chuckling at Kyuubi's scream of outrage as he was torn from his body. After Kyuubi's soul was gone, Naruto screamed as a ocean of demonic chakra flooded him, overloading his body and knocking him unconscious.

Eight Hours Later

Naruto coughed and slowly opened his eyes. Gazing around, he noticed he was still in the forest. He tried to move, but noticed that the Shinigami woman had fallen asleep with her arms around him. He smiled, and slowly, but reluctantly, removed her arms. He again tried to move, only to notice he was still trapped. Gazing down, he noticed that his tail was wrapped around her waist.

"When did I get a tail?" he thought, uncurling his furry appendage. He stood up, hoping to assess other physical changes. He had grown a few inches in height, now reaching around 5'6". His muscles had also expanded, giving the nine year old the frame of a boy much older. His eyes, formerly a bright blue, were now blood red. He attempted to summon chakra, and was unsurprised when it was red. He grinned, part one of his plan had worked perfectly.

Turning towards the woman, he slowly nudged her awake. She slowly opened her eyes, and upon seeing his face, she growled. "How are you still alive?"

"I was the container of the Kyuubi. You took his soul, instead of mine."

"You little bastard! You tricked me!"

"Correct, now may I know the name of my new servant, Miss Shinigami?"

"It's Asuna, and I'm not really the Shinigami. That's my dad. I was really just filling in for him today. He's on vacation."

Naruto blanched, "Won't he notice you're missing?"

She sighed, "No, it's been 2,000 years since his last vacation. It'll take him 50 years or so before he even thinks about me."

"50 years? How old are you, anyway?" he asked.

Before he could blink, Asuna punched him on the head.

"Ow! You're not supposed to hit your master, you know."

"Well, let me give you some advice, master. Never ask a woman her age." Naruto nodded quickly..

Asuna smiled at this victory. "I've been meaning to ask, why did a kid like you summon me anyway?"

"I summoned you because I desire three things: power, the complete and utter destruction of the leaf village, and," Naruto blushed, "and, I would like a family."

"So, why didn't you just ask me to destroy the village?" asked Asuna. "Now that your contract is made, I can't use my powers on that magnitude anymore. I can only protect myself and the contract holder.

"Why?"

"It's the rule imposed on me by my father to keep me from needlessly causing destruction like last time.

"I didn't ask you to destroy the village for two reasons: one, because I want to do it myself..."

"And the second reason?" she asked.

."I wanted you to join my family.."

Asuna gasped, then smiled, giving him a hug. Despite his goals and his intimidating appearance, he was still a young boy searching for affection. Silently promising to shower him with it, Asuna held him until they both fell asleep.