Belief Forever
Staring out the window, The work I don't understand. How I wish I could just leave here, And fly to Neverland.
A place of lasting childhood, Where one ne'er grows old, With pirates, games and lost boys, And shelter from the cold.
People think I'm silly, For believing in Peter Pan. But believe I will forever, In Peter, and Neverland!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well, what do you think? This is one of the only poems I've written, so I'd really like some feedback. Please Read and Review. Thanks!
Staring out the window, The work I don't understand. How I wish I could just leave here, And fly to Neverland.
A place of lasting childhood, Where one ne'er grows old, With pirates, games and lost boys, And shelter from the cold.
People think I'm silly, For believing in Peter Pan. But believe I will forever, In Peter, and Neverland!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well, what do you think? This is one of the only poems I've written, so I'd really like some feedback. Please Read and Review. Thanks!