Acceptance...Love...and Hollows?


A/N: This is my first Bleach Story I have written. I honestly hope you enjoy. I'm not sure what it is going to be rated further along, it may change. Also this is entirely made up by me, and the out of character female Miyoko Iwatani is the main character and so is Ichigo Kurosaki. There is Orihime bashing. Why? Because I just don't like her. But other wise please do review my story. No flames ok. Just creative criticism. Arigatou Gozaimasu!


ChApTer: OnE; MiYoKo AnD a HoLlOw MeEt! RUN!

Today was believed to be Miyoko Iwatani's most excellent day. A day where she'd make an assortment of friends in her new hometown Karakura, since she had just moved here today from Fukuoka prefecture. But; to her displeasure it wasn't anything like that.

Now at nine o' clock P.M. Miyoko was on her way back from the Karakura town square, when this massive four story high monster literally came out of nowhere and began to pursue her. When she saw the monster she immediately ran, she'd never seen a monster that gigantic before.

Today she thought she was finally going to be acknowledged for the first time since she was ever enrolled in a school facility. Everyone always looked down upon her and despised her because she was different and because she didn't fit their standards. She has always been a fun-loving blue haired girl. And the same goes now that she is a second year student in high school. She wasn't quite sure why natural colored blue hair was bizarre to them, and the boys always picked on her and bullied her about it. Usually she's been passive about it and not do anything, but as she grew older her irritation had become slightly aggressive. All she ever wanted was to just have friends and be accepted, but now she had a monster chasing her, and Miyoko had to get away if she wanted to stay alive, and finally be accepted by others.

Miyoko quickly ran down a road, bare of cars and people, with the masked monster still closely on tail. She felt something wet running down her cheeks. She was….crying, crying because her first day in a new town, a place where she was sure she could start anew…was ruined...

She honestly hadn't even noticed she was crying until she felt them roll down her cheeks, which grew cold from the air hitting it as she ran. She turned down a dark back alley way behind some what looked like deserted buildings thinking she might be able to lose it. For a moment everything was quiet and Miyoko began to believe she was safe, the only thing she could hear was her breathing becoming heavy and her light footsteps that were gently tapping on the concrete underneath of her. All of a sudden a loud roar was heard, and heavy footsteps that made the ground shake were felt. Miyoko's heart began to beat so fast if made her heart ache with pain. She stopped when she came to the end of the ally….dead end….

She turned around, back now as close to the wall as if it were a second skin, to look up to see the ugly masked creature breathing down heavily on her. Miyoko pressed her back against the wall harder, hoping that it would let her phase through it. She closed her eyes wishing she was dreaming and she'd wake up safe in her bed, but sadly no use...

"Ready to die?" the masked monster asked, highly amused at her attempts to snap out of reality.

"W-what are you?" she managed to whisper out, opening her eyes to look into the creature's red glowing ones.

"I am a hollow, a lost miserable soul…..that is going to enjoy eating you"

Miyoko's eyes became emotionless and blank in fear as she stared face to face with the hollow.

"Why…why me!?" she tried to say in a soft calm whisper, that came out instead as a frightened sob as a rush of more tears placed themselves on her cheeks.

"Why…my dear. I guess I might as well tell you, since your going to die soon anyway. You're my target for tonight because you have a strong reiatsu or spiritual energy of a shinigami..." the hollow mused out in a low raspy tone.

"R-reiatsu? ...Shinigami?" she managed to ask as the hollows claws advanced towards her.

"Reiatsu, allows you to see things that normal people don't, like me and a shinigami is-" the hollow stopped talking and got straight to its point. "I'm very hungry, so the last thing I'm going to say is that you're going to be a very satisfying meal for me"

"Bu-" Miyoko was cut of by the hollow wrapping both claws tightly around her making her bleed due to its sharp claws digging into her soft flesh. Miyoko winced at the pain, as more tears fell from her eyes. Soon her vision became blurred and hazy until everything around her was completely black. The last thing she saw before blacking out was the hollow looking pleased, and mocking her very existence...


A/N: Well then how did you like it? i have to admit i'm ok at writing stories but i never am able to finish any. haha...erm.but this story out of my others will be completed. that i assure you!. please reveiw and NO FLAMES please.